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« on: 07/01/2008 20:55:07 »
c'mon doesnt matter how bad the poem is just share it!!! heres one of mine...



When darkness turns to light,
gonna be alright,
no more time to fight.
It ends tonight;
darkness has shed goodbye.
no more tears,
no more fears,
everything's just fine.
done with hatred, finished with cutting,
dose the fire.
oceans breeze blowing through
suicide im done with you.
fuk it all, no regrets.
I say goodbye to these darksets
« Last Edit: 08/01/2008 18:55:25 by tony6789 »


 

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« Reply #1 on: 07/01/2008 23:39:15 »
Well done Tony.Thanks for your spirit.
 

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« Reply #2 on: 08/01/2008 18:55:00 »
anyone else? comon!!! =)
 

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« Reply #3 on: 08/01/2008 19:11:17 »
Tony is a Poem God
I can't write cos I'm a sod
His words are real and not so cheap
That's the best from me this woolly sheep !





QUALITY Poemage !! ::) ::)
 

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« Reply #4 on: 08/01/2008 20:19:32 »
My poetry is akin to a curry that's dear
Plenty of heat that is verbal diarrhea !





Lol....quality poemage !!


Let it be known that I LOVE curries by the way...I am proud that they are The UK's national dish !
 

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« Reply #5 on: 08/01/2008 20:33:16 »
My poetry is akin to a curry that's dear
Plenty of heat that is verbal diarrhea !





Lol....quality poemage !!


Let it be known that I LOVE curries by the way...I am proud that they are The UK's national dish !

Aren't you forgetting something...................begins with pine and ends with apple ;)
 

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« Reply #6 on: 08/01/2008 20:39:25 »
lol thx neil love ur poem lol
 

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« Reply #7 on: 09/01/2008 00:17:16 »
You stole that.. or did you just change the words up a bit like you did for that Hey there Dehila song? haha

and sorry I ai'nt so poematic
 

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« Reply #8 on: 09/01/2008 00:51:29 »
Tony is a Poem God
I can't write cos I'm a sod
His words are real and not so cheap
That's the best from me this woolly sheep !





QUALITY Poemage !! ::) ::)

I think you Made an error Sir, did you not really mean
 Quality Poemage, but rather "Quality Fromage" LOL
You are a Unique kinda gentleman dont'cha know??
 

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« Reply #9 on: 09/01/2008 17:53:27 »
c'mon doesnt matter how bad the poem is just share it!!! heres one of mine...



When darkness turns to light,
gonna be alright,
no more time to fight.
It ends tonight;
darkness has shed goodbye.
no more tears,
no more fears,
everything's just fine.
done with hatred, finished with cutting,
dose the fire.
oceans breeze blowing through
suicide im done with you.
fuk it all, no regrets.
I say goodbye to these darksets
Kinda sounds like the American Rejects song.
 

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« Reply #10 on: 09/01/2008 19:17:14 »
nah kraner i didnt steal it at all lol...in the aar song they say when darkness turns to light it ends tonight so i added that into the poem cause i liked that but otherwise nope its all me
 

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« Reply #11 on: 09/01/2008 19:40:07 »
My poetry is akin to a curry that's dear
Plenty of heat that is verbal diarrhea !





Lol....quality poemage !!


Let it be known that I LOVE curries by the way...I am proud that they are The UK's national dish !

Aren't you forgetting something...................begins with pine and ends with apple ;)




Atop the tree
The Apple of pine
Juice for the sheep
Gimmee it's mine

But if fruit be gone
What'll I do ?
Roam the wild
In search of Pine dew

Oh woe is me
If fruit is no more !
Lost is this sheep
I'll console in a wh-re .....oops !!....LOL




Quality poemage !!
 

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« Reply #12 on: 09/01/2008 19:42:11 »
LOL brilliant Hunky hunk :D
 

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« Reply #13 on: 09/01/2008 20:29:33 »
nah kraner i didnt steal it at all lol...in the aar song they say when darkness turns to light it ends tonight so i added that into the poem cause i liked that but otherwise nope its all me
Riight. Except I'm not Kraner.
 

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« Reply #14 on: 09/01/2008 20:55:12 »
hahaha love that neil!!
 

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« Reply #15 on: 09/01/2008 21:07:33 »
My poetry is akin to a curry that's dear
Plenty of heat that is verbal diarrhea !





Lol....quality poemage !!


Let it be known that I LOVE curries by the way...I am proud that they are The UK's national dish !

Aren't you forgetting something...................begins with pine and ends with apple ;)




Atop the tree
The Apple of pine
Juice for the sheep
Gimmee it's mine

But if fruit be gone
What'll I do ?
Roam the wild
In search of Pine dew

Oh woe is me
If fruit is no more !
Lost is this sheep
I'll console in a wh-re .....oops !!....LOL




Quality poemage !!

Quality indeedy!
 

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« Reply #16 on: 10/01/2008 01:13:12 »
Atop the tree
The Apple of pine
Juice for the sheep
Gimmee it's mine

But if fruit be gone
What'll I do ?
Roam the wild
In search of Pine dew

Oh woe is me
If fruit is no more !
Lost is this sheep
I'll console in a wh-re .....oops !!....LOL




Quality poemage !!

 

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« Reply #17 on: 10/01/2008 17:34:18 »




Atop the tree
The Apple of pine
Juice for the sheep
Gimmee it's mine

But if fruit be gone
What'll I do ?
Roam the wild
In search of Pine dew

Oh woe is me
If fruit is no more !
Lost is this sheep
I'll console in a wh-re .....oops !!....LOL




Quality poemage !!
Heh, very nice.
 

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« Reply #18 on: 10/01/2008 18:11:32 »
A short bit about heroin addiction. (truncated)


When the flame hits the foil,
and it all starts to boil,
you go chasing the dragons all day,
and that sickening smell,
that comes straight from hell,
lingers on every word you say.

Relax now,
the dragons have gone,
you've chased them all away,
but you know for sure,
it wont last long,
there be back by,
the end of the day.

Bee

 

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« Reply #19 on: 10/01/2008 19:31:24 »
that waz great mad man cudt hav sumed it up better
 

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« Reply #20 on: 11/01/2008 02:03:18 »
forum clicks and forum ticks
tell me now how many sticks.

"Testing"
 

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« Reply #21 on: 11/01/2008 16:25:01 »
A short bit about heroin addiction. (truncated)


When the flame hits the foil,
and it all starts to boil,
you go chasing the dragons all day,
and that sickening smell,
that comes straight from hell,
lingers on every word you say.

Relax now,
the dragons have gone,
you've chased them all away,
but you know for sure,
it wont last long,
there be back by,
the end of the day.

Bee



That was very good Bee. Thanks!
 

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« Reply #22 on: 11/01/2008 17:42:20 »
A short bit about heroin addiction. (truncated)


When the flame hits the foil,
and it all starts to boil,
you go chasing the dragons all day,
and that sickening smell,
that comes straight from hell,
lingers on every word you say.

Relax now,
the dragons have gone,
you've chased them all away,
but you know for sure,
it wont last long,
there be back by,
the end of the day.

Bee


Nice job.
 

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« Reply #23 on: 11/01/2008 18:09:41 »
Excellent Bee...That Mad Man !!...

How long is the full poem ?...I think we'd all like to see it !


 

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« Reply #24 on: 11/01/2008 18:13:07 »
Come on Peeps lets see more words
Typed on here or written in turds !





LOL...quality poemage!!...and ewe know it !!
 

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