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« Reply #125 on: 22/08/2006 21:43:05 »
Mirage...that is a beautiful poem.

I figured it was about a pet !...

You really have a gift....good on ya !

My pet cat  called pepper died about ten years ago !..he was 19 !...he was my best friend...so I know exactly how you feel.




This was my poem as tribute to Pepper:



Oh Pepper Pepper you are dead
You're in an urn propping up the bed  !

whajafink ?

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« Reply #126 on: 22/08/2006 21:51:12 »
Neil - I love it.  No matter what, in any circumstance you make me laugh.  

Mirage - that was beautiful.  That's exactly how I feel about my little dog, Benji.  Last year at Christmas, he was attacked by a German Shepherd and nearly bled to death before we could get him to the vet.  Recently he was bitten by a venomous snake.  Each time he's been seriously injured, I watched the life draining from him and I could see the fear in his eyes.  My eyes still tear up now, and I feel this tightening in the pit of my tummy when I think about how close we've come to losing him.  Our pets bring so much to our lives.  Anyway, I loved your poem.  Thanks for sharing.

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« Reply #127 on: 22/08/2006 22:07:55 »
Hello all.

Mirage, that is a beautiful poem.

neilep, well you made me laugh too .

Here is one I just wrote about a hidden secret love.

I hope you like .




I hate this silence
Strangling the patience out of me
All I need do is pick up the phone
Hoping that youíre there at home

So simple to say
So very hard to do
Obstacles of privacy ,a barrier of moss
Itís just that there are miseries, of gains and of loss

It feels like unrequited love
The wings are clipped of this iconic dove
Your too far to touch and my eyes can not see
The love that we share is forbidden in me

Pains.. the hurt, the urgeÖ
Walls of mist defined by a sea
Too far this distance it strangles me
Itís autumnal, Our love is a fallen leaf

And yet there is a joy
To celebrate this love between a girl and a boy
Though be it the miles are many thus far
This love is which,  can not be bar

So I smile a face of shimmering light
Cos in my day dreams and ones of the night
I touch your presence and feel your skin
And celebrate the love within


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« Reply #128 on: 22/08/2006 22:15:23 »
Thank you Neil, and your poem touched me deep inside, inbetween the fits of laughter though.

Carolyn, thank you. It is amazing how our pets really become part of us. And why not, they give us the most love we could ever want, and they always give it when we need it the most.
I always feel sad for everyone that has lost someone or their pet, you really do lose a part of yourself.

And cranial_implant, love it, reminds me of a time that I still carry the scar for. Brilliant piece.



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« Reply #129 on: 22/08/2006 22:37:59 »
Mirage....I am just so glad it made you smile..(and YOU too Carolyn)....I actually thought you might think it was in bad taste...and I was kind of biting my nuckles as I thought you might be offended.......So glad and relieved you are not chum.


It's true about my cat Pepper though (well..not the propping up bed bit !!...though he IS in an urn on my bookcase surrounded by photos !!)...but he was my bestest friend. I grew up with him and 19 is a really good age for cat.


Cranial...Like Mirage...you are truly gifted...

THANK YOU ALL for your wonderful poetry.

It really adds a human element to this site. Not that this site is staid or anything like that of course :)


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« Reply #130 on: 23/08/2006 05:31:53 »
quote:
Originally posted by neilep

Mirage...that is a beautiful poem.

I figured it was about a pet !...

You really have a gift....good on ya !

My pet cat  called pepper died about ten years ago !..he was 19 !...he was my best friend...so I know exactly how you feel.




This was my poem as tribute to Pepper:



Oh Pepper Pepper you are dead
You're in an urn propping up the bed  !

whajafink ?

:)

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I am so glad the last line was that instead of popping up in your bed[:p]

"Lo" Loretta
 

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« Reply #131 on: 23/08/2006 05:33:48 »
quote:
Originally posted by cranial_implant

Hello all.

Mirage, that is a beautiful poem.

neilep, well you made me laugh too .

Here is one I just wrote about a hidden secret love.

I hope you like .




I hate this silence
Strangling the patience out of me
All I need do is pick up the phone
Hoping that youíre there at home

So simple to say
So very hard to do
Obstacles of privacy ,a barrier of moss
Itís just that there are miseries, of gains and of loss

It feels like unrequited love
The wings are clipped of this iconic dove
Your too far to touch and my eyes can not see
The love that we share is forbidden in me

Pains.. the hurt, the urgeÖ
Walls of mist defined by a sea
Too far this distance it strangles me
Itís autumnal, Our love is a fallen leaf

And yet there is a joy
To celebrate this love between a girl and a boy
Though be it the miles are many thus far
This love is which,  can not be bar

So I smile a face of shimmering light
Cos in my day dreams and ones of the night
I touch your presence and feel your skin
And celebrate the love within


My head is not what it used to be.



Ian, I had no idea!!!  You are the bestest!!!  ;)

"Lo" Loretta
 

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« Reply #132 on: 23/08/2006 08:01:27 »
Ian, you amaze me at the depth of your feelings. The pain and agony deep inside of your soul for this very special person. You must love her with all that you are! That kind of love is so rare that you might feel it that once in ones lifetime if you are truely lucky! Your souls must be as one and your hearts must cry out to each other in desperation for that touch that feeling of fulfilment. Truely you are a lucky man to have such a deep love for a women that you could even manage through so many difficulties and obstacles and struggles and miles to keep that love for her strong and let it burn in your heart forever! I admire you and understand your pain.

Karen
 

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« Reply #133 on: 23/08/2006 08:06:28 »
I agree Karen, if only he had expressed his feelings before....I would have acted right...lol well maybe not...?

"Lo" Loretta
 

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« Reply #134 on: 23/08/2006 08:14:35 »
LORETTA< LOL I LOVE YA!!

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« Reply #135 on: 23/08/2006 08:15:58 »
;-) Don't I look innocent???  I better not type too loud as Denny is in the other room...hehe

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« Reply #136 on: 23/08/2006 08:20:01 »
Not too innocent!!!! better type much softer! Is he staying with you? I thought he left! Oh dear Girl are you alright????

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« Reply #137 on: 23/08/2006 08:28:07 »
He mentioned something after this weekend when he has a chance to work...it has made him spitting mad that I am working 2 jobs now...give me a break...I am up too many hours at night...

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« Reply #138 on: 23/08/2006 08:31:27 »
No kidding! What does he expect from you Loretta?

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« Reply #139 on: 23/08/2006 10:29:45 »
No kidding girl...he made an insulting remark to me...do you need the money, I will give it to you!  LOL  I wanted to say so badly...yes, kind sir and will work for food too...?  Instead I smiled and said, you know since you have been out of my life I have decided to take up more classes, but, the college shuts down at 10 and I am up way past then....so I decided to find a job.... I doth thinketh he expects me to wear down and go back to him and ask him for financial help or something...uh, like nooooooo!  LOL

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« Reply #140 on: 23/08/2006 10:42:26 »
Oh Loretta so sorry! I hate when money issues become a point of remarks during stressful times.

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« Reply #141 on: 23/08/2006 14:40:19 »
I think he only wishes as that would give him a stronghold...not and just want to pay these extra bills down...would like to pay off AMEXs within 5months...that is my goal...can't stand credit cards

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« Reply #142 on: 22/08/2006 20:30:54 »
I am sorry for your sadness and understand it all to well. You write beautifully and Thanks for posting such lovely heartfelt words.

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« Reply #143 on: 22/08/2006 21:51:12 »
Neil - I love it.  No matter what, in any circumstance you make me laugh.  

Mirage - that was beautiful.  That's exactly how I feel about my little dog, Benji.  Last year at Christmas, he was attacked by a German Shepherd and nearly bled to death before we could get him to the vet.  Recently he was bitten by a venomous snake.  Each time he's been seriously injured, I watched the life draining from him and I could see the fear in his eyes.  My eyes still tear up now, and I feel this tightening in the pit of my tummy when I think about how close we've come to losing him.  Our pets bring so much to our lives.  Anyway, I loved your poem.  Thanks for sharing.

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« Reply #144 on: 22/08/2006 22:07:55 »
Hello all.

Mirage, that is a beautiful poem.

neilep, well you made me laugh too .

Here is one I just wrote about a hidden secret love.

I hope you like .




I hate this silence
Strangling the patience out of me
All I need do is pick up the phone
Hoping that youíre there at home

So simple to say
So very hard to do
Obstacles of privacy ,a barrier of moss
Itís just that there are miseries, of gains and of loss

It feels like unrequited love
The wings are clipped of this iconic dove
Your too far to touch and my eyes can not see
The love that we share is forbidden in me

Pains.. the hurt, the urgeÖ
Walls of mist defined by a sea
Too far this distance it strangles me
Itís autumnal, Our love is a fallen leaf

And yet there is a joy
To celebrate this love between a girl and a boy
Though be it the miles are many thus far
This love is which,  can not be bar

So I smile a face of shimmering light
Cos in my day dreams and ones of the night
I touch your presence and feel your skin
And celebrate the love within


My head is not what it used to be.
 

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« Reply #145 on: 22/08/2006 22:15:23 »
Thank you Neil, and your poem touched me deep inside, inbetween the fits of laughter though.

Carolyn, thank you. It is amazing how our pets really become part of us. And why not, they give us the most love we could ever want, and they always give it when we need it the most.
I always feel sad for everyone that has lost someone or their pet, you really do lose a part of yourself.

And cranial_implant, love it, reminds me of a time that I still carry the scar for. Brilliant piece.



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« Reply #146 on: 22/08/2006 22:37:59 »
Mirage....I am just so glad it made you smile..(and YOU too Carolyn)....I actually thought you might think it was in bad taste...and I was kind of biting my nuckles as I thought you might be offended.......So glad and relieved you are not chum.


It's true about my cat Pepper though (well..not the propping up bed bit !!...though he IS in an urn on my bookcase surrounded by photos !!)...but he was my bestest friend. I grew up with him and 19 is a really good age for cat.


Cranial...Like Mirage...you are truly gifted...

THANK YOU ALL for your wonderful poetry.

It really adds a human element to this site. Not that this site is staid or anything like that of course :)


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« Reply #147 on: 23/08/2006 05:31:53 »
quote:
Originally posted by neilep

Mirage...that is a beautiful poem.

I figured it was about a pet !...

You really have a gift....good on ya !

My pet cat  called pepper died about ten years ago !..he was 19 !...he was my best friend...so I know exactly how you feel.




This was my poem as tribute to Pepper:



Oh Pepper Pepper you are dead
You're in an urn propping up the bed  !

whajafink ?

:)

Men are the same as women, just inside out !



I am so glad the last line was that instead of popping up in your bed[:p]

"Lo" Loretta
 

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« Reply #148 on: 23/08/2006 05:33:48 »
quote:
Originally posted by cranial_implant

Hello all.

Mirage, that is a beautiful poem.

neilep, well you made me laugh too .

Here is one I just wrote about a hidden secret love.

I hope you like .




I hate this silence
Strangling the patience out of me
All I need do is pick up the phone
Hoping that youíre there at home

So simple to say
So very hard to do
Obstacles of privacy ,a barrier of moss
Itís just that there are miseries, of gains and of loss

It feels like unrequited love
The wings are clipped of this iconic dove
Your too far to touch and my eyes can not see
The love that we share is forbidden in me

Pains.. the hurt, the urgeÖ
Walls of mist defined by a sea
Too far this distance it strangles me
Itís autumnal, Our love is a fallen leaf

And yet there is a joy
To celebrate this love between a girl and a boy
Though be it the miles are many thus far
This love is which,  can not be bar

So I smile a face of shimmering light
Cos in my day dreams and ones of the night
I touch your presence and feel your skin
And celebrate the love within


My head is not what it used to be.



Ian, I had no idea!!!  You are the bestest!!!  ;)

"Lo" Loretta
 

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« Reply #149 on: 23/08/2006 08:01:27 »
Ian, you amaze me at the depth of your feelings. The pain and agony deep inside of your soul for this very special person. You must love her with all that you are! That kind of love is so rare that you might feel it that once in ones lifetime if you are truely lucky! Your souls must be as one and your hearts must cry out to each other in desperation for that touch that feeling of fulfilment. Truely you are a lucky man to have such a deep love for a women that you could even manage through so many difficulties and obstacles and struggles and miles to keep that love for her strong and let it burn in your heart forever! I admire you and understand your pain.

Karen
 

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