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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #175 on: 25/08/2006 02:11:20 »
Upton, it is so good to see you are back and thanks!  Where have you been lately?  Missed your posts...have you been bad?  We do have a section for you to post on if you have?  LOL

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« Reply #176 on: 25/08/2006 17:30:53 »
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Your entrancing gaze beckons me closer to you
I cannot break free of a spell that I wish never to be broken.
All the while as the space between your eyes and myself gets smaller
Everything around you disappears.
All I can see are your beautiful eyes and your soul
Smiling and calling to me through them.
Soon our eyes are inches away from each other,
I find the courage to break free of them so I may see your beautiful face.
I cannot resist but to stroke your cheek and taste your lips
Soft and smooth I kiss your lips, another spell has been cast.
I am able to pull away to see you smile, as sweetly as an angel
And our eyes dance together as we share the joy of the embrace.
I now know that I will never forget that moment,
when the worldStopped and you were mine.


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« Reply #177 on: 26/08/2006 01:05:36 »
Magical Dan, pure magic!  My eyes glisten with hope, love, and faith, that just one day....awww...never mind...I am awake now!

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« Reply #178 on: 28/08/2006 02:53:25 »
The Seas divide us and torrents of storms are upon us, but our love remains strong and our hearts are not wrong.

   Obstacles have placed themselves between us, and yet our love has found another way, to be together sweetheart each and every day!

   The ocean tosses us about, like ships upon the sea and we are tumbled and crashed against each wave, my true love and me.

   Our love still stands strong, with fervent song, we must continue to be brave, allowing not our hearts to live as bonded slaves!
 
    Souls no longer lost and searching for the other, just holding on tightly and loving one another.

   This love cannot be denied us, because it lives strong, and deep within the hearts inside of us!

     Loves of the past have left their marks but none as deep as these, this love we have inside our hearts will indeed set us free!

     Let us take it in with every breath and hold it in so long that when we breath it out again it, it becomes a lovers song!

     Be still my heart; I have waited so long for your sweet touch, and now within my hearts reach, I tell you I love you so much!

     I feel your arms around me and see your face right now, I love you darling with all I am, and am kissing you right now.

      My fingers trace the curve of your face, and your mouth so sweet and warm; So tenderly I lay this kiss upon your lips, this morn!

       Love, these seas shall cease their relentless torrents and soon we will be free; To live in love forever just as we were meant to be!

       I Love You So My One True Love, and your heart is bound to ME, I'll keep it safe and gaurd it and KNOW it's the same as YOU do for me!

       So, now close your eyes my sweet sweet Prince and I am by your side, no worries of these wreckless seas as this love cannot be denied!


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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #179 on: 28/08/2006 03:28:58 »
Beautiful Karen, Beautiful

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« Reply #180 on: 28/08/2006 13:15:05 »


Wow..Karen that is so touching.


Love you lots

Helena  xxx



 

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« Reply #181 on: 31/08/2006 03:40:00 »
Thinking of special moments in time, where everything stopped revolving and time stood still......all except our two hearts that raced like a runner running up hill!

   Today things were boggled and so very unclear then your voice like a song brought me such cheer....for a moment my heart was totally in shock as I tried to respond I couldn't talk. I had so much I'd held back that I needed to say but all I could do was say I love you too!

    At that moment I wanted to stop all time, because nothing else mattered but your voice and mine. Just the love that I felt surrounding me then and encompassing me warmly and taking me in.
 
    My hands were trembling, my eyes could not see, but my heart felt you wholly as you sent your love to me. You spoke to me softly and held me so close, Knowing me well, tis what I needed most!

     Joy of my life my sweet love and friend you are my world until the end. The racing sounds of our hearts filled the air, nothing else mattered just the love that was there.

      Words that needed to be were but spoken in brief, as the most important words said, were left floating on the wind like a leaf. Filling up every hole in my heart that had been feeling so low, worrying about life and crying so.

      Tears of joy from girl to boy and love so strong that can't be destroyed. Our hearts are  strong and our love lives on, like a sonnet in time or a good love song!!

      I love you so much that my arms ache for you, and my heart cries out to be with you too... Alas this distance must keep us apart but it will never tear away the strings that bind our hearts!
 
      My wish for this most special day was to hold tight to your love so as never to Float away.......Whispers of I love you forever on the wind  traveling across miles to you once again!

Karen
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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #182 on: 31/08/2006 04:34:45 »
Awww, you make me want to fall in love again!  Beautiful very beautiful!!!

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« Reply #183 on: 31/08/2006 05:18:55 »
Loretta you are such a softy. I hope you are well.

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« Reply #184 on: 31/08/2006 05:45:18 »
You are the bestest Karen!  Your words speak such volume to my heart....Love is a wonderful thing...I am very well.  A renewed vigor!

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« Reply #185 on: 31/08/2006 08:43:27 »
Good I am so glad to hear it! Now we have some living to do so Off I go, to catch up with you girl!!! Don't run too fast as my ankles can't keep up the pace! LOL

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« Reply #186 on: 31/08/2006 16:23:06 »
Karen you are so amazing, love your work

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« Reply #187 on: 31/08/2006 17:20:47 »
Whats that, my running or lack of, or my writing! LOL Thanks anyways.. Nice of you to say! Its not hard to write something if its from your heart!

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« Reply #188 on: 31/08/2006 18:12:18 »
Well I did mean your writing, that's probably because I have never seen you run ;)

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« Reply #189 on: 31/08/2006 18:22:05 »
Good thing you might get injured while watching!!

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« Reply #190 on: 31/08/2006 18:25:16 »
Well I would get injured if I joined in. I have a very dodgy knee :(

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« Reply #191 on: 31/08/2006 18:36:58 »
OOH that doesn't sound good.  Sorry bout that , but I was being abit cheecky as I was referring to some equiptment that god blessed me with , have a way of being uncontroolable if you know what I mean!

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« Reply #192 on: 31/08/2006 18:40:32 »
I see, you're refering to your........like in the your embarrassing moment thread ;)

It's alright, my own fault, I was drunk.......yet again [B)]

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« Reply #193 on: 31/08/2006 18:48:48 »
Yeperoo that is indeed the reference, needless to say I don't do alot of running! Just trying to keep up with you all on here. I am a slow typist!

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« Reply #194 on: 31/08/2006 18:52:38 »
I sometimes get really confused with the keyboards. We have different types at work....the kind that is split down the middle of the keys......I know great technical term used......I don't care........leave I be........anyway, I'm usually having to go back on myself and delete wrong words or letters, sometimes both, sometimes none. You get the picture.......actually I just lost myself.......damn

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« Reply #195 on: 31/08/2006 19:08:14 »
NOPE you are not lost, I have the same troublles you know, always correcting and I love the green font so that takes time also!

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« Reply #196 on: 31/08/2006 19:24:02 »
Cool, I'm glad you could follow that, unfortunately I have no idea myself. Now that has happened to me a few times, it's like part of my brain shuts down and another part takes over. It sometimes leaves me confused but other times leaves me with a poem :)

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« Reply #197 on: 31/08/2006 19:26:44 »
You should post a new one.  They are really quite lovely you Know!

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« Reply #198 on: 31/08/2006 19:30:45 »
Thank you Karen [:X]

I came up with a new one a few nights ago, it's on my laptop at home. I haven't read it yet. But I do know it's not a lovely one, I was feeling low when I wrote it.

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« Reply #199 on: 31/08/2006 19:44:15 »
We all have those low moments, I write about them and mostly keep them for me, sometimes I will post them, I did one on the forum for a dear friend of mine who is still on life support and its been over a month and he has seen no changes. His wife cannot let them take him from the machine as she loves him so. I pray for him every day and for the family!!

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