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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #375 on: 18/10/2006 14:36:03 »
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Thank you sweetie. I was going to post it that day I had the dream but I forgot. I happened to be listening to the same piece of music today as I was walking down a hill, different hill this time, still wished I could fly though, especially at that point ;)

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Daniel,
I had that experience also once years ago, I was running down this grassy Slope as a youngster and later again as a teenager.. It was so real the flying part I did feel free it was awesome feeling... I felt just like you!!






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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #376 on: 18/10/2006 17:12:21 »
Both sad and lovely pieces Karen and Hadrian




quote:
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quote:
Originally posted by Mirage

Thank you sweetie. I was going to post it that day I had the dream but I forgot. I happened to be listening to the same piece of music today as I was walking down a hill, different hill this time, still wished I could fly though, especially at that point ;)

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Flying Monkey Slayer AKA The Big Cheese says:

Of all the things I have lost, I miss my mind the most





Daniel,
I had that experience also once years ago, I was running down this grassy Slope as a youngster and later again as a teenager.. It was so real the flying part I did feel free it was awesome feeling... I felt just like you!!






Karen



I hope to experience it again someday, or I could just learn to fly ;)

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #377 on: 18/10/2006 17:16:20 »
My Sociopath Cat

My cat is sleek and shiny
Her purr is deep and warm
Always happy never whiney
She stays in from the storm


My cat she looks so calm
Her face is sweet and pure
When she goes shes gone
On my bed she is demure


My cat sits upon my knee
Paws curled in and at rest
Being as good she can be
She is to me the very best

My cat will hunt and kill
Her claws sharp as pins
Creatures cry to her thrill
To a slow death she grins


« Last Edit: 18/10/2006 17:22:58 by Hadrian »
 

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« Reply #378 on: 19/10/2006 03:52:31 »
If this be the last cherry upon the tree
Then itís yours to have and ours to share
But fear not the consumption of the fruit
Cos from itís seed a new tree will shoot

Time will pass, seasons will change
And our tree will continue to surrender to height
And then, a day, weíll eat the fruit
From the tree that from a seed did shoot.

With these words you must form beliefs
That thereís a tree behind the rustling leaves
Itís a metaphor of a life in time
The tree is yours , the fruit is mine

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #379 on: 19/10/2006 05:10:45 »
Wow!  Hadrian...awesome pieces!  Karen, I am so sorry...that poem almost made me cry and I don't know why?  

Ian, as usual...great job!  Love the metaphor

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« Reply #380 on: 19/10/2006 07:28:25 »
HAdrian nice job.. I enjoyed your Cat!! as well as your others, thankyou so much!

Ian Your poem is really beautiful, I have read it over and over again and my heads fog has cleared and it is beautiful and very touching.. I truely and sincerely hope that Your heart is as true and beautiful as your poem.. You are truely a gifted and inspirational person...I am honored that you grace our threads with your beautiful verse... Thank you so much...... Your words here are so important and give hope to us all for true Love in our lives...

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« Reply #381 on: 19/10/2006 16:19:13 »
Thank You karen, Thank You Loretta,

yes, sorry mine is a little convoluted I suppose. They are written impromptu as I believe that the first draft is where the real emotion is, it is what has been produced as a direct result of raw emotion. Well, that's how it works for me anyway. It does not work for others but for me it's like a quick fix.

karen, I can only imagine the passion you have inside you.

Hadrian, like Loretta says, they are wonderful pieces. You are a talent with out a doubt.

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« Reply #382 on: 19/10/2006 16:51:30 »
Ian.. Writing through emotions is the only way I can write.. I don't think your writing was convoluted at all.. It was beautiful.. And I think every human being has the to ability and does possess passion! The extent to that passion may very from one individual to another, but it is there just lying beneath the surface, for others it oozes out all over the place LOL!

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« Reply #383 on: 19/10/2006 17:05:16 »
Thank you Karen,

It was because you earlier said that your head was clearing that I thought you found my words confusing. In reality, my poems are just Pensťes (thoughts) and so will naturally display some human error in rationale, but i like the irrational way, it's honest !

 To be truthful, these poems are not really for public display, they are just thoughts on paper but when I saw  the amazing work done by you people here I just stepped in and added my contributions.

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« Reply #384 on: 19/10/2006 17:17:16 »
I am really glad you did as they are truely beautiful.. I do hope you continue to visit here with your thoughts and writings.. We would so be sadened if we lost that...You are a great adddition to the site as well as the writing thread...!

I am sorry, you were right about my head as I have been under some emotional stress, This too shall pass..though and I will be fine... Thanks for your words I agree with the irrational way, they are more honest! Enjoy your day and be happy!


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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #385 on: 20/10/2006 03:33:31 »
Group Hug?  LOL  I feel like back in the good ole days when I used to do "informal counseling" at my job.

"Just Me, Lo" Loretta
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« Reply #386 on: 20/10/2006 04:15:35 »
YEPEROO, I need a hug Too!!!

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« Reply #387 on: 20/10/2006 07:50:38 »
okay sent you one...LOL  think I am going to go to bed early tonight or morning I should say Karen...2am...woo hoo!

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« Reply #388 on: 20/10/2006 10:17:22 »
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Group Hug?  LOL  I feel like back in the good ole days when I used to do "informal counseling" at my job.

"Just Me, Lo" Loretta






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« Reply #389 on: 20/10/2006 13:41:48 »
Those were nice, thanks Loretta and Gaia.. I layed down early too, didn't do me any good.. I have a Migrain and don't feel well...I hate them! better go..have a great day you guys..I will try to post today!

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« Reply #390 on: 20/10/2006 14:42:00 »
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Those were nice, thanks Loretta and Gaia.. I layed down early too, didn't do me any good.. I have a Migrain and don't feel well...I hate them! better go..have a great day you guys..I will try to post today!

Karen



Have you taken anything for it?


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« Reply #391 on: 20/10/2006 15:02:21 »
No, I have been too busy trying to throw out a bunch of old emails... I am hoping it will just go away... Fat Chance.. I hate pain meds as they make me feel dopey... Don't worry I have had them before.. Things had been so wonderful for so long I had had so few lately it was nice.. Now boom THey're back... I will be fine... Please no worries..

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« Reply #392 on: 20/10/2006 15:09:23 »
Of course I worry!!!

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« Reply #393 on: 20/10/2006 17:05:41 »
Really Please don't as I am very familiar with them.. I will be fine.. have to go to work.. If it is still lingering in the late evening I will take something... as then My defences will really be about used up.. I have dealt with them for many days at a time, one continuous one lasted for 4 days... So this is just the beginning, it will go away!!

Gaia have a good day! I have to get  to work.. Go poke fun at Dan and George for me....I will when I feel better eh!! Thank you for your concern..

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« Reply #394 on: 20/10/2006 19:53:24 »
Well I would   but since they don't seem to be around...

or even  

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« Reply #395 on: 21/10/2006 04:18:04 »
LOL  Gaia, you are a hoot!

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« Reply #396 on: 21/10/2006 04:32:40 »
You are too funny Gaia, Thanks for the laugh!!

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« Reply #397 on: 21/10/2006 09:27:10 »
You both sounded like you needed cheering up!

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« Reply #398 on: 21/10/2006 14:32:52 »
EMPTY AND DRAINED


So lost and alone, I sit here just waiting by my phone, if it's here beside me , I won't be alone.

Pain is all I feel, trying hard to keep my mind, but so many thoughts and memories I find!

Trying so hard to not be sad...thinking of this love and all that we had..am I hurt am I angry or am I sad?

I can't see past the pain..I feel so empty and drained. I come home and go to bed...can't seem to clear my head...

Writing these words I hoped would help, but the words contents so empty when they're for myself...

OH God help me..... I'm trying to be strong, everything I do seems to be so wrong!

I have failed at everything in my life so far.. I can't make sense of
what I have done...I need to hide my head or run..

What have I done? Why am I here? Wheres my heart and why so much fear?
Why such a cost? Why am I here?

My whole life has been a maze of disarray, should be no different now that's what I say!

Why so hard now to face the pain, it used to be easier when it rained...

Such a fog hanging over my head... tears and hurt and sorrow being bled.

I have no tomorrow my thoughts are all blank..My dreams are shattered and my future looks dank!

Memories remain of love and desire, my hearts still ablaze and my soul is on fire!






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« Reply #399 on: 21/10/2006 15:25:16 »
Karen you sound really down and in pain. I wish there was something I could do to cheer you up!

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