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« Reply #425 on: 03/11/2006 16:30:35 »
I don't know loretta I think that might be too much like fun for our young Daniel!! We wuffs you Daniel... 

Careful Karen, I'm getting a little wuffy which means it's HUMPING TIME!!!! muahahahahaha
 

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« Reply #426 on: 03/11/2006 16:58:56 »
Kisses to you DAniel, No worries! Who's afraid of the big bad wolf, the big bad wolf, the big bad wolf, who's afraid of the big bad wolf, certainly not me!!!
 

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« Reply #427 on: 03/11/2006 17:41:17 »
"Lil' Red Riding Hood"


Owoooooooo
Who's that I see walkin' in these woods
Why, it's Little Red Riding Hood
Hey there Little Red Riding Hood
You sure are looking good
You're everything a big bad wolf could want
Listen to me

Little Red Riding Hood
I don't think little big girls should
Go walking in these spooky old woods alone
Owoooooooo

What big eyes you have
The kind of eyes that drive wolves mad
So just to see that you don't get chased
I think I ought to walk with you for a ways

What full lips you have
They're sure to lure someone bad
So until you get to grandma's place
I think you ought to walk with me and be safe

I'm gonna keep my sheep suit on
Until I'm sure that you've been shown
That I can be trusted walking with you alone
Owoooooooo

Little Red Riding Hood
I'd like to hold you if I could
But you might think I'm a big bad wolf so I won't
Owoooooooo!

What a big heart I have-the better to love you with
Little Red Riding Hood
Even bad wolves can be good
I'll try to be satisfied just to walk close by your side
Maybe you'll see things my way before we get to grandma's place

Hey there Little Red Riding Hood
You sure are looking good
You're everything that a big bad wolf could want
Owoooooooo
I mean baaaaaa
Baaa


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« Reply #428 on: 04/11/2006 03:02:27 »
TOO cool Daniel, I love that old song!! I did not know who sang it!! I love that you found the words!! Owoooooooooo!!
 

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« Reply #429 on: 05/11/2006 01:02:16 »
TIME

Time is passing so quickly, My heart is sad at its demise, Our souls have joined together,allowing time to to never die.

My heart will be a fortress standing strong throughout the years.
Protecting all of our memories and staving off our fears!

I carefully remember and keep the words we speak, so someday day soon my Darling,
I will lay them at your feet!

How precious are our memories how sweet the words resound,
faithfully I'll make sure they will always be around!
 
I love you Yes, indeed I do, and time shan't change a thing, only serves
to make me stronger though the seasons they may change!

Remember Darling to Never doubt the strength that lies within,
for our love is like a fortress keeping us safe and warm my friend!

Time is passing oh so fast, but this love will go on living
even though the years may pass!

Loving you forever yes indeed is fine; Remembering it, is saving our
love from the hands of time!!

I will always Love you!

 
 

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« Reply #430 on: 05/11/2006 20:18:05 »
WOW !!...I'm always astonished by the passion in your poems Karen !

You just seem to exhude it !!



Ok..let me have another try...


I saw you by the pond feeding bread to a duck !
I could not help myself when I said , do you want to
........OKay !!

.....I'll stop it there !!

LOL...I bet you all knew as soon as you saw the word ' duck' where I was going with that !!

Karen, Dan, Hadrian, Lo......you got yourselves a wonderful little poetry thread going on here..

Thanks for this.
 

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« Reply #431 on: 05/11/2006 20:23:54 »
WOW!!!!
 

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« Reply #432 on: 05/11/2006 20:29:12 »
WOW!!!!

Do you mean WOW at the wonderful quality of my poetry *giggles* or WOW at how incredibly bad it is *giggles* ?
 

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« Reply #433 on: 05/11/2006 20:37:43 »
I am not sure! What I mean!LOL Very surprised indeed!LOL Maybe both!
 

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« Reply #434 on: 05/11/2006 22:08:29 »
It is Raining Here

It is raining here,there is a cleansing taking place..My heart is soaked, with tears.. Every corner I look I see your face!

The clouds have been so heavy, the rains have finally come and now the water has risen and I'm struggling to hold on..

The water is is washing all about my feet, and no matter what I do it seems that I'm just beat!

I'm paddling up stream and I can't swim, feel as though I am thrashing around and I just can't win..

I know I'm drowning, and it's my eternal fate, for love has come, but is it too late..?

This storm is upon me I am enduring.... fighting to swim, but sliding back again..loosing momentum I get up again.

Enjoying the rain..enduring the pain, and grasping for a rope.. I am trying so very hard to keep my heart afloat!

A rope, a hand, a hope to hold on, A dream of tomorrow, and days that are gone!

Something sweet, and soft and pure something that will help me endure.

Your Love I know is here, I just have to wait for this storm to clear! I just have to wait for this storm to clear......
« Last Edit: 05/11/2006 22:15:45 by Karen W. »
 

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« Reply #435 on: 06/11/2006 00:05:27 »
My baby so small and helpless, such joy and sweetness inside..
her tiny fingers held in mine, her breath so warm and sweet!
 
Sweetest smile and angelic face, strong and healthy and full of grace..

Remembering sitting in the sun nursing her and watching as her little face twitch as she fell asleep, and a dream brought on a smile... across her Angelic face.

My heart so full at this creation of mine.. this joy that has filled my heart for 25 years...

 In one night someone can take that angel face and and strike that which I have spent my entire life protecting and loving ...

Someone can abuse and hurt another soul so sweet in spirit that that is so un comprehendable to me... My baby.. My swet girl... My heart is breaking...

I am scared beyond scared that this can still happen..such violence and senseless hurt.. I am in shock and can't think straight...whats happened.. Oh God help me... I want to lash out at him.. but I want to understand...

How can this happen ..not again... not again...not again... not my baby girl.. God give me strenghth to not hate and to please give me understanding....

I have always kept my family safe and away from the violence and now , it's walked into my life again.. Oh God....Please mercy mercy mercy Please....
 

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #436 on: 06/11/2006 04:44:52 »
Beautiful Karen as usual.  I concur with Neil such passion girl!  I haven't felt to poetic lately...
 

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« Reply #437 on: 06/11/2006 05:12:48 »
OH Lorertta I love you whats going on with Robert ? I am sorry your down.. Can I help you?
 

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« Reply #438 on: 06/11/2006 06:11:26 »
?  Good question....I don't know what is going on with him....?  I wanted my friend Kev to come with me to Europe as we have had some fun hiking experiences...I wanted to hear him ooo and awwww, when we see a castle in Germany, his comments on the cuisine in both Northern and Southern Italy, Switzerland, and etc....that is why I am sad...I wish my friend could go....I may have to fly up and have a snowball fight with him in Minneapolis, MN....LOL 
 

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« Reply #439 on: 06/11/2006 06:23:06 »
I am sorry loretta.. I know you were looking forward to that! I wish he could go! Maybe something will change!

Well this is for all of you who suffered with me through that last writing entry I posted about my daughter.. I am so sorry, I usually keep that kind of writing to myself... I apologise so much! I was upset and trying to vent without upsetting my family and all I did was upset this family, I was not thinking clearly.. Please forgive me... I will post normally from now on as I need this forum to be happy and it is a great place to talk but that was more private and I should have kept it to me.. I do thank you for not scolding me.. I will do better! Thanks Guys!
 

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« Reply #440 on: 06/11/2006 07:11:27 »
Aghhhh, this is reality!  We need each other sometimes to help support us through issues...I would love to be the "happy fairy" so I could go zapping each one of us...but that would not be reality hon..
 

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« Reply #441 on: 06/11/2006 07:19:41 »
No it sure wouldn't! But its a nice fantasy!
 

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« Reply #442 on: 06/11/2006 17:20:05 »
LOL  Yes  it is...hehe
 

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« Reply #443 on: 06/11/2006 19:07:45 »
I am sorry loretta.. I know you were looking forward to that! I wish he could go! Maybe something will change!

Well this is for all of you who suffered with me through that last writing entry I posted about my daughter.. I am so sorry, I usually keep that kind of writing to myself... I apologise so much! I was upset and trying to vent without upsetting my family and all I did was upset this family, I was not thinking clearly.. Please forgive me... I will post normally from now on as I need this forum to be happy and it is a great place to talk but that was more private and I should have kept it to me.. I do thank you for not scolding me.. I will do better! Thanks Guys!

Karen, you are a wonderful woman and very dear to me, everyone here I consider a very dear friend. So when you hurt I hurt, I want to be an ear to listen to you and a shoulder to comfort you. In the words of John Mayall from one of his song 'When things go wrong, go wrong with you, it hurts me to'  :)  [:X]




WOW !!...I'm always astonished by the passion in your poems Karen !

You just seem to exhude it !!



Ok..let me have another try...


I saw you by the pond feeding bread to a duck !
I could not help myself when I said , do you want to
........OKay !!

.....I'll stop it there !!

LOL...I bet you all knew as soon as you saw the word ' duck' where I was going with that !!

Karen, Dan, Hadrian, Lo......you got yourselves a wonderful little poetry thread going on here..

Thanks for this.

Neil, luckily I wasn't drinking hot coffee at that point. But I may well want to bring in extra underwear next time  ;)  [:X]
 

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« Reply #444 on: 06/11/2006 20:13:36 »


Neil, luckily I wasn't drinking hot coffee at that point. But I may well want to bring in extra underwear next time  ;)  [:X]

HUGS THE DAN MAN !!!

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« Reply #445 on: 06/11/2006 20:22:59 »


Neil, luckily I wasn't drinking hot coffee at that point. But I may well want to bring in extra underwear next time  ;)  [:X]

HUGS THE DAN MAN !!!

xxxx

I need another undies change now  [:I]
 

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« Reply #446 on: 07/11/2006 00:07:19 »
I am sorry loretta.. I know you were looking forward to that! I wish he could go! Maybe something will change!

Well this is for all of you who suffered with me through that last writing entry I posted about my daughter.. I am so sorry, I usually keep that kind of writing to myself... I apologise so much! I was upset and trying to vent without upsetting my family and all I did was upset this family, I was not thinking clearly.. Please forgive me... I will post normally from now on as I need this forum to be happy and it is a great place to talk but that was more private and I should have kept it to me.. I do thank you for not scolding me.. I will do better! Thanks Guys!

Karen, you are a wonderful woman and very dear to me, everyone here I consider a very dear friend. So when you hurt I hurt, I want to be an ear to listen to you and a shoulder to comfort you. In the words of John Mayall from one of his song 'When things go wrong, go wrong with you, it hurts me to'  :)  [:X]




WOW !!...I'm always astonished by the passion in your poems Karen !

You just seem to exhude it !!



Ok..let me have another try...


I saw you by the pond feeding bread to a duck !
I could not help myself when I said , do you want to
........OKay !!

.....I'll stop it there !!

LOL...I bet you all knew as soon as you saw the word ' duck' where I was going with that !!

Karen, Dan, Hadrian, Lo......you got yourselves a wonderful little poetry thread going on here..

Thanks for this.

Neil, luckily I wasn't drinking hot coffee at that point. But I may well want to bring in extra underwear next time  ;)  [:X]

You convey my thoughts clearly and all here as well...
 

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« Reply #447 on: 07/11/2006 01:10:21 »
Well this is for all of you who suffered with me through that last writing entry I posted about my daughter.. I am so sorry, I usually keep that kind of writing to myself... I apologise so much! I was upset and trying to vent without upsetting my family and all I did was upset this family, I was not thinking clearly.. Please forgive me... I will post normally from now on as I need this forum to be happy and it is a great place to talk but that was more private and I should have kept it to me.. I do thank you for not scolding me.. I will do better! Thanks Guys!

As Lo said, we're all in this for each other.  You cannot protect people from your pain, unless you are also to deny them your pleasure.
 

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« Reply #448 on: 07/11/2006 05:11:30 »
I don't know what to say you guys....I am so dumbfounded right now...Just Know I love you guys all of you every single one of you...thanks for being here!!Thanks so very much!
 

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« Reply #449 on: 07/11/2006 14:10:30 »
Hey everyone.  You all write so beautifully.  Even you Neil.  I love your writing so much, it's easy to understand.

I don't usually post in this thread, but my son had a small writing assignment as part of his homework this evening.  He had to write a poem about something that happened or happens at school or home and use three of his vocabulary words.  With Nic's permission here it is:


End of the day
Kids teem with optimism
Armada of youth


I know I'm his mom and just a little biased, but is this kid talented or what????


Carolyn
 
 

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