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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #450 on: 07/11/2006 17:31:47 »
 Its ok to be biased like that..Carolyn, That was wonderful!
 

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #451 on: 07/11/2006 21:05:47 »
Bravo Nic!  Keep writing!  I may learn something from you!  Hey, write on how to master that benji dog....
bit his ear and hope he hears
Listen to the growl and only want to make him howl
wags his tail
he is about to go to dog jail...just an example then read it to him...see if the benji dog will know you are his boss!  ;-)
 

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« Reply #452 on: 07/11/2006 22:15:31 »
Carolyn,
Your son has a talent. Well Done Nic.

Hi Everyone. The new forum looks great.
What a surprise for me to see it like this.


Here is something new I just wrote.
It's a bit, adult !


No Title

Tempestuous friction, blatant indication
Vacant in the look, signing hazy whispers away
Look at me, as Iím inside you
Ferocious in this light of now
Sing this song with me

Rhytmn in elevation
Shout at the clouds
Itís a bloody revelation
Beneath your nails, you have my skin
Donít despair, when Iím within.

Turbulent hunger, blatant indication
Lost out of mind,  away the hurt.
Take my eyes and see reflection
Inside of you, thereís no rejection

Got you now, where I want you
Take this, take that, take all that I know
Thereís no peace this time in this course-inter
Summer solstice in our human winter.

Just a fervent heat that melts the ice
Again once more, because it's nice !



Ian
 

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« Reply #453 on: 07/11/2006 23:09:06 »
The unsaid word

Know this is to know or know
what you are feeling and seeing
Itís where the blue sky waits
She said because I do I know
This moment had always waited
It now comes to willingness yes
kissed by eyes and crows
As it rises up from beneath elated
A waiting faultless fault slides
the sole wilderness of manyness
now breath out held back sighs
For to grasp forever and slip
its power is growing like hers
She recites her lines of her roles
across the mountain bled hollow
her path just light steps away 
to love ones that in play follow
through the final act is ending
Her gaze her cast is will find
To set them free she knows
The way she always



 

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« Reply #454 on: 08/11/2006 05:14:09 »
Ian, That was the most erotic piece of poetry I have ever read! It was extremely beautiful, sensual, and so well written! I loved it... You are a very passionate man.. I have missed your writings in this thread! I look forward to reading more of your beautiful posts! Thank you for sharing this with us!
 

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« Reply #455 on: 10/11/2006 03:20:59 »
HAdrian, That was a very lovely post! I am glad you are posting more poems. They are quite beautiful!
 

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« Reply #456 on: 13/11/2006 04:43:32 »
The Wind and Rain
 
The wind is blowing rain against my window pane....I can see shadows from the Redwoods dance across
the dark yard as the moon lightly illuminates their mystical boughs in the darkness.
 
 
I feel the cold chill of the late autumn eve rush through my clothes chilling me through and through! My mind is busy sorting through so many different thoughts of you.
 
 
My hands cannot touch yours and draw heat from your flesh to mine, so I am left to reach out and seek these words, I have to see what I can find!
 
 
Perhaps a note which warms my heart and sets my mind at ease . Perhaps a picture of your
face that for sure can please!
 
 
I wonder as I sit here looking all through these pages for you... Do you ever do the same when your heart is feeling so Blue?
 
 
I've cried a million tears for you, tears of joy and sorrow, and now I choose to remember the love, and build on it for all my tomorrows!
 
 
 Oh I love you so, I know you know so silly to say it again, But sometimes late in the darkest hours I find those words to be my best friend!
 
 
I hear you tell me, your voice rings clear!  "I love you my Darling I will  always be here, never ever to say goodbye so smile and be of good cheer!"
 
 
The wind It echoes your voice to me of your love so strong and clear.. then it takes you my butterfly kisses, and blows away my fears..
 
 
The wind is blowing rain against my window pane....I can see shadows from the Redwoods dance across the dark yard as the moon lightly illuminates their mystical boughs in the darkness!
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« Reply #457 on: 14/11/2006 02:38:31 »
Then look out


There is little solos
in the long shadows
of the noonday sun
Now at last
that the bright light
in a winters day
has begun

have only the flame
in your open hart
distilled of love serene
and that only is
beyond my words
such is its failure
to mean

Syllables so crude
combine to point
the way that all feeling
gives no matter how
elegant they vibrate
they are nothing
that lives

Our very slight grip
with the lightest touch
can hold this star
terrifying of course
wonderful complete
all vastness indeed
compassionate power

I can not endure
to look with open eyes
in hope to capture
an exquisiteness
just a slight covering
of a endless moment
of rapture divine

And beyond that I know
is still more yet
its image is unseen
no mirror can ever
reflect that which is
but the perfect dream
so it is mine to be

who I am and with
each thought I strive
to lift up but a chance
to give what reflection
is in my simple gift
So be it all to all
and be it now

Let it blaze and set you
light till you are only
one will the one flow
then look out
into the endless bliss
within the deep beneath
blow that all can know
 
Because you have always?
Known it just as it is as is?
Can't you recognise?
What is different?
Now is always?
as it is
so be it as it is



 

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #458 on: 14/11/2006 06:59:01 »
HAdrian This is very nice.. I am drawn to it... I don't know why.. Its very comforting almost... why is that Hadrian..? Different poems leave me feeling different things.. sorrow gratitude love joy extreme emotions in poetry for me.. Always has been... Yours always intrigue me! Thanks so much for sharing!
 

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« Reply #459 on: 14/11/2006 11:12:37 »
Karen thanks

I speak to the unconscious mind directly. That is were I look to make the connection. It all in the neurology. As for the (our / ego) thinker itís not meant to be understood or rationalised that way I avoid making any comment about my work and what I may have used to start the process of revelling it because it takes in the wrong level, a level in which it can't be understood. Any time I have ever done this I always been sorry.

I know that others work to engage thought in the conscious sense, share imagery or experiences and that is wonderful too and for me it is not what I do. Not at the descriptive level anyhow. Yes at the surface I may connect to an internal reparation but only to create a gateway to a higher state or trance. I work to allow something new in the person who experiences the work. Itís not powerful because of me itís powerful because immense power of the inner most level of what is the true nature of the mind. But then you know this donítí you?

If I had any advice to those who want to get the most from what I do then simply  let go and what will make the experience of it even better is to be amused by the egos need to understand and be clever for doing so. Just as I have to do the same thing in order to let it out. I am like a viewer of a proton who dose not take credit for it existence or even seeing it in the sincere wish of not changing it from its ďisness so what you got was exactly what you needed and it was alreddy in you and that is why when moveing through the words you knew them before you became conscious of them. just as sometimes you have to wait for learning to surface, thats right
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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #460 on: 14/11/2006 14:47:25 »
Thank you hadrian.. You amaze me!
 

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« Reply #461 on: 14/11/2006 17:22:08 »
WOW !!..you guys !!

HADRIAN..it's awesome...does it take preparation ?..do you say to yourself..'ok..I'm gonna  write myself a poem how shall i write it ?..or do you just sit down and write spontaneously ?


KAREN ..awesome too....same question !
 

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« Reply #462 on: 14/11/2006 17:38:37 »
Well Sir! For me it is spontaneous as you can tell the quality of me poems are not great! I must say They are usually inspired by my emotions at the time as I write what is in my heart, rather then what is in my mind! There is a difference sometimes your mind wants to be like a sensor and if I were to turn on that sensor, then I would not be allowing myself the oportunity to express my hearts feelings.. Does that make any sense to anyone other then me?

Mine has no preparation as you can clearly see.. it just bubbled out in its's most crude form as it always does..Thanks for the kind words SIR Neil!
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« Reply #463 on: 18/11/2006 09:13:57 »
Our Dreams


I closed my eyes tonight and I dreamed of you...I looked deep within your eyes so blue!

 I held your hand and kissed your lips and in those moments I know what I have missed.

  Last night I dreamed a dream your arms around me tight..I felt your heart beat with mine and knew this love was right!

  I spoke your name so softy and you whispered back to me, oh I love you darling you mean the world to me.

  I let my heart believe it so my mind could hold on tight, and now I have you darling in the morning with the light!

  So strong my love for you holds on to each memory we make you see, so when the darkness falls around I know your here with me!

   So sweetly sing my love, share  tears between a girl and boy, for in this world of sadness love, we share a world of joy! 

   So close your eyes and dream of me and I will do the same, and when we wake upon morn we'll both call out each others name!

    With each passing day our hearts will be yet stronger then before, for in this love we magnify, We love each other more!

    One morning we will wake, and beside each other we will be, because we kept our dream alive and let our hearts be free!

    We allowed our hearts to dream like this, which others might see as sorrow, but we will enjoy the wonderful bliss of all of our tomorrows!
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« Reply #464 on: 27/11/2006 11:14:43 »
Four Photos

Tonight I gathered your pictures round, and placed them by
my feet upon the ground.

I glanced quickly across the lot, stopping once to find the
one I had forgot!

I sat down right in the middle, and arranged them all just so, then I
took a breath and breathed it in, and then I let it go!

Again I took a new breath in, and this time held it tight. Then I slowly
let the air come out it felt as if it were the calm of night!

I picked the first one up, and held it to my heart. I closed my eyes and
breathed again and new we'd never part!

Then I picked the second one yet again, and pressed it close to me.
The smile I saw upon your face brought my heart such glee!

The third one yes, was sad some how, your eyes so tired and strained.
I placed it next to my heart again to help relieve your pain.

The fourth one yet I took in hand and saw a worried brow, I placed
it next to my flesh once more, and I new you cared some how!

Now I placed those four photos back down upon the floor, and tried to
take a fresh breath in but I saw the other four.

Once again I picked them up all four, and felt so safe and sure, I placed
them close to my heart and knew our love was pure.

So each time my heart is feeling  blue, I find your pictures, pick
them up, and then I dream of you!

I close my eyes, tears subside, I smile in thoughts of you! My tears
become so joyful as the dream in my heart is not blue!

I keep our dream ever alive, holding it close for you. You've taught me to
love and give of myself, and how to guard our love and keep it true!

I love you too my darling, and I won't forget at your request, to remember
you love me back again, least ever I forget!

I love you so!




 

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #465 on: 27/11/2006 22:53:09 »
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww !!

Karen Mam.....that's so sweet !!

Ok...me have another go :




Roses are Green, Violets  they glisten
I must remember to visit...my optician !!


Roses are brown, Violets are in my mind
Methinks me must be colour blind  !!


Quality !!
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« Reply #466 on: 28/11/2006 03:48:24 »
Vast improvement on your last entry Sir! Bravo!!At least Daniel won't spill his coffee!


Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww !!

Karen Mam.....that's so sweet !!

Ok...me have another go :




Roses are Green, Violets  they glisten
I must remember to visit...my optician !!


Roses are brown, Violets are in my mind
Methinks me must be colour blind  !!


Quality !!
 

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« Reply #467 on: 28/11/2006 11:44:29 »
Have you seen the witness?
 
Have you seen the judgment?
Is it in the paper?
Will you be in torment?
Exposing your dirty caper
Have you seen the doctor?
Is he into healing?
You'd want to be a rocker
If can't get off the ceiling
Have you seen the prophet?
Has she told the fable?
Empty out your pocket
Put the cash on the table

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
Youíre going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

Have you seen the barman?
Is he wearing thin?
You never be a star-man
If you keep on drinking gin
Have you seen the keeper?
Has he shut the gate?
Donít disturb the sleeper
As he seals your fate
Have you seen the giver?
Has she left her mark?
Washed up on the river
The dogs donít even bark

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
Youíre going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

Have you seen the actor?
Man can you believe?
Trust is not a factor
He paid well to deceive
Have you seen the lighting?
Streak across the sky
Itís no longer freighting
Do you ever wonder why?
Have you seen the teacher?
Are the lesions all taught?
Did I hear you mention?
That the future just been bought

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
Youíre going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

Have you seen the reaper?
Smile upon his face?
No point in being a weeper
You stuck in this place
Have you seen the digger?
With his shiny spade?
So what do you figure?
Your debt will be unpaid?
Have you seen the angel?
Playing cards all night
He working out the angle
I hope its worth being right

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
Youíre going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

Have you seen the devil?
He giving out the soup
Its time to hit the metal
Its time to fly the cope
Have you seen the maker?
Or do you dear to look
There be no mistake sir
Your name is in his book
Have you seen the woman?
Is she giving birth?
Laid out in the gutter
She buried in the dirt

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
Youíre going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

Have you seen the leader?
Has he got his bribe?
Just another bleeder
Going along for the ride
Have you seen the leopard?
Blood on his paw
you will think youíre separate
Until the ice can thaw
Have you seen the runner?
Bet he never gets away
Hadrian got your number
So you have to go another way

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
Youíre going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

Have you seen the fighter?
Did I see a gun?
Baby hold me tighter
Iím a dead man on the run
Have you seen the holder?
Are the aces in his hand?
What that on my shoulder?
Can't you see Iím counting sand?
Have you seen the savours?
There coming for our soles
They come in deferent flavours
Just give up digging holes

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
Youíre going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime


 
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« Reply #468 on: 28/11/2006 13:07:06 »
Hadrian.. That is good as if you could put it to music! Maybe you should a guitar maybe.....very nice..indeed!
 

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« Reply #469 on: 02/12/2006 06:31:10 »
Yep,

well cool poetry Hadrian....that was a tour de force !!

man ...you're in the zone !!

Luff yours too Karen Mam !


Ok..here goes my effort..




I lay her down, this female scarecrow in the winter
My fetish brought me a scarecrow splinter !!



Well...me is getting better yes ?

*le sigh*




 

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« Reply #470 on: 02/12/2006 06:34:20 »
you should write a book a limericks! ;D
 

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« Reply #471 on: 02/12/2006 06:38:29 »
OOOOH I LOVE THAT ONE!!! Nice very nice...!
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« Reply #472 on: 02/12/2006 06:42:33 »
There once was a forum from britain
Whose members right here they were smitten
They posted all day
And  they posted all night
Then they read what others had written !!


Ta daaaaaa !!

night night !!!!
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« Reply #473 on: 02/12/2006 06:45:01 »
That is very good and me likes it alot! Your on a roll Sir!LOL
 

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« Reply #474 on: 11/12/2006 21:49:47 »
Hi Friends...

Always impressed by the poems here.

here's one I just made.




How do you measure such a thing that is felt ?
It fills you so tight that it tightens your belt
Despair and  a loss may occupy your state
But you know itís a time that you just have to wait

Thereís a bucket and my life feels like itís in it
Days becomes weeks and you measure each minute
Suffering a sorrow , youíve been shot by an arrow
Is there joy from someone that I may borrow ?

This plea that I have is answered each time
The bend of my life, becomes a straight line
And where there was low, there soon becomes high
Your friendship the Sun, that brightens my sky

And what started as sad , is now inside joy
This lonely midshipman now sings Ď ship ahoyí
I thought I was sailing this sea all alone
You took me from lost and showed me my home
 

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