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« Reply #50 on: 26/07/2006 22:14:16 »
Another from 2005, a few months later.

The Pain and The Pleasure


To banish the care, to banish the caution, to banish the thought,
To feel without care, that one’s senses are all,
That all is the moment, and tomorrow is not there,
To act with abandon, to act with passion,
To sense pain, to sense pleasure, and know not which is which,
To submit to pain, as to submit to love,
To submit to pleasure, as to submit to love,
That in this world, there is no other world,
That in this world of pain and pleasure, there is no world but love,
That all is banished but the moment,
That all is banished but love.



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« Reply #51 on: 26/07/2006 22:30:00 »


George - how wonderful and sensuous.


Love you lots.

Helena  xxx



 

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« Reply #52 on: 26/07/2006 22:57:50 »
Bravo George!!!  You really are good!!!  Teriffic Penning!!!  LOL

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« Reply #53 on: 28/07/2006 07:16:30 »
Darkness surrounds me here at this time!
I try to pray, but the words I can't find.

My heart is beating so slowly, my breaths are so shallow!
I feel his life over me, just like a shadow!

I try to cry out and my voice no longer helps me, the silence is so
loud that my own heartbeat is lost in the darkness that surrounds me!

I'm Feeling lost and afraid in this dark place I know, So I
must see with my mind for my heart won't let go!

I must not give in and allow it to take me,
I must hold on and not let it break me!

I have to hang on and climb up again, but Please God,
Please God, Hold tight to my friend!

                       ......Karen

« Last Edit: 06/02/2008 03:25:43 by Karen W. »
 

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« Reply #54 on: 28/07/2006 13:21:10 »
How blue can I get, you could ask my heart. Just like a jugsaw puzzle
it's been torn all apart. A million words couldn't say just how I feel
. A million years from now, you know, I'll be loving you still.
The nights are lonely, the days are so sad and I just keep
thinkin' about the love that we had. And I'm missing you and
nobody knows it but me

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« Reply #55 on: 28/07/2006 16:18:55 »
MY TRUE LOVE


My heart cries out for your love dear!I know not what to do!
My thoughts are eratic and jumbled and each one is for you!

My soul is so enraptured by your love that my heart feels as if it were on fire! I love you sweetheart, you are my hearts desire!

You are the breath I take in the moning air, you are the strength I draw from when your not here!

 My soul cries out to touch you, my love for you is clear, such joy and elation just floods me every time that you are near!

My heart is entangled within your heart too, and I can't tell any more which part is me and which part is you!

Like a beautiful dream you come to me now, awaking me  sweetly, by kissing my brow!

Oh be still my heart as I open my eyes, My heart cries out  as I realize, Tis but a dream this vision of you; Not what it seems, My hearts broke in two!

 Oh Love, that you hear my voice and come to me my friend, like the gentle rain thats falling down upon my head again.

Reaching out to touch your face, remembering your warm embrace; Feeling your hands touching mine, my soul is yours throughout all time!

Oh my love, my true love, I hold you close right now! I breath you in and hold you here a captive of my heart! I could never be alone love for we will never be apart!

I love you sweatheart, I love you true, my heart knows no bounds because of this love for you!

So be still my beating heart, and loneliness will flee, as I have you here inside within each memory!

                    ..........Karen!
« Last Edit: 07/08/2006 10:57:13 by Karen W. »
 

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« Reply #56 on: 28/07/2006 17:38:57 »
Bravo Karen!  I wish I could post more, but so many of them are about Denny...it makes me cry...so I will enjoy yours and others...beautiful!!!

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« Reply #57 on: 28/07/2006 18:57:25 »


Wonderful my friends both of you, you have excelled yourselves,

but oh so sad.


Love you lots

Helena xxx


 

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« Reply #58 on: 28/07/2006 19:14:40 »
Thanks Helena!  The pain lessens each day and I will post some more soon..I promise for you romantic peeps...lol

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« Reply #59 on: 28/07/2006 21:06:42 »


Glad you're feeling better-

look forward to some 'more' poems.


Love you lots

Helena  xxx


 

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« Reply #60 on: 26/07/2006 11:41:13 »



George - what a beautiful, sensitive dream........if only.


Love you lots.

Helena   xxx



 

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« Reply #61 on: 26/07/2006 12:03:19 »
definitely that moment was a dream....hehe

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« Reply #62 on: 26/07/2006 21:39:25 »


George - how beautiful, and how touching.


Love you lots

Helena  xxx



 

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« Reply #63 on: 26/07/2006 22:30:00 »


George - how wonderful and sensuous.


Love you lots.

Helena  xxx



 

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« Reply #64 on: 28/07/2006 07:16:30 »
Darkness surrounds me here at this time!
I try to pray, but the words I can't find.

My heart is beating so slowly, my breaths are so shallow!
I feel his life over me, just like a shadow!

I try to cry out and my voice no longer helps me, the silence is so loud that my own heartbeat is lost in the darkness that surrounds me!

 I'm Feeling lost and afraid in this dark place I know, So I must see with my mind for my heart won't let go!

I must not give in and allow it to take me,
I must hold on and not let it break me!

 I have to hang on and climb up again, but Please God, Please God, Hold tight to my friend!

                       ......Karen

« Last Edit: 28/07/2006 15:29:54 by Karen W. »
 

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« Reply #65 on: 28/07/2006 13:21:10 »
How blue can I get, you could ask my heart. Just like a jugsaw puzzle
it's been torn all apart. A million words couldn't say just how I feel
. A million years from now, you know, I'll be loving you still.
The nights are lonely, the days are so sad and I just keep
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« Reply #66 on: 28/07/2006 17:38:57 »
Bravo Karen!  I wish I could post more, but so many of them are about Denny...it makes me cry...so I will enjoy yours and others...beautiful!!!

"Lo" Loretta
 

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« Reply #67 on: 28/07/2006 18:57:25 »


Wonderful my friends both of you, you have excelled yourselves,

but oh so sad.


Love you lots

Helena xxx


 

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« Reply #68 on: 28/07/2006 19:14:40 »
Thanks Helena!  The pain lessens each day and I will post some more soon..I promise for you romantic peeps...lol

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« Reply #69 on: 28/07/2006 21:06:42 »


Glad you're feeling better-

look forward to some 'more' poems.


Love you lots

Helena  xxx


 

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« Reply #70 on: 31/07/2006 20:29:33 »
Here is something else for you to enjoy...

Eden in sight

a rhythm in unspoken words she remains
where the ordinary and the dreaming worlds meet in our hearts

bright chance whispers onwards, vestiges of a moment unlooked for she is

as there the skies opening amidst the clouds, she lightens the way as shadows gray retreat

reality begins to affect those visions once tentatively held

wondering should i have traveled to those ephemeral gates of desire
where glory does reside in utter mystery

i have sought paradise and in this keen feeling reside not alone.


"Lo" Loretta
 

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« Reply #71 on: 31/07/2006 20:40:06 »


Nice one Loretta.


Love you lots.

Helena xxx





 

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« Reply #72 on: 01/08/2006 03:38:05 »
Beautiful Freind, I better get busy !

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« Reply #73 on: 01/08/2006 04:47:15 »
Thank you Helena!  I thought I would take you and Karen back of out of your world of reality and have you swing to the otherside of my warped daydreaming mind one day...I wish I still had the poetry when each of my kids were born...but I lost a lot of poetry, short stories I wrote, and much more...from a fire in 1998...I did not write again until 2003 as it was hard to be motivated to do so again...but here I am, writing all over again.  Thanks Karen!  You guys are the best...I may have to write something specific for you guys...hmmm...getting ideas

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« Reply #74 on: 01/08/2006 06:23:03 »
Loretta, Writing is such good therapy and it doesn't cost as much as a doctor, all though they have their place!!!!

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