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« Reply #550 on: 13/01/2007 17:51:09 »
Thanks Karen ,

I liked the poems posted in here by you /  mirage and anothersomeone ..
beautiful and passionate


Emma That is really beautiful! I am glad you are posting in the writing thread.. It needs some new work!
 

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« Reply #551 on: 13/01/2007 17:55:11 »
Thanks ema.. Welcome to the site I hope you continue to add to our writing thread.. I think it is a very beautiful thread! Your poem is very heartfelt and speaks beautifully of love..and passion also.. Welcome! welcome!
 

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« Reply #552 on: 13/01/2007 18:36:26 »
I'm falling into a dark whole. Deeper and deeper I feel it pull.
Darkness surrounding me, I can't find the walls, I'm struggling to grasp on to stop this fall.

My heart is aching, my heads in a spin.. what once was so real, has been lost again. Thoughts just jumbled and spread all about tangling my feelings so I just want to shout!

Lost dreams, wishes, hopes and strife are now just tangled up threads in the forum of my Life. Reeling and spinning I can't slow it down..frightened so of hitting the ground..


Struggling to find a smile in each day. Hoping that God will show me away. Seeking apath to to cling to some way in hopes that my dreams will come back to me one day!

Darkness darkness all around dreams of a life time crashing down...

 

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« Reply #553 on: 24/01/2007 17:40:14 »
Rose Petals

Rest, a break, a sheltered day, a little place to hide away!
A time out, some me time, a little smile and some free time.

Protected, covered, hidden away, camoflaged behind another day.
Restless worry, endless love, joy and sadness, all of the above.

Darkness and light, are my old friends, Please help me find my way back home to you again...

Stolen moments lost in time with my heart, that I can't find..a quiet place to rest my head, no comfort in a warm soft bed...

Sweet memories of a love so true, and sweet dreams that are shared by two.. filling my eyes with tears of joy treasuring a love between a girl and a boy.

Seasons come and seasons go and friendship florishes and love still grows..take the petal from the rose, the sweetest frangrance from it flows...

And as they fall one by one they wither and dry beneath the sun, the pedals and what remains are sweet and warm like a summer rain..

The fragrance strong, still in my mind a treasure to hold through out all time...

Thus flows this joy within our hearts, and a perfect knowledge of what friendship starts.. 


 

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« Reply #554 on: 01/02/2007 06:54:04 »
Look At Me

Look at me a puppet on a string, look at me I can dance and sing!

Look at me dancing 'round, look out world it's just a clown.

Look at me dancing,reeling,spining; watch out, the world is winning!

Look at me down on the floor. I've spun round,and can stand no more;

Look at me, skinned my knees, funny thing that's not what bleeds!

Look at me, just a clown, nobody knows,that I've fallen down.

Look at me, look at me, don't look too close, my tears you'll see.
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« Reply #555 on: 25/02/2007 16:16:16 »
Grey Skies

Billowing clouds lingering in space,
raindrops that fall on a tear stained face.

Grey skies are dark, the light has been lost.
I've given my heart God, but at what cost.

I'm struggling so hard just to hold on.
I have done my best but now everythings gone.

I took a wrong turn, somewhere in the road,
and now this burden has become such a heavy load.

Emptiness rules my world, and my heart is filled with pain.
So much misery in this pouring rain.

I cannot seem to find my way there, and I find myself
praying for an end to the the day here..

Idle hands restless soul, dreaming of the time when I'll go home.
Numbing madness,constant and real, I'm not sure, of what I feel.

Blind leading the blind is what I see,
is there no end to this misery?

 


 

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« Reply #556 on: 25/02/2007 20:07:59 »
that was lovely
 

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« Reply #557 on: 25/02/2007 20:26:47 »
Thanks Hadrian..
 

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« Reply #558 on: 03/03/2007 20:55:19 »
Letting Go

Closing a door, on love and dreams,
so many feelings about different things.

My heart is crying, I'll be OK, but somehow,
somewhere, I have to find my way.

It is harder then I ever knew,
letting go of this love I share with you.

In Reality can't you see,
I can't really let it go, it's part of me.

I will Try and do my best,
to end it now, and then to rest!

Sweet dreams and sleep are yet to come,
my heart will bleed no more.

I will do my best to sail away my love from you,
and rest it on distant shore.

And place it in a bottle tight,
and move away and close this door.

and move away and close this door....
 





 





 
 

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« Reply #559 on: 03/03/2007 21:21:14 »
Look At Me

Look at me a puppet on a string, look at me I can dance and sing!

Look at me dancing 'round, look out world it's just a clown.

Look at me dancing,reeling,spining; watch out, the world is winning!

Look at me down on the floor. I've spun round,and can stand no more;

Look at me, skinned my knees, funny thing that's not what bleeds!

Look at me, just a clown, nobody knows,that I've fallen down.

Look at me, look at me, don't look too close, my tears you'll see.

Beneath that smile:

Beneath your smile,
something sad and blue.
Beneath that smile,
you know it's true.

I cry for the pain,
I feel when I look.
Into your pretty eyes,
and see joy mistook.

How strong you are,
to hide the pain.
And spare us the saddness,
with the joy you fain.

So with caring I speak,
and extending my hand.
Lets share our hurting,
and our friendship band.

For you Karen
..................Infy
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« Reply #560 on: 03/03/2007 21:42:10 »
That was nice infy thanks.
 

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« Reply #561 on: 03/03/2007 22:41:00 »
Wonderful poetry you guys...
 

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« Reply #562 on: 03/03/2007 23:02:44 »
Thanks Neily! Hugs
 

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« Reply #563 on: 04/03/2007 00:50:06 »
very nice  [^]
 

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« Reply #564 on: 04/03/2007 02:35:44 »
Thanks Hadrian. for everything..always..
 

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« Reply #565 on: 11/03/2007 03:56:48 »
Oh heart of mine oh how much I know thy will,
Please be strong for me to keep love still.

Please don't stop and fail me in my hour of need,
Oh heart of mine please cease this awful bleed.

Be strong, and beat, and help me now,
I need your strength to show me how.

Oh friend, my dear friend, my heart my soul,
My day is over my body is cold.

Each memory I hold so close to me now,
In a treasure forever to keep some how.

Oh love so strong in my heart today,
Yet, when faced with fear, I ran away!

Oh heart be strong it won't be long,
This ache will soon sing a new song.

Sweetly sing your memory
Sweetly speak your name to me.

Memorise each curve of your face and,
And remember always your my saving grace.

Oh Love so sweet my heart cries out,
I will treasure you ever and with never a doubt!

I will love you always,
and from the mountain tops I'll shout!

You are my Love,
There is no doubt!
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« Reply #566 on: 11/03/2007 18:25:15 »
Thanks you for posting this beautiful poem for us to read and our hearts to be fill with


 

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« Reply #567 on: 11/03/2007 20:29:26 »
I too am very touched by this poem Karen.
 

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« Reply #568 on: 11/03/2007 20:35:52 »
Thanks Hadrian and Neil, that is very nice of you to say.
 

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« Reply #569 on: 11/03/2007 22:24:43 »
Thanks Hadrian and Neil, that is very nice of you to say.

yes it is..isn't it !!...


It's very nice for me to say
How nice the words I've read today.....................are !!




Supreme poemage quality !
 

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« Reply #570 on: 11/03/2007 23:27:07 »
Thanks Hadrian and Neil, that is very nice of you to say.

yes it is..isn't it !!...


It's very nice for me to say
How nice the words I've read today.....................are !!




Supreme poemage quality !

THE Supremist poemage you have ever seen,
upon these pages you will bring!!

And when you do, we'll cheer for you,
especially in those sexy shoes!!!

We'll hear the thumps from the quadrapeds Pumps,
and we'll expect some poemage to follow.

For the quality there in, will be followed by grins,
and our forum filled with laughter and not hollow! LOL

Your turn!!
 

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« Reply #571 on: 12/03/2007 00:56:08 »
For whom my heart waits:

Life is such a lonely thing,
second guessing destinies plan.
Wishing for the best each day,
remaining ever, the solitary man.

With whom can I share today,
to whom shall I give trust?
I shout at the top of my lungs,
surely someone cares, they must!

Again I ask, does anyone hear?
Then returns my echo to me.
Proving only, once and for all,
how alone, I shall forever be.

.....................Infy

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« Reply #572 on: 12/03/2007 01:25:54 »
There's been a mighty storm blowing out side of my window.
The trees swayed back and forth back and forth.

The sounds of the strain from their mighty branches echoed
through my soul, like the sounds of your voice in my ears.

The wrestless leaves blowing to and fro crashing against the pane and pressing at the glass,and flailing their fragile remains, as if crying to come in.

The sounds of the scratching as they scrape at the window, unable to control their course.

Echoing my own thoughts, irrational, and lost, struggling with this human madness that has left me with such a loss.

A brightness shining ever so dimly; in the sky I see some light! a ray, perhaps a trickle of the sunshine that I've lost.

Warmth fills the air, winds cease their force, Tree's gently calming. They sway much lighter in due course.

My mind now like a garbled tablet of words, mixed all around, much like the leaves that were blowing, but now lay still upon the ground.   
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« Reply #573 on: 12/03/2007 01:29:26 »
For whom my heart waits:

Life is such a lonely thing,
second guessing destinies plan.
Wishing for the best each day,
remaining ever, the solitary man.

With whom can I share today,
to whom shall I give trust?
I shout at the top of my lungs,
surely someone cares, they must!

Again I ask, does anyone hear?
Then returns my echo to me.
Proving only, once and for all,
how alone, I shall forever be.

.....................Infy



That is a very beautiful heartfelt piece Infy.Thank you for sharing it! Its funny we posted those poems at the exact same time!
 

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« Reply #574 on: 12/03/2007 01:39:50 »
The deception of coincidence:

Nothing in this life just happens Karen.
Each drop of rain has it's place to rest.
Every thought will find it's own answer,
and every kindness, it's own reward.

..................Infy
« Last Edit: 12/03/2007 01:45:37 by Infamous »
 

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