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« Reply #900 on: 29/04/2012 06:29:38 »
Oh when doctor Layton is speaking about how many particles are in the universe, that is really 567d51bbc32c98f1c1d5dd389575de16.gif, not 1080... that would be a small amount indeed !!! :)

Ok..that sounds good..Did you go back and edit it..so you remember it?

No, I didn't I'll fix it now.
 

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« Reply #901 on: 29/04/2012 06:34:08 »
Lets go with part three I would get too lost skipping around...Lol...

Cool..its good to correct as you go, so as to not have so much to do during your final drafts.. This way the changes are fresh in your head if you need to add or remove things.
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« Reply #902 on: 29/04/2012 06:36:15 »
Lets go with part three I would get too lost skipping around...Lol...

Cool..its good to correct as you go, so as to not have so much to do during your final drafts.. This way the changes are fresh in your head if you need to add or remove things.

Oh this is a story I wrote a while back Karen... I wrote it on paper you see :)
 

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« Reply #903 on: 29/04/2012 06:46:25 »
Well you have done a fine job... Make sure you publish it..  its very good so far. You tell a good story and I feel like I am reading a script and can see this being made into a nice film... Good ideas so far! I would buy a copy.. Lol.. I like Science-fi...
 

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« Reply #904 on: 29/04/2012 07:43:27 »
You Deserve the praise..very entertaining story.. I can't wait to read the rest.. thank you for sharing.. it was nice to get my mind off some other things tonight.. thanks for that!
 

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« Reply #905 on: 06/05/2012 12:50:28 »
I have written only half of it so far Karen. I appreciate your patience, I have just been quite busy the last week.
 

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« Reply #906 on: 06/05/2012 13:15:04 »
Well, I'd say as well as you write in this story..that you should be very busy writing tons more.. it is a very good story line that moves along nicely....you should complete this story and make sure you get a copyright on it and start many more or at least your next one.. I think as long as you keep it simple entertaining and moving with such nice detail and story line, characters etc,   that you will have no problem publishing....!  Good, good luck,  and I will eagerly await and expect to be able to read the finished product very soon!! BRAVO!
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« Reply #907 on: 06/05/2012 16:49:10 »
My son is an aspiring writer, just bought him "Writer's Market 2012". Cobwebs already accumulating. Also recommended Amazon, who will help you to self-publish. A friend did that successfully, his book (a suspense thriller) is still selling - very modestly - at Amazon.
 

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« Reply #908 on: 06/05/2012 17:28:57 »
That is very encouraging. I HOPE YOUR SON PERSEVERES.... thats cool...
 

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« Reply #909 on: 08/05/2012 09:42:42 »
 :-\   
I want to travel . Now I  have two choices  and I don't know where to go



 

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« Reply #910 on: 05/10/2013 09:07:45 »
Freedom he sought, handlebars gripped
So short life's laughter and spirit now ripped
On two wheels in Devon a young soul rides
In Heaven burning rubber another soul slides.

by Andrew K Fletcher
 

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« Reply #911 on: 06/10/2013 22:51:16 »
Freedom he sought, handlebars gripped
So short life's laughter and spirit now ripped
On two wheels in Devon a young soul rides
In Heaven burning rubber another soul slides.

by Andrew K Fletcher
THIS IS VERY GOOD ANDREW... It has very nice flow and rhythum! AND I LOVE IT! Its.
 Nice to see you and others posting I really missed this thread... its a lovely thread..
Daniel and others should take up pen in hand once more in contribution to this lovely
thread... Thanks for sharing with all of us Andrew.I hope you have been well....  xxxxxc

 

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« Reply #912 on: 15/10/2013 09:43:29 »
Pete, Jim, etc, here is the writing thread! Enjoy!
 

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« Reply #913 on: 20/11/2013 21:54:20 »
Upgraded version of old rhyme:

Scintillate, scintillate minuscule asteric,
How I ponder your nature generic,
Set in the firmament, oh so high,
Like a carbonaceous gemstone in the sky.
 

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« Reply #914 on: 24/11/2013 14:29:00 »
I LOVE IT A VERY BRIEF BUT VERY NICE PIECE ABOUT THAT BEAUTIFUL STAR!
                   
 "STAR LIGHT STAR BRIGHT"

STAR LIGHT, STAR BRIGHT,
FIRST STAR I SEE TONIGHT.
I WISH I MAY, I WISH I MIGHT,
HAVE THE WISH, I WISH TONIGHT.

ANONYOMOUS

Source: The Dorling Kindersley Book of Nursery Rhymes (2000)



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« Reply #915 on: 10/11/2014 00:44:38 »
I don't know how this thread has appeared on my list of 'my' topics????
 

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« Reply #916 on: 10/11/2014 02:26:59 »
If you have ever posted and a new post is added it should I believe add it to your list as a topic you were watching. Have you posted in here before Annie123?
 

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« Reply #917 on: 10/11/2014 03:10:35 »




So long the nights can linger on,
fermenting memories, as years roll along.

Restless souls still bound by love,
Relive it nightly, under stars above.

take heart in the knowing, loves gold,
like a fine wine, fermented and old!
 
So does love grow, when it turns not to mold.
giving way to "new" years yet left to unfold...

The years spent, in daunting relent..
didn't tame the fires, that twixt them, were lit.

Simmering below, so not to be seen...
Still lies a lifetime, of loves sweet dreams.

Now priceless as gold,
the stories two fold...

one only need read, the lines in between.
To know that the fruits being picked from the tree..
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