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« on: 01/12/2009 23:06:47 »
So this will be my second poetry thread... Karen made some excellent ones last time, and the topic we seemed to adhere to was love.

This time let it be its antithesis... hate.  [:(!]


 

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« Reply #1 on: 01/12/2009 23:10:32 »
I hate the way you smile at me,
making me feel like misery,

as though she does not care,
Though at thought my heart could not bare,

I hate the way he ruins my smile,
as though the love is set on trials,

I wonder sometimes whether it's worth it,
Or end it and jump into the bottomless pit,

I hate it when she tells me i'm wrong,
but she loves me when i sing her a song,

on the wildest of expectations,
she surprises on her illuminations,

I hate it when he gives me a shove in the back,
sometimes i drain, i just want to hit the sack,

but i like it when he joins with me,
and telling the rest a little too free...

so i hate it.
 

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« Reply #2 on: 02/12/2009 02:11:45 »
right then


she thinks she is so clever
with the nasty little back chat
remember that i am the boss
ill make her pay for that

if you go fishing for this asshole
you will net a fine catch
hear head is full of sawdust
and i have a match
 

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« Reply #3 on: 02/12/2009 02:13:57 »
right then


she thinks she is so clever
with the nasty little back chat
remember that i am the boss
ill make her pay for that

if you go fishing for this asshole
you will net a fine catch
hear head is full of sawdust
and i have a match

Bravo... not bad.
 

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« Reply #4 on: 02/12/2009 02:20:22 »
the price for my stupidity
a noose around my neck
the next time that she sais goodday
be sure you go and check

mislay your smile this disacriphile
is turned on by your size
when she has her eye on you
good fortune and time flys
 

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« Reply #5 on: 02/12/2009 02:29:00 »
the price for my stupidity
a noose around my neck
the next time that she sais goodday
be sure you go and check

mislay your smile this disacriphile
is turned on by your size
when she has her eye on you
good fortune and time flys

This is personal. I get your feelings, not me, but the one you leant out your hardrive?
 

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« Reply #6 on: 02/12/2009 02:35:30 »
too bloody true
 

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« Reply #7 on: 02/12/2009 02:44:07 »
the spiteful ignorance
the verbal diarrhoea
the awful intolerance
the clients a pain in the rear

 

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« Reply #8 on: 02/12/2009 02:49:07 »
and more and more the frenchies ask
i want some mre and now
you upity little french man
you wife the face of a sauw

mai oui cou cou
fronchmon say evident, je demand le manager
jooost pas que le plate le plate
arive eh don mon coue

tryed to do that phoneticly might of failed


 

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« Reply #9 on: 02/12/2009 03:03:39 »
too bloody true
Then let the ego rip ;)
 

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« Reply #10 on: 02/12/2009 03:32:40 »
Poverty of hate.



Hate is a hot iron,
that can sear the mind.
With coals of envy,
and wounds of many kind.

The price is much higher,
when one chooses to hate.
Than that for the hated,
and greater misery the fate.

So choose well your course,
and remember there's a price.
For every contemptous rage,
and every tortured vice.

................Ethos



 

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« Reply #11 on: 02/12/2009 03:33:52 »
Very good
 

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« Reply #12 on: 02/12/2009 03:41:07 »
Very good
Thank you sir, I honor your critical review.
 

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« Reply #13 on: 02/12/2009 03:50:10 »
I like your use of the extended metaphor, not forgetting of course the rhythm too.
Very good 2
 

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« Reply #14 on: 02/12/2009 08:17:55 »
So this will be my second poetry thread... Karen made some excellent ones last time, and the topic we seemed to adhere to was love.

This time let it be its antithesis... hate.  [:(!]

So did you..

 I don't know how to write of hate.. so I will read this instead of participating.
 

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« Reply #15 on: 02/12/2009 09:33:06 »
So this will be my second poetry thread... Karen made some excellent ones last time, and the topic we seemed to adhere to was love.

This time let it be its antithesis... hate.  [:(!]

So did you..

 I don't know how to write of hate.. so I will read this instead of participating.

Hate is a natural human emotion for some of us :) One that we never or (would rather not) put a tag on called ''hate'' - displeased... is that lighter, because if anything, you're very good at poetry.
 

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« Reply #16 on: 02/12/2009 09:40:45 »
No, I know hate, but also know the destruction it brings to my heart and life if I allow it to live inside of myself... like a egg that rots from the inside out..it is awful.
« Last Edit: 02/12/2009 19:18:09 by Karen W. »
 

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« Reply #17 on: 02/12/2009 12:31:31 »
No I know hate but also know the dstruction it brings to my heart and life if I alow it to live inside of myself.. like a egg that rots from the inside out..it is awful.

good answer
 

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« Reply #18 on: 02/12/2009 13:49:58 »
So this will be my second poetry thread... Karen made some excellent ones last time, and the topic we seemed to adhere to was love.

This time let it be its antithesis... hate.  [:(!]

So did you..

 I don't know how to write of hate.. so I will read this instead of participating.

Ewe could of written:



I know not how to write of hate
I'll just read not participate



 

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« Reply #19 on: 02/12/2009 13:50:27 »
All these poems here are fantastic !....ewe are all very talented indeed !
 

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« Reply #20 on: 02/12/2009 14:10:54 »
All these poems here are fantastic !....ewe are all very talented indeed !

*Big smiles* - YES! We are. Everyone is. I am so happy this thread was made now.
 

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« Reply #21 on: 02/12/2009 14:11:29 »
So this will be my second poetry thread... Karen made some excellent ones last time, and the topic we seemed to adhere to was love.

This time let it be its antithesis... hate.  [:(!]

So did you..

 I don't know how to write of hate.. so I will read this instead of participating.

Ewe could of written:



I know not how to write of hate
I'll just read not participate





lol - VG
 

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« Reply #22 on: 02/12/2009 19:19:38 »
No I know hate but also know the dstruction it brings to my heart and life if I alow it to live inside of myself.. like a egg that rots from the inside out..it is awful.

good answer
LOL...I am glad that it was satisfactory and to your liking!
 

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« Reply #23 on: 02/12/2009 19:23:45 »
So this will be my second poetry thread... Karen made some excellent ones last time, and the topic we seemed to adhere to was love.

This time let it be its antithesis... hate.  [:(!]

So did you..

 I don't know how to write of hate.. so I will read this instead of participating.

Ewe could of written:



I know not how to write of hate
I'll just read not participate




LOL..LOL Yes indeedy I could have... LOL...but you see I left it for you to do, cause you do it so well...LOL..

and it was Kwality poetry and you know it!
 

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« Reply #24 on: 02/12/2009 19:57:11 »
So this will be my second poetry thread... Karen made some excellent ones last time, and the topic we seemed to adhere to was love.

This time let it be its antithesis... hate.  [:(!]

So did you..

 I don't know how to write of hate.. so I will read this instead of participating.

Ewe could of written:



I know not how to write of hate
I'll just read not participate




LOL..LOL Yes indeedy I could have... LOL...but you see I left it for you to do, cause you do it so well...LOL..

and it was Kwality poetry and you know it!

LOL..thanks Kareny mam...but ewe know full well I can't write to save my life....these poems here above are like.,..well good !!
 

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