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General Discussion & Feedback => Just Chat! => Topic started by: tony6789 on 07/01/2008 20:55:07
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c'mon doesnt matter how bad the poem is just share it!!! heres one of mine...
When darkness turns to light,
gonna be alright,
no more time to fight.
It ends tonight;
darkness has shed goodbye.
no more tears,
no more fears,
everything's just fine.
done with hatred, finished with cutting,
dose the fire.
oceans breeze blowing through
suicide im done with you.
fuk it all, no regrets.
I say goodbye to these darksets
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Well done Tony.Thanks for your spirit.
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anyone else? comon!!! =)
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Tony is a Poem God
I can't write cos I'm a sod
His words are real and not so cheap
That's the best from me this woolly sheep !
QUALITY Poemage !! [::)] [::)]
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My poetry is akin to a curry that's dear
Plenty of heat that is verbal diarrhea !
Lol....quality poemage !!
Let it be known that I LOVE curries by the way...I am proud that they are The UK's national dish !
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My poetry is akin to a curry that's dear
Plenty of heat that is verbal diarrhea !
Lol....quality poemage !!
Let it be known that I LOVE curries by the way...I am proud that they are The UK's national dish !
Aren't you forgetting something...................begins with pine and ends with apple [;)]
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lol thx neil love ur poem lol
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You stole that.. or did you just change the words up a bit like you did for that Hey there Dehila song? haha
and sorry I ai'nt so poematic
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Tony is a Poem God
I can't write cos I'm a sod
His words are real and not so cheap
That's the best from me this woolly sheep !
QUALITY Poemage !! [::)] [::)]
I think you Made an error Sir, did you not really mean
Quality Poemage, but rather "Quality Fromage" LOL
You are a Unique kinda gentleman dont'cha know??
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c'mon doesnt matter how bad the poem is just share it!!! heres one of mine...
When darkness turns to light,
gonna be alright,
no more time to fight.
It ends tonight;
darkness has shed goodbye.
no more tears,
no more fears,
everything's just fine.
done with hatred, finished with cutting,
dose the fire.
oceans breeze blowing through
suicide im done with you.
fuk it all, no regrets.
I say goodbye to these darksets
Kinda sounds like the American Rejects song.
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nah kraner i didnt steal it at all lol...in the aar song they say when darkness turns to light it ends tonight so i added that into the poem cause i liked that but otherwise nope its all me
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My poetry is akin to a curry that's dear
Plenty of heat that is verbal diarrhea !
Lol....quality poemage !!
Let it be known that I LOVE curries by the way...I am proud that they are The UK's national dish !
Aren't you forgetting something...................begins with pine and ends with apple [;)]
Atop the tree
The Apple of pine
Juice for the sheep
Gimmee it's mine
But if fruit be gone
What'll I do ?
Roam the wild
In search of Pine dew
Oh woe is me
If fruit is no more !
Lost is this sheep
I'll console in a wh-re .....oops !!....LOL
Quality poemage !!
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LOL brilliant Hunky hunk [:D]
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nah kraner i didnt steal it at all lol...in the aar song they say when darkness turns to light it ends tonight so i added that into the poem cause i liked that but otherwise nope its all me
Riight. Except I'm not Kraner.
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hahaha love that neil!!
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My poetry is akin to a curry that's dear
Plenty of heat that is verbal diarrhea !
Lol....quality poemage !!
Let it be known that I LOVE curries by the way...I am proud that they are The UK's national dish !
Aren't you forgetting something...................begins with pine and ends with apple [;)]
Atop the tree
The Apple of pine
Juice for the sheep
Gimmee it's mine
But if fruit be gone
What'll I do ?
Roam the wild
In search of Pine dew
Oh woe is me
If fruit is no more !
Lost is this sheep
I'll console in a wh-re .....oops !!....LOL
Quality poemage !!
Quality indeedy!
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Atop the tree
The Apple of pine
Juice for the sheep
Gimmee it's mine
But if fruit be gone
What'll I do ?
Roam the wild
In search of Pine dew
Oh woe is me
If fruit is no more !
Lost is this sheep
I'll console in a wh-re .....oops !!....LOL
Quality poemage !!
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Atop the tree
The Apple of pine
Juice for the sheep
Gimmee it's mine
But if fruit be gone
What'll I do ?
Roam the wild
In search of Pine dew
Oh woe is me
If fruit is no more !
Lost is this sheep
I'll console in a wh-re .....oops !!....LOL
Quality poemage !!
Heh, very nice.
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A short bit about heroin addiction. (truncated)
When the flame hits the foil,
and it all starts to boil,
you go chasing the dragons all day,
and that sickening smell,
that comes straight from hell,
lingers on every word you say.
Relax now,
the dragons have gone,
you've chased them all away,
but you know for sure,
it wont last long,
there be back by,
the end of the day.
Bee
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that waz great mad man cudt hav sumed it up better
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forum clicks and forum ticks
tell me now how many sticks.
"Testing"
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A short bit about heroin addiction. (truncated)
When the flame hits the foil,
and it all starts to boil,
you go chasing the dragons all day,
and that sickening smell,
that comes straight from hell,
lingers on every word you say.
Relax now,
the dragons have gone,
you've chased them all away,
but you know for sure,
it wont last long,
there be back by,
the end of the day.
Bee
That was very good Bee. Thanks!
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A short bit about heroin addiction. (truncated)
When the flame hits the foil,
and it all starts to boil,
you go chasing the dragons all day,
and that sickening smell,
that comes straight from hell,
lingers on every word you say.
Relax now,
the dragons have gone,
you've chased them all away,
but you know for sure,
it wont last long,
there be back by,
the end of the day.
Bee
Nice job.
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Excellent Bee...That Mad Man !!...
How long is the full poem ?...I think we'd all like to see it !
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Come on Peeps lets see more words
Typed on here or written in turds !
LOL...quality poemage!!...and ewe know it !!
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Yes Indeedy so!! LOL!!
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WOW! We have some very talented writers here!
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I'll be back, my fav own written poem is on my home computer!
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OK! Good!
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11 was 1 racehorse
22was12
when 1111 race
22112
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huh???
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huh???
Eleven and Twenty Two are the names of racehorses !!
Eleven was one racehorse
Twenty Two was one too
When Eleven won one race
Twenty Two won one too
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HA HA Very clever indeedy!
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Excellent Bee...That Mad Man !!...
How long is the full poem ?...I think we'd all like to see it !
Thanks.
I must admit it is not really a poem but was lyrics for a sad song, sometimes I'm not sure on the boundaries between a poem and lyrics.
I don't have the full version with me ATM as its a few years old but I will try and find the archive.
In the mean time..
"Childhood"
Playing in the woods,
swinging from the trees
pretending to be tarzan
diving in the leaves
You've go some matches
and 5 park drive too
you build a fire
feel a glow in you
Get out those catapults
line the bottles on the wall
try to shoot them down
and the rain starts to fall
Those childhood memories
deep in the past
you never realised then
childhood never lasts.
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You're very close- the racehorses are called 'one,one' and 'two,two'
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Excellent Bee...That Mad Man !!...
How long is the full poem ?...I think we'd all like to see it !
Thanks.
I must admit it is not really a poem but was lyrics for a sad song, sometimes I'm not sure on the boundaries between a poem and lyrics.
I don't have the full version with me ATM as its a few years old but I will try and find the archive.
In the mean time..
"Childhood"
Playing in the woods,
swinging from the trees
pretending to be tarzan
diving in the leaves
You've go some matches
and 5 park drive too
you build a fire
feel a glow in you
Get out those catapults
line the bottles on the wall
try to shoot them down
and the rain starts to fall
Those childhood memories
deep in the past
you never realised then
childhood never lasts.
Very nice bee thanks for sharing. Will enjoy the rest when you find it.
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‘armless Yarn
A smoke-filled room, a loud gaffaw, the barmaid pours a beer,
the pub is full of country blokes and Aussie atmosphere.
Some 'Chisel' thru the speakers, the racetrack on the telly,
pool table sending iv'ry balls to its underbelly.
Walls adorned with history, and heads of native birds,
the Nation'l Anthem in a frame, 'cause no-one knows the words.
An ag'ed man sits in the corner, sipping at his ale,
his teeth are stained, his liver's shot, his ragged skin is pale.
Young buck swaggers in and, as the room lets up a shout,
he tips his head in mock salute and takes his earnings out.
Good mates standing at the bar as jugs are passed around,
the yarns are flowing freely to impress the growing crowd.
The old man in the corner holds his voice above the din,
"You boys want a story, eh? Well, buck up and listen in.
Jus' the other day this feller was sat here at the bar,
he held his glass with steel hook, his cheek, it had a scar.
That scar, it ran from ear to chin, crikey it was shockin',
angry, red and all inflamed, he'd taken quite a coppin'.
With legs the size of tree trunks an' a barrel for a chest,
he looked as though, with just one blow, he'd put a man to rest.
I ventured on the happenings, and nodded to his claws,
he turned to me, quite wearily, and spoke, after a pause."
As if to emulate the mood, the old man waits a bit,
he squints his eyes upon the crowd and makes a show of it.
"This bloke is felling up a tree, 'bout fifty foot or so,
a lightning bolt, he gets a jolt, the chainsaw he lets go.
It backs up from the branch and lops off both his paws,
then, before he thinks to catch 'em, they hit the forest floors.
He’s with them soon enough, as the rest of him descended.
I shakes me head, 'Christ!' I says, tryin' to comprehend it."
The crowd is leaning forward and the air is getting tense,
the old man lights a cigarette, just to build suspense.
He slowly sips at his beer, then lifts his head to speak,
"Me eyes then trail from steel claws to mark upon 'is cheek,
'That how you did your face in, the chainsaw misbehavin'?'
He took a pause, held up his claws, and shrugged, "Cut it shavin'.""
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Very very good JnA, Is it a piece of your own??
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Yes, of course!
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Very nice indeed! Thanks for sharing it!
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great.