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Here is another wonderful poem from my talented son. This was a writing assignment at school.
Mom
Mom is a warm fire that never goes out, even when drenched in water.
Mom is a pillow, not to hard, yet not to soft.
Mom is a song that is stuck in your head, even when you don't want it to be.
Mom is a nice car with chromed rims and a nice sound system.
Mom is that great bus ride home from school, after you've had a long, hard day.
He learned early that being nice to Mom gets you STUFF.
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George you are stealing my heart!!! Beautiful! MWAHHHHH!!!
Carolyn, how sweet...he is adorable!!!
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George - what a beautiful, sensitive dream........if only.
Love you lots.
Helena xxx
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definitely that moment was a dream....hehe
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26/07/2006 18:51:28 »
More please George.
Love you lots
Helena xxx
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OK, I shall see if I can dream up something anew (believe it or not, traditionally I could not write fiction or creatively to save my life, and English was about my worst subject at school – this metamorphosis is merely an aspect of senility creeping in). In the meantime, while my brain goes off on holiday to refresh itself, I shall cheat, by regurgitating some of the old.
Back at the beginning of 2005, when my mother was ill in hospital, and I was feeling it was one of those cases when one feels the disadvantage of living alone, of not having someone to come home to and just curl up in their arms and forget all the pain of the world outside. At that time, I penned (well, technically, keyed) the following:
The Touch of a Woman
That the boy within the man might find solace in the touch of a woman,
That in her arms he may find shelter and beauty,
That in her healing touch may the cares of this world disappear,
That in the warmth of her body and her soul, may his heart find warmth,
That with the touch of her skin against his, may his heart race, and his mind forget,
That for one moment, may he be a carefree boy again.
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eorge
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George - how beautiful, and how touching.
Love you lots
Helena xxx
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Another from 2005, a few months later.
The Pain and The Pleasure
To banish the care, to banish the caution, to banish the thought,
To feel without care, that one’s senses are all,
That all is the moment, and tomorrow is not there,
To act with abandon, to act with passion,
To sense pain, to sense pleasure, and know not which is which,
To submit to pain, as to submit to love,
To submit to pleasure, as to submit to love,
That in this world, there is no other world,
That in this world of pain and pleasure, there is no world but love,
That all is banished but the moment,
That all is banished but love.
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George - how wonderful and sensuous.
Love you lots.
Helena xxx
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Darkness surrounds me here at this time!
I try to pray, but the words I can't find.
My heart is beating so slowly, my breaths are so shallow!
I feel his life over me, just like a shadow!
I try to cry out and my voice no longer helps me, the silence is so
loud that my own heartbeat is lost in the darkness that surrounds me!
I'm Feeling lost and afraid in this dark place I know, So I
must see with my mind for my heart won't let go!
I must not give in and allow it to take me,
I must hold on and not let it break me!
I have to hang on and climb up again, but Please God,
Please God, Hold tight to my friend!
......Karen
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How blue can I get, you could ask my heart. Just like a jugsaw puzzle
it's been torn all apart. A million words couldn't say just how I feel
. A million years from now, you know, I'll be loving you still.
The nights are lonely, the days are so sad and I just keep
thinkin' about the love that we had. And I'm missing you and
nobody knows it but me
"Lo" Loretta
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MY TRUE LOVE
My heart cries out for your love dear!I know not what to do!
My thoughts are eratic and jumbled and each one is for you!
My soul is so enraptured by your love that my heart feels as if it were on fire! I love you sweetheart, you are my hearts desire!
You are the breath I take in the moning air, you are the strength I draw from when your not here!
My soul cries out to touch you, my love for you is clear, such joy and elation just floods me every time that you are near!
My heart is entangled within your heart too, and I can't tell any more which part is me and which part is you!
Like a beautiful dream you come to me now, awaking me sweetly, by kissing my brow!
Oh be still my heart as I open my eyes, My heart cries out as I realize, Tis but a dream this vision of you; Not what it seems, My hearts broke in two!
Oh Love, that you hear my voice and come to me my friend, like the gentle rain thats falling down upon my head again.
Reaching out to touch your face, remembering your warm embrace; Feeling your hands touching mine, my soul is yours throughout all time!
Oh my love, my true love, I hold you close right now! I breath you in and hold you here a captive of my heart! I could never be alone love for we will never be apart!
I love you sweatheart, I love you true, my heart knows no bounds because of this love for you!
So be still my beating heart, and loneliness will flee, as I have you here inside within each memory!
..........Karen!
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Bravo Karen! I wish I could post more, but so many of them are about Denny...it makes me cry...so I will enjoy yours and others...beautiful!!!
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Wonderful my friends both of you, you have excelled yourselves,
but oh so sad.
Love you lots
Helena xxx
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Thanks Helena! The pain lessens each day and I will post some more soon..I promise for you romantic peeps...lol
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Glad you're feeling better-
look forward to some 'more' poems.
Love you lots
Helena xxx
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George - what a beautiful, sensitive dream........if only.
Love you lots.
Helena xxx
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definitely that moment was a dream....hehe
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George - how beautiful, and how touching.
Love you lots
Helena xxx
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George - how wonderful and sensuous.
Love you lots.
Helena xxx
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