[tony6789 (OP)]

c'mon doesnt matter how bad the poem is just share it!!! heres one of mine...



When darkness turns to light,
gonna be alright,
no more time to fight.
It ends tonight;
darkness has shed goodbye.
no more tears,
no more fears,
everything's just fine.
done with hatred, finished with cutting,
dose the fire.
oceans breeze blowing through
suicide im done with you.
fuk it all, no regrets.
I say goodbye to these darksets

[Karen W.]

Well done Tony.Thanks for your spirit.

[tony6789 (OP)]

anyone else? comon!!! =)

[neilep]

Tony is a Poem God
I can't write cos I'm a sod
His words are real and not so cheap
That's the best from me this woolly sheep !




QUALITY Poemage !! [] []

[neilep]

My poetry is akin to a curry that's dear
Plenty of heat that is verbal diarrhea !




Lol....quality poemage !!


Let it be known that I LOVE curries by the way...I am proud that they are The UK's national dish !

[Mirage]

My poetry is akin to a curry that's dear
Plenty of heat that is verbal diarrhea !




Lol....quality poemage !!


Let it be known that I LOVE curries by the way...I am proud that they are The UK's national dish !

Aren't you forgetting something...................begins with pine and ends with apple []

[tony6789 (OP)]

lol thx neil love ur poem lol

[Simulated]

You stole that.. or did you just change the words up a bit like you did for that Hey there Dehila song? haha

and sorry I ai'nt so poematic

[Karen W.]

Tony is a Poem God
I can't write cos I'm a sod
His words are real and not so cheap
That's the best from me this woolly sheep !




QUALITY Poemage !! [] []

I think you Made an error Sir, did you not really mean
 Quality Poemage, but rather "Quality Fromage" LOL
You are a Unique kinda gentleman dont'cha know??

[Nobody's Confidant]

c'mon doesnt matter how bad the poem is just share it!!! heres one of mine...



When darkness turns to light,
gonna be alright,
no more time to fight.
It ends tonight;
darkness has shed goodbye.
no more tears,
no more fears,
everything's just fine.
done with hatred, finished with cutting,
dose the fire.
oceans breeze blowing through
suicide im done with you.
fuk it all, no regrets.
I say goodbye to these darksets

Kinda sounds like the American Rejects song.

[tony6789 (OP)]

nah kraner i didnt steal it at all lol...in the aar song they say when darkness turns to light it ends tonight so i added that into the poem cause i liked that but otherwise nope its all me

[neilep]

My poetry is akin to a curry that's dear
Plenty of heat that is verbal diarrhea !




Lol....quality poemage !!


Let it be known that I LOVE curries by the way...I am proud that they are The UK's national dish !

Aren't you forgetting something...................begins with pine and ends with apple []

Atop the tree
The Apple of pine
Juice for the sheep
Gimmee it's mine

But if fruit be gone
What'll I do ?
Roam the wild
In search of Pine dew

Oh woe is me
If fruit is no more !
Lost is this sheep
I'll console in a wh-re .....oops !!....LOL



Quality poemage !!

[Mirage]

LOL brilliant Hunky hunk []

[Nobody's Confidant]

nah kraner i didnt steal it at all lol...in the aar song they say when darkness turns to light it ends tonight so i added that into the poem cause i liked that but otherwise nope its all me

Riight. Except I'm not Kraner.

[tony6789 (OP)]

hahaha love that neil!!

[Karen W.]

My poetry is akin to a curry that's dear
Plenty of heat that is verbal diarrhea !




Lol....quality poemage !!


Let it be known that I LOVE curries by the way...I am proud that they are The UK's national dish !

Aren't you forgetting something...................begins with pine and ends with apple []

Atop the tree
The Apple of pine
Juice for the sheep
Gimmee it's mine

But if fruit be gone
What'll I do ?
Roam the wild
In search of Pine dew

Oh woe is me
If fruit is no more !
Lost is this sheep
I'll console in a wh-re .....oops !!....LOL



Quality poemage !!

Quality indeedy!

[Carolyn]

Atop the tree
The Apple of pine
Juice for the sheep
Gimmee it's mine

But if fruit be gone
What'll I do ?
Roam the wild
In search of Pine dew

Oh woe is me
If fruit is no more !
Lost is this sheep
I'll console in a wh-re .....oops !!....LOL



Quality poemage !!

[Nobody's Confidant]

Atop the tree
The Apple of pine
Juice for the sheep
Gimmee it's mine

But if fruit be gone
What'll I do ?
Roam the wild
In search of Pine dew

Oh woe is me
If fruit is no more !
Lost is this sheep
I'll console in a wh-re .....oops !!....LOL



Quality poemage !!

Heh, very nice.

[that mad man]

A short bit about heroin addiction. (truncated)


When the flame hits the foil,
and it all starts to boil,
you go chasing the dragons all day,
and that sickening smell,
that comes straight from hell,
lingers on every word you say.

Relax now,
the dragons have gone,
you've chased them all away,
but you know for sure,
it wont last long,
there be back by,
the end of the day.

Bee

[tony6789 (OP)]

that waz great mad man cudt hav sumed it up better