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« Reply #200 on: 31/08/2006 19:48:04 »
Awww, that is so sad. I don't know what I would do in a situation like that. The pain must be unimaginable [:(]

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« Reply #201 on: 31/08/2006 19:54:11 »
 Yes I don't know how she is coping and I do understand her need to hold on to the man she has loved . they have supported each other raised their children who are still young and at home. Shes pretty tough, but I also know she is very fragile as we all are. Even when we are wearing our tough stuff faces!!

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« Reply #202 on: 31/08/2006 20:03:50 »
Some people amaze me with how resilient they are, real troopers.

It's still early, and love is very powerful. You never know, he may well pull through at anytime. From weakness we find strength and through others we find not only strength but courage, kindness and the will to be all we can be.
I may not be that religious anymore, but I have witnessed some wonders that cannot really be explained. Faith is a powerful thing.

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« Reply #203 on: 31/08/2006 20:09:38 »
Yes it is and I have witnessed the same ! We can never give up on what we believe unless we have exhausted every avenue available. Then we must rely on faith. do what we can do ourselves then believe it with all ouer hearts!!

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« Reply #204 on: 31/08/2006 20:34:02 »
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Some people amaze me with how resilient they are, real troopers.



The problem is that sometimes the toughness is merely on the surface; sometimes one can be tough as long as there is something to keep you occupied, but as soon as it is all over, and you have nothing more to occupy you, that is when you fall apart.

It is very dangerous just to look at the surface as suggest that the person is able to cope.



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« Reply #205 on: 31/08/2006 20:38:57 »
Boy do I here you George so true so very true!! I am finding that a problem here today, the tough part of my skin seems to be a bit thin today!

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« Reply #206 on: 31/08/2006 20:39:25 »
You see, I was pushed into religion, my dads side of the family is very religious, well considering my grandad was a deacon or something and my uncle is a priest it was bound to happen. I went to a roman catholic school, both primary and secondary, which would constantly ram down your throat religious studies. However I did used to go to church with my parents, I enjoyed it for a while, but then something happened, it all lost it's glow to me. I still respect it, it's just not for me anymore.

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« Reply #207 on: 31/08/2006 20:57:39 »
Yes I was brought up Babtist , then I went to a pentecostal and now I am a member of the LDS church and have been for for 14 or 15 years now. I have been inactive for over a year now, as I have had to deal with family issues and health, getting it back!! Seemed overwhelming teaching preschool all day 5 days aweek to 34 kids and then having sunday teaching primary at church for small groups of children... I love it it was my calling, but I was and am worn out and need ed some major me time. I am still very much a believer in God and will always be. Right now I need to be a believer in myself and that has been difficult after many years of not believing in me. I got so lost somewhere alondg the lines.

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« Reply #208 on: 31/08/2006 22:17:15 »
Yeah, my parents do a lot for the kids at their church, they go to a Evangelica church, they didn't like how boring roman catholics were.

If they're not doing sunday school then they are usually leading the service. It's what they love, and I'm glad they have it, I don't think they would be as happy if they didn't have their faith.

But you definitely need some you time  [:)]

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« Reply #209 on: 31/08/2006 22:22:02 »
Yes I do and despite all the love and happiness in church, it was just to much for me right now, doesn't deminnish my faith or belief never will!

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« Reply #210 on: 31/08/2006 22:26:57 »
You can still be devoted even if you don't go to church, that's how I see it. After all, the church is not just a building, it's the people.

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« Reply #211 on: 31/08/2006 22:29:46 »
Yes your right!
 Hey how about a critique of my poems over the last few pages, care to give me a unbiased opinion?

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« Reply #212 on: 31/08/2006 22:34:27 »
I'm not a critic really. If I like something then I like it and if I don't I don't. I'm sure I could have thought of something easier and shorter to say but I couldn't......obviously.....doh....... I'll tell you what, I'll give them another proper read tomorrow and let you know. That's because it's nearing home time and I need to get changed. But will chat tomorrow hun. Take care and have a good day. Seems a bit weird wishing you a good day as it's night time here, I know it, I'm gonna forget it soon......damn [:X]

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« Reply #213 on: 31/08/2006 22:37:19 »
Bye for now and its 3:00 inthe afternoon here!

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« Reply #214 on: 31/08/2006 22:39:11 »
Your right, I misread your post! Yes night time there! Good night thanks  Dan!

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« Reply #215 on: 31/08/2006 04:34:45 »
Awww, you make me want to fall in love again!  Beautiful very beautiful!!!

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« Reply #216 on: 31/08/2006 05:45:18 »
You are the bestest Karen!  Your words speak such volume to my heart....Love is a wonderful thing...I am very well.  A renewed vigor!

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« Reply #217 on: 31/08/2006 08:43:27 »
Good I am so glad to hear it! Now we have some living to do so Off I go, to catch up with you girl!!! Don't run too fast as my ankles can't keep up the pace! LOL

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« Reply #218 on: 31/08/2006 18:40:32 »
I see, you're refering to your........like in the your embarrassing moment thread [;)]

It's alright, my own fault, I was drunk.......yet again [B)]

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« Reply #219 on: 31/08/2006 18:48:48 »
Yeperoo that is indeed the reference, needless to say I don't do alot of running! Just trying to keep up with you all on here. I am a slow typist!

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« Reply #220 on: 31/08/2006 18:52:38 »
I sometimes get really confused with the keyboards. We have different types at work....the kind that is split down the middle of the keys......I know great technical term used......I don't care........leave I be........anyway, I'm usually having to go back on myself and delete wrong words or letters, sometimes both, sometimes none. You get the picture.......actually I just lost myself.......damn

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« Reply #221 on: 31/08/2006 19:08:14 »
NOPE you are not lost, I have the same troublles you know, always correcting and I love the green font so that takes time also!

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« Reply #222 on: 31/08/2006 19:24:02 »
Cool, I'm glad you could follow that, unfortunately I have no idea myself. Now that has happened to me a few times, it's like part of my brain shuts down and another part takes over. It sometimes leaves me confused but other times leaves me with a poem [:)]

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« Reply #223 on: 31/08/2006 19:26:44 »
You should post a new one.  They are really quite lovely you Know!

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« Reply #224 on: 31/08/2006 19:30:45 »
Thank you Karen [:X]

I came up with a new one a few nights ago, it's on my laptop at home. I haven't read it yet. But I do know it's not a lovely one, I was feeling low when I wrote it.

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« Reply #225 on: 31/08/2006 19:44:15 »
We all have those low moments, I write about them and mostly keep them for me, sometimes I will post them, I did one on the forum for a dear friend of mine who is still on life support and its been over a month and he has seen no changes. His wife cannot let them take him from the machine as she loves him so. I pray for him every day and for the family!!

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« Reply #226 on: 31/08/2006 19:48:04 »
Awww, that is so sad. I don't know what I would do in a situation like that. The pain must be unimaginable [:(]

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« Reply #227 on: 31/08/2006 19:54:11 »
 Yes I don't know how she is coping and I do understand her need to hold on to the man she has loved . they have supported each other raised their children who are still young and at home. Shes pretty tough, but I also know she is very fragile as we all are. Even when we are wearing our tough stuff faces!!

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« Reply #228 on: 31/08/2006 20:03:50 »
Some people amaze me with how resilient they are, real troopers.

It's still early, and love is very powerful. You never know, he may well pull through at anytime. From weakness we find strength and through others we find not only strength but courage, kindness and the will to be all we can be.
I may not be that religious anymore, but I have witnessed some wonders that cannot really be explained. Faith is a powerful thing.

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« Reply #229 on: 31/08/2006 20:09:38 »
Yes it is and I have witnessed the same ! We can never give up on what we believe unless we have exhausted every avenue available. Then we must rely on faith. do what we can do ourselves then believe it with all ouer hearts!!

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« Reply #230 on: 31/08/2006 20:34:02 »
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Some people amaze me with how resilient they are, real troopers.



The problem is that sometimes the toughness is merely on the surface; sometimes one can be tough as long as there is something to keep you occupied, but as soon as it is all over, and you have nothing more to occupy you, that is when you fall apart.

It is very dangerous just to look at the surface as suggest that the person is able to cope.



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« Reply #231 on: 31/08/2006 20:38:57 »
Boy do I here you George so true so very true!! I am finding that a problem here today, the tough part of my skin seems to be a bit thin today!

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« Reply #232 on: 31/08/2006 20:39:25 »
You see, I was pushed into religion, my dads side of the family is very religious, well considering my grandad was a deacon or something and my uncle is a priest it was bound to happen. I went to a roman catholic school, both primary and secondary, which would constantly ram down your throat religious studies. However I did used to go to church with my parents, I enjoyed it for a while, but then something happened, it all lost it's glow to me. I still respect it, it's just not for me anymore.

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« Reply #233 on: 31/08/2006 20:57:39 »
Yes I was brought up Babtist , then I went to a pentecostal and now I am a member of the LDS church and have been for for 14 or 15 years now. I have been inactive for over a year now, as I have had to deal with family issues and health, getting it back!! Seemed overwhelming teaching preschool all day 5 days aweek to 34 kids and then having sunday teaching primary at church for small groups of children... I love it it was my calling, but I was and am worn out and need ed some major me time. I am still very much a believer in God and will always be. Right now I need to be a believer in myself and that has been difficult after many years of not believing in me. I got so lost somewhere alondg the lines.

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« Reply #234 on: 31/08/2006 22:17:15 »
Yeah, my parents do a lot for the kids at their church, they go to a Evangelica church, they didn't like how boring roman catholics were.

If they're not doing sunday school then they are usually leading the service. It's what they love, and I'm glad they have it, I don't think they would be as happy if they didn't have their faith.

But you definitely need some you time  [:)]

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« Reply #235 on: 31/08/2006 22:22:02 »
Yes I do and despite all the love and happiness in church, it was just to much for me right now, doesn't deminnish my faith or belief never will!

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« Reply #236 on: 31/08/2006 22:26:57 »
You can still be devoted even if you don't go to church, that's how I see it. After all, the church is not just a building, it's the people.

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« Reply #237 on: 31/08/2006 22:37:19 »
Bye for now and its 3:00 inthe afternoon here!

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« Reply #238 on: 31/08/2006 22:39:11 »
Your right, I misread your post! Yes night time there! Good night thanks  Dan!

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« Reply #239 on: 01/09/2006 18:10:50 »
FEAR

The Morning sun is tring to to peak into my window!
It feels like an old friend coming round to visit.

My mind contemplating the journey from within to the outside.
my heart is tring so hard not to run and hide.

I know that there is nothing to fear, but in my mind the words still ring clear.....

Many thoughts racing round inside, I must do it now, I must not hide.
Gathering confidence and breathing deep, I can slip through the door and take a peek!

......Oh yes the sun, a glorious friend I love this world want it back again... breathing breathing all is well....Oh take in that lovely smell...

Fresh air and sunshine .... oh how divine, glorious warmth, I am going to be fine..........



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« Reply #240 on: 01/09/2006 18:43:37 »
Good Morning Love

My love I carry you close to my heart , there I shall keep you never to part!

  My Joy is with you where ever you go, you are with me the same you surely must know!

  Every moment, every second, I think of you dear, you bring sunshine and chase away my fears...


  Last night beside you I came to your dreams to bring you my kisses and many other things.

  My heart is enraptured by yours don't you know, your the reason my face has a glow!

   Your gentle hands, your smiling face, make my beautiful world a much better place!

    One day my love closer we will be and then ahh..to stop time for all eternity...
 
     Holding you close and feeling your face, is giving my heart more reasons to race!

     My prayer for this day is that, "someday" be soon, as my heart cries out with each new moon...

     Patient and loyal I will remain, in love with you always, that will never change!

      Oh my love, Time passes so slowly and my heart aches for you, and I am so lonely!

      Be well my love, and keep your thoughts clear, as I love you, is all that I want you to hear!

      So go my kisses away to him, fly swiftly on the wind, tell him I'm here waiting, to have them returned again....

Karen
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« Reply #241 on: 01/09/2006 18:49:45 »
Okay, are you trying to get me choked up here...I am taking a lunch to keep an eye out for you, Carolyn, and Dan the man!  But now this is going a bit deep for me...You are so sappy!  Love to you!  ;-)

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« Reply #242 on: 01/09/2006 19:40:29 »
Sorry Loretta, I guess I am! Just feelings you know how they catch you up and don't let you go....Your a great friend Loretta! Loretta Your right its sap, but its running out of my mouth my head my fingers everywhere... cannot seem to stop the flow....OH DEAR....Gonna have to busy my hands elsewhere!!

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« Reply #243 on: 01/09/2006 21:02:31 »
Hullo all,

hope you like this.



I just love all the words you write.

I hope you like this too.



No Title,as usual


Itís a melting pot, a travesty of justice
That such an emotion can exist in this twist
No warning, no sweet initiation
A thunder clap of sweet serenity
And I am taken aback,
Itís a gust of breath
Aghast in mind and loss of control

Embellish me then toil this man
Reaching out as far I can
Fingertips can feel the prints of her
Itís not just a yearning, itís a burning !

What a devilish trick to play
That places his want so far away
This life is such a rotten core
This apple is bitter but craves for more
No I wonít deny this adoration
Obstacles are there for calculation
Overcome by flights of fancy
No incredulity, no imagination possessed
Itís real, itís firmÖa tangible mess.

This life is a tide at a low ebb on the shore
But like the tide , it returns for more
A yo yo of emotion, a love that can blister
But she knows that heís here and does miss her

Itís a melting pot, a travesty of justice
That such an emotion can exist in this twist
No sweet surrender, no warning shot
Just now to live with what weíve got
The ingredients are there in view
Itís a recipe of me and you


My head is not what it used to be.
My head is not what it used to be.

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« Reply #244 on: 01/09/2006 21:17:29 »
Ian your words bring me to tears such heart felt emotions...You write so beautifully so full of feelings it takes my breath away......Please do honor us more often with your beautiful words as they indeed are a welcome breath of fresh air!!

Karen
« Last Edit: 02/09/2006 08:51:59 by Karen W. »

"Life is not measured by the number of Breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away."

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« Reply #245 on: 02/09/2006 01:58:39 »
Great job Ian!  Bravo!!!  Beautiful!

Karen, you are beautiful!

"Lo" Loretta
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« Reply #246 on: 02/09/2006 02:29:15 »
Hi Loretta Glad to see you back!! You are beautiful Too!!

Karen

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« Reply #247 on: 02/09/2006 04:32:33 »
Not tonight dear...I have a headache...he is at my house!  LOL  Oh, Lord why don't you just send me a temporary boyfriend now...so he will have a good reason to have my cellie....grrrr!

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« Reply #248 on: 02/09/2006 04:44:04 »
Want me to call your cellie LOretta? You could give it a good go!!LOL

Karen

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« Reply #249 on: 02/09/2006 05:41:37 »
Absolutely...maybe that would tickle his little fancy...so childlish is he...I can email it to you the cellie number in code..

"Lo" Loretta
"Just Me, Lo" Loretta