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« Reply #250 on: 02/09/2006 06:31:21 »
OAKIE DOKIE ARTICHOKE! MAil away I will call when your ready!

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"Life is not measured by the number of Breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away."

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« Reply #251 on: 02/09/2006 07:05:06 »
Oh, sorry, had to jump off forum...you know the code will start with some key words..hehe

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« Reply #252 on: 02/09/2006 07:06:05 »
Loving and compassionate and loyal to a tea, that's the Lo I know, my friend, can't you see?

Outstandinding in ethics and at work she's a whiz, watch out for her she's good for you Biz!

Really dependable, honest you see, has always been kind and a great friend to me!

Endless fun and humor abound, whenever you enter to Lo's private grounds.

Terrific wit and charm abounds in her, you must be quick to remain around her!

To many jobs she has to hold down, Poor loretta dear, you must slow down!

Attractive and vivacious, she sweeps into a room, every one turns and all the men swoon!

 Yes that's my Loretta sweet as can be, bestest of girlfriends,  can't you see!


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« Reply #253 on: 02/09/2006 07:11:26 »
LOL  I want to say ray, rah, re, Kick lo in the knee...no, new, nad, Karen is just really bad!  LOL  I can't hold a candle to you girlie.

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« Reply #254 on: 02/09/2006 07:13:26 »
LO< Your the match that starts my fire... I wuvs ya girlie! You make me shine!

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« Reply #255 on: 02/09/2006 07:15:46 »
Ditto Darling!  Yeah, where is everyone?  Carolyn, you cheer up as we can only keep you going for a moment with my corny humour...bless your heart it depresses me too...maybe I can virtual sing for you...I'm walking on sunshine, yeah, makes me feel good..glad you can't hear me as my co-worker is laughing at me and told me to not drink anymore of my energy drink..I am staying here until 1:30am...so need to keep her awake, don't you think?  hehe

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« Reply #256 on: 02/09/2006 07:21:13 »
Sounds like a plan! We will both sing that oughta do her!!

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« Reply #257 on: 02/09/2006 07:43:40 »
Yep!  She was too outdone...hehe

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« Reply #258 on: 02/09/2006 08:50:46 »
YESSSSSS THATS THE WAY!!!!!!YAAAAY! Loretta your getting tired, I hope you sleep well tonight. I see your eyes getting heavier....about 1/2 hour more, you almost have it now! Please LO be careful tonight on the road...watch the sideroads going home Ok!! Will you post me one more after you get home, so I know you be safe! OK???

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« Reply #259 on: 02/09/2006 09:49:00 »
I wish I was getting tired...I would pray sleep would befall upon me...LOL  1/2 hour more... You made my morning...hehe  I am safely at home as the post before...hehe

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« Reply #260 on: 02/09/2006 10:13:24 »
Thanks Loretta, Glad you made it... You know what, I think MR DAN must have had a really hot date, havent seen hide nor hair of him all day long!! I bet he's having a nice time, I hope he hangs on to his accessories tonight, could be incriminating if he leaves them somewhere again....LOL Jeesh Men are so funny sometimes. LOL

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« Reply #261 on: 02/09/2006 10:23:49 »
I am jealous of my dictator hubby being out on town with another betty penguin...lol

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« Reply #262 on: 02/09/2006 11:13:13 »
Whoops that one was a line drive past my head, couldn't see a dang thing!

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« Reply #263 on: 02/09/2006 11:15:15 »
HUMMM betty bad***Carolyn I cant remember her calling card! what order in the penguin lineup was she??

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« Reply #264 on: 02/09/2006 15:03:53 »
Liquorish all sorts
 
Perhaps, when I am not looking in it,
I am it trapped in the mirror, thinking I am looking

At what?
Seeking my shade from the sun that is eternally lit
a son of all my mothers and fathers never forgot.
Then out of blue, just when stationary

it all moves.
Not so I would notice, not me among a perfect hundred.

You think I catch a glimpse with all that ensues,
blue faced devils, and consorts,
like liquorish all sorts.
No not I
but be as content

in my illusion as a magicians ruse I turn
as quick as I can, but to no avail
are my retorts.
Laugh,
yes me too,
both at and with myself
without I

It would serve them right
If I sat on one (of?)them one day
Then for certain they (can/will?)see what is,

and together we sigh
Not(out?) of suffering,
but(out?) of the bliss of lovers

and say and say I
love you I love you I
love you I
love you I,
love,
you.
 
 
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What you do speaks so loudly that I cannot hear what you say.

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« Reply #265 on: 02/09/2006 15:29:36 »
Nice hadrian did you look through out the thread abit there are lots of very nice pieces by lots of different people! I am glad you popped in and dropped that beauty in here.. I had to read it several times as it has many hidden issues inside of the words you wrote... I find it facinating that you are so clever to disguise what you say in such a manner...you are very good at the element of surprise and to my amusement also. I look forward to your new posts too: Please do post again.

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« Reply #266 on: 02/09/2006 16:08:15 »
 A game of AMUSEMENT


 AAAHHHHHHHHHHH!I must scream as this silence is deafening,
I cannot breath I cannot think... I can but cry out for I am on the Brink....

This edge so close, my hearts afraid.... so much silence will My words be saved.

Tetering on whats real or what the heart feels,is so confusing I feel like I am losing...

To the amusement of one, my hearts tugged on then set up to fall back when the amused ones are done....

A game one plays with a heart so real, must be done carefully if one truely feels....

Hurt can come and damage be done if it tis a  game thats only played by one!

A shell I have upon my back a vision set deep in my mind.
Seeking out my love like hide and seek, but he is so hard to find...

Tis a game, which door awaits me my prize, my heart picks many its no surprise.

So think ye, and be ye amused, but remember cause hurt and thee may lose.

Choose well thy path when playing this game as your heart might end up crying in pain!

Remember a game is played  by two and  a heart can be broken completely by you....


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« Reply #267 on: 02/09/2006 18:48:41 »
My Heart has been captured and you hold the key, Your the keeper of my heart, My soul lives in thee!

A chain of love, surrounds you and I; So strong our emotions, we both sometimes cry....

Reaching out from so.. so.. far away, Grasping and longing to be closer each and every day!!

Entranced by the power of the sheer love and desire our hearts are joined tightly and bonded by fire!

Incredible hurdles we leap for one another, holding tightly to this love as is like no other!

Hearts in harmony and joined in bliss for there never will be a love more pure then this!

A treasured moment which has been stolen from time, a kiss of betrothal that lingers sublime!

A mutual joining of two spirits in love with a host of sweet angels singing of their love...

Alas forever their souls have combined living in the world their two hearts have divined!



Karen
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« Reply #268 on: 02/09/2006 23:04:17 »
Wonderful as always karen. Such passion in your words that I feel you might explode lol.

hadrian, it is a very thought provoking words that you write. It seems very intimate and personal.

Can you elaborate the meaning ? Could it be put to music ? like a classical guitar do you think ?

My head is not what it used to be.
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« Reply #269 on: 03/09/2006 01:09:08 »
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Originally posted by Karen W.

HUMMM betty bad***Carolyn I cant remember her calling card! what order in the penguin lineup was she??

Karen



Oh geez, it was wilma penguin...now I am probably upsetting barney...[B)]

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« Reply #270 on: 03/09/2006 03:02:46 »
Thanks alot Ian... Exploding maybe,,, but not today!!

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« Reply #271 on: 03/09/2006 03:46:21 »
Exploding or Imploding...now that is the question!!!

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« Reply #272 on: 03/09/2006 04:43:23 »
Geesh,  Does that mean I should stop writing before I implode or explode!! As these last weeks and days have needed to express emotions felts else I might well explode....So I need to write it down caaaaaaaaaaaaaause my mouth doth runneth over, and over and over again..

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« Reply #273 on: 03/09/2006 04:50:37 »
LOL  I know what you mean

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« Reply #274 on: 03/09/2006 05:11:52 »
I flap my jaws all day if someone would listen. Someone should write something beautiful before I fall asleep on the keybord already nodded 2wice. I cant believe how tired i get so fast!!the last few days man will i be glad for this to be over!!! Geesh I woulsd rather not feel this tired cause my words are slurred as i am typing as I talk as i type.. I just realized that. my spellings getting atrocious... i slept about two hours last night so am so tired.

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« Reply #275 on: 03/09/2006 05:16:20 »
I had an hour of sleep before Felicia called me at 6:30am!

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« Reply #276 on: 03/09/2006 05:40:37 »
wow loretta, we better go to bed....so tired . i think tonight is early for me too! Bee well huh.. Sleep good . hope your sat, was good. Love ya!!!!!

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« Reply #277 on: 03/09/2006 06:57:00 »
I am tired to and only hope i can sleep, but have a feeling I won't be able too...

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« Reply #278 on: 03/09/2006 09:09:45 »


Well, I only had 3 hrs sleep last night,

and now understand a little of what it's like,  

I'm already feeling dizzy, perhaps I'll have

time to take a nap before my flight tonight.


Love you lots

Helena  xxx





 

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« Reply #279 on: 03/09/2006 13:16:41 »
Aww, Helena!  I hope you feel much better..and have plenty of rest...we miss you already!!

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« Reply #280 on: 03/09/2006 19:52:03 »
GET SOME REST! Then get the heck out of Dodge and have a great time Helena, NO MORE WORRIES OK? Have fun Dance all night long if you have a mind to!!!

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« Reply #281 on: 03/09/2006 20:50:24 »
A Triste, Yes, But Love Is Bliss




Thinking about hugging you, and kissing your lips,
ahhh, you bring me such bliss!

My arms are aching to hold you so tight, you were in my thoughts all through the night!

Tears of joy fill my eyes when I see your face dear,
and my world is so perfect knowing you are there!

Knowing you think of me, as I think of you, makes my world
so much brighter just knowing I have you!

Laughing with you, and crying with you enriches my life so,
I never wish to be without you, I'll never let you go!

I am wishing on stars to make a way, to string them together, so you can find me that day....

There will be sunshine sent from above,
on that day, my one true love!

Over the mountains and oceans so blue, I'd cross this
world just to be with you!

I am scaling cliffs and climbing mountains too,
Just so that in the end I will be with you!

Such love, so strong that binds us for eternity,
Our hearts together the way  it's supposed to be!

A true manifestation of our enduring love, are the words
both unspoken and spoken and created in that love!
 
A triste indeed, at the distance apart, but hope shines eternal deep in our hearts!

Happiness shines down upon our hearts too, leaving us blissful when we could be blue!

 Oh my love I am your's, there is no doubt, I want to jump for joy and shout it out!!

I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU, I DO, you are in every thought, and in everything I do!

In every corner I see you there , in the hall and in the chair, in every empty space I fill, thoughts of you to keep love real!

I dream, I live, I am our love! I hold you tight you see? With every breath I breathe you in and you are a part of me!

Sending wishes and kisses like butterflies your way, lightly touching down upon you, and completing your day... I love you I love, now......be on your way!


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« Reply #282 on: 03/09/2006 23:29:37 »
Magic Sprinkles


I have a box full of Magic Sprinkles, beside me every day; I take them out and blow on them to send them your way!
 
I know they find you Darling and surround you with their glow and you shine like a diamond, but I'm sure you already know!

That smile affixed upon your face I put there with my little friends;
I intend to keep it there until I see you again..

Now don't think twice about supply and demand, as this little box of mine has no real end!

Each time I think I am running low, magic sprinkles start to grow; then suddenly without a sound from the box my sprinkles bound!

I smile a smile so big you see; and blow those sprinkles right back to thee!

I think you surely must magic be too: as I have this box I've saved from you;

Inside there every word we have shared, every kiss every hug every thought stored there!

Mad! Yes indeed we must surely be; As this love of ours blows softly across the seas.

Crazy in love unlike no other, our hearts have reached out to spite all others!

Desire so strong it can't be contained, it falls upon our heads like acid rain.

Burning and stinging and leaving it's prints, holding our hearts captive with no defense!

No denial will come, no hearts can turn aside, as this love is so strong that we cannot hide.

Hidden wishes and dreams and hearts on fire, satiating this loves deep desire; Unable to contain or mellow the fire!

Now my sprinkles lie here upon my lap, Just waiting for you to send some back; The heat I can feel our love is real!

I'm waiting forever; Deny our love?...never! I love you!


 


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« Reply #283 on: 04/09/2006 20:48:16 »
Well I keep reading my poems and finding typo's.... Geesh, I am the typo Queen! Sorry Guys  tried to correct errors if you catch one let me know, I will fix it!

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« Reply #284 on: 05/09/2006 15:38:00 »


Orca Role

I hold a hand
soft gentle light emit
optic skin lightly draped on bone,

Voice faint just within
the dream still laughing,
at eaten moments devoured
with sharp hunger grasped,

with might eyes filled with tears
drip deep into mine join questions
without form drifting alone
dare not give them name sound or will,

for darkness shall then seep
out of night and creep ever closer
into all thoughts as orca role
just below the quite surface

such ease beguiles their power,
of passage,
simply sit,
in mine,
I hold her hand.


What you do speaks so loudly that I cannot hear what you say.

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« Reply #285 on: 05/09/2006 15:43:18 »
Hadrian That is so lovely! I wish I had the talent you do... Illusive and beautiful.. Thanks for sharing.

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« Reply #286 on: 06/09/2006 05:13:09 »
It gave me the "wow effect factor"

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« Reply #287 on: 06/09/2006 05:15:44 »
I've not shared my writing til now.  I just get so darn emotional.  Hope it touches you.[:D]

CRICKET

Cricket Cricket why can't I just kick it.
Cricket Cricket in my house
Why cant you be quiet as a mouse
Cricket Cricket I'm touched in the head
Oh my, I wish you'd drop dead
Cricket Cricket your chirping makes my skin crawl
Shut up already, I'm starting to bawl.

Carolyn
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« Reply #288 on: 06/09/2006 05:22:29 »
LOL  I love it Carolyn...bravo!  Very witty!  I remember moments like that...hehe

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« Reply #289 on: 06/09/2006 06:24:24 »
LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL!!!!!! Carolyn I love it!!! You are so funny! It is very deep! Quite honestly witty and I really do love it and You!!! SO CUTE!

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« Reply #290 on: 07/09/2006 04:20:59 »
Genuninely sweet and Kind, says what's on his mind!
Engaging, suave, and debonaire, sweet kind and always there!
Open,honest, quite sweet,he swooped right in and gave me back my feet!
Rescued me from a dark place, and helped put the sun back on my face!
Giving of himself his friendship True, being protective of all I do!
Ever caring, Loyal as a friend can be, This is what he,has given to me!


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« Reply #291 on: 07/09/2006 04:30:12 »
Bravo Ms Queenie Mod!!!  Love it...I know he will too!

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« Reply #292 on: 07/09/2006 05:25:48 »
I hope so!!

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« Reply #293 on: 07/09/2006 05:51:17 »
You are the best!  He has too!  I could see you virtually zapping each other with your sceptors..hehe

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« Reply #294 on: 07/09/2006 13:42:48 »
Karen - describes George to a T.

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« Reply #295 on: 07/09/2006 16:30:57 »
I think so Carolyn! have a good day!

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« Reply #296 on: 08/09/2006 04:17:32 »
Carolyn Mam .....Love the ' cricket ' poem....LOL.....excellent...luff it !!! "chirp chirp....chirp chirp....chirp chirp......."


Karen Mam....That's such a sweet tribute to George.......what a lovely lady you are and a fine fellow he is too !...I was going to say that I'm reaching for the tissues here but then I thought you lot will just debase the comment to the lowest denomination.......................and you'd be right !!.. [;)]




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Men are the same as women, just inside out !

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« Reply #297 on: 08/09/2006 07:07:06 »
Well Kind Sir, Merci Beaucoup, you pay me a very sweet compliment and I really expected it to be twisted up abit, AH... but, just when me thinks me know something about someone they flip the table on me and mix me up!! You are probably right about what we would do with the tissue comment, but you might reach for it anyways as I believe there is a thread in chat that is in need  a good wiping! LOL. OUI?

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« Reply #298 on: 09/09/2006 18:21:06 »
Resist not,
joy peace and fulfilment
 

If there was something I could say
that would take away even a tread of your pain
I would unstitch it million times for million years.

Resist not,
joy peace and fulfilment

 
If I could hold you in my hart today
and protect you from frozen harsh rain
I would soak up a grey ocean of brittle tears

Resist not,
joy peace and fulfilment

 
If time I could somehow undo
that would cease in one moment the unendable
I would stay in that instant of instants for eternity

Resist not,
joy peace and fulfilment

 
Now no more future or past ifs will do
I stand with you enduring the unendurable
Basking in the white light sprite of perpetuity

Resist not,
joy peace and fulfilment


What you do speaks so loudly that I cannot hear what you say.

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« Reply #299 on: 09/09/2006 18:36:51 »
Hadrian, your poems always have my attention as I love them.. Once again you shine like a beacon in the dark and give us once again a thing of beauty! Thank you so much for giving of yourself here!

Karen

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