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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #300 on: 09/09/2006 19:06:14 »
 I love YOU


Hearts entangled by loves desire minds adrift within a fire! So many thoughts just floating round My heart is high but my feet can't touch down....
 
Am I dreaming of this love or is it real? Sometimes I'm not sure just what I should feel...I am floating so high and feeling so good, If you could be here, I know that you would!

I'm confused sometimes how strong I feel about our love, as I know it is real and sent from above! Thinking of you like a hobby you see, as I know that you too are thinking of me!

Possessed by it's appeal and drawn deep within, I have found my heart lies within you my sweet friend! You keep it safe and protected so..my prayers are this, "Please never let it go!"

I love you completely and songs sing it sweetly, our love for the world to see! Its a song that drifts on in the clouds we have drawn, so close to our hearts don't you see!

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!  I LOVE YOU!  I DO.....This is my song and I give it to you!


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« Last Edit: 09/09/2006 19:23:15 by Karen W. »

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« Reply #301 on: 10/09/2006 00:22:07 »
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Originally posted by Karen W.

Genuninely sweet and Kind, says what's on his mind!
Engaging, suave, and debonaire, sweet kind and always there!
Open,honest, quite sweet,he swooped right in and gave me back my feet!
Rescued me from a dark place, and helped put the sun back on my face!
Giving of himself his friendship True, being protective of all I do!
Ever caring, Loyal as a friend can be, This is what he,has given to me!


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Thank you, dear sweet Karen.  Not sure about the suave and debonair, but I shall try and live up to the rest.



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« Reply #302 on: 10/09/2006 00:40:43 »
Your Welcome George and you already have!

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« Reply #303 on: 15/09/2006 17:27:31 »
hello. As usual. No title




Acting out of kindness and you give to me yourself
An endless tapestry of love that gives me wealth
Rich in the soil that the buds of adoration grow
I am a wealthy man of love from head down to my toe

Touching your skin as I grasp at my mind
To see the figure of you in the blackness of the blind
The seed of light is sewn and growth is in the shoots
A musical crescendo and a melody of flutes

Your love is the food to wit all my senses feed
Soaring skyward , endless journey, heart begins to bleed
For such is how we feel so strong
That this love can not be wrong
And if I were to sing a song
It would welcome Nightingales to sing with me


The nights do pine and hurt rules the moment
The miles do fuel the unrequited torment
But hopes are worth to hold and keep
That one day hopes will turn to touch so deep.

Let skin one day touch skin to skin
Let love one day be filled within
Let love be shown and displayed so right
Let close be truth, in day and night




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« Reply #304 on: 15/09/2006 17:45:25 »
Craniel, You are amazing in the way you express your feelings! So much heart inside your words that one could touch and feel your love for one another!  I am so touched by the words you write and look so forward to reading them more often.... I hope you have enjoyed ours also.. It has been such a wonderfull thread, I am glad Neil revived it for us! It is a good way to express feelings that one has inside and needs to share! Thank you for adding such pleasure to my day as well as others who enjoy your works! Have to go, am off to work You Have A great day! I will check back throughout day to see how you all are doing without Moi!!!LOL see ya!Won't say goodbye as that word is becoming a nuisance to me,LOL So see ya!!LOL

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« Reply #305 on: 15/09/2006 18:06:47 »
Ola coma esta cranial!  et es so bien to see you...hehe  Okay, let me interpret Hello, how are you Cranial!  It is so good to see you...I stopped in midsentence here...hehe

Missed your magical ways with words and it doeth justify my soul to see!  

Just jumping on a minute or two as I am blatantly bored...LOL  I never used those two words together before..kinda like it!

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« Reply #306 on: 15/09/2006 19:19:49 »
HI LO LOretta, Hows it going today... not good to be so blatantly bored! I love words so that is one I use also!! So funny! Beautiful Poem, nice to have cranial back!

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« Reply #307 on: 16/09/2006 12:38:33 »
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Cricket Cricket why can't I just kick it.



Could it be because it it not football (soccer) - with cricket, you are supposed to thrown the ball, and hit it with a bat (a bit like baseball - but different).[}:)][:D]



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« Reply #308 on: 16/09/2006 12:56:27 »
Karen, your poem for George is beautiful and oh so true. You have a magical way with words and emotions.

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« Reply #309 on: 16/09/2006 13:20:12 »
Thank-you Gaia, George is a great fellow very kind friend!

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« Reply #310 on: 16/09/2006 13:26:04 »
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Originally posted by Karen W.

Thank-you Gaia, George is a great fellow very kind friend!

Karen



Oh dear, I'm going to go all shy, and blush, any minute now [8)][:I][:I][:X]



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« Reply #311 on: 16/09/2006 13:27:26 »
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quote:
Originally posted by Karen W.

Thank-you Gaia, George is a great fellow very kind friend!

Karen



Oh dear, I'm going to go all shy, and blush, any minute now [8)][:I][:I][:X]



George




I could tell... but I won't [;)][:)]

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« Reply #312 on: 16/09/2006 13:35:49 »
He is such a softy! So sweet, You made me feel comfortable accepting the mod job... I was really worried but not so much now... more things to learn coming up, but am sure I will! Thanks bunches for all the other stuff too!I wouldn't have made you know!! Pretty scarey thought!
If you haven't yet go back and read all the others, George is great on his own in here! he's due to give us a nice piece of work to read.... eh George? Your others were great!!

Karen
« Last Edit: 16/09/2006 13:40:06 by Karen W. »

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« Reply #313 on: 17/09/2006 00:24:42 »
Internet Connection you're so slow
I wish you were as fast as a two bit HO ! [:D]


Now that's quality poemage and you all know it !!


On a serious note...I've been reading this thread from the beginning and .I really love everybody poetry here.There are some real gems here !!.............Hadrians is excellent, deep and meaningful !...Karen's is filled with so much passion I feel she is gonna burst...Lo's is profound and very clever ,a pleasure to read....and Cranials...(Ian yes? ).......he don't post much here but I wish he would....I love the way he words his verses....or what ever they're called.

You guys should publish a book or something......

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« Reply #314 on: 17/09/2006 01:41:23 »
Look who should publish a book! you should finish and follow through with yours if you can!!

Thanks for the very lovely compliments and I wish you would post yours in here also, as we have all seen your skill.. you and Hadrian are great!!Ian loretta  also.. There are so many others who have added to this thread and it is really wise to read them all. There is a ton of talent buried within these 6 pages! I am proud of every entry.. I stopped writing for over twenty years, and then found the forum and began to enjoy the freedom of expression, something we don't always have.. Sometimes for whatever reason part of ourselves become styfled and we allow those parts to hide away inside... The shame lies in the beauty that can come from the heart but is held locked in, away from those whom may enjoy or even benifit from the expressions of the words and the soul as one allows their real feelings to emerge on to the page in the form of prose and poetry ...such beauty and healing can come with such a freedom.....we should never forget that!

 Neil thanks for pulling this old thread out I for one love it very much!!I am sure others do to.. I am about to add another poem. I am trying to finish it tonight!

Karen
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« Reply #315 on: 17/09/2006 04:45:44 »
Blushing...clever and profound...duh, I dunno about thut one...hehe  Neil big enormous pressure squeezing you(interpretation for hug in Francais) Maybe we should strut our "stuff" as a forum in a whole?  LOL  You are pretty deep, intelligent, and comical as well!  ;-)

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« Reply #316 on: 17/09/2006 06:08:03 »
Yes he is and sure likes to think otherwise of himself! He's a softy too just Like you LO!!!But I am not yelling this time!

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« Reply #317 on: 17/09/2006 09:09:22 »
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Originally posted by Karen W.

Look who should publish a book! you should finish and follow through with yours if you can!!

Thanks for the very lovely compliments and I wish you would post yours in here also, as we have all seen your skill.. you and Hadrian are great!!Ian loretta  also.. There are so many others who have added to this thread and it is really wise to read them all. There is a ton of talent buried within these 6 pages! I am proud of every entry.. I stopped writing for over twenty years, and then found the forum and began to enjoy the freedom of expression, something we don't always have.. Sometimes for whatever reason part of ourselves become styfled and we allow those parts to hide away inside... The shame lies in the beauty that can come from the heart but is held locked in, away from those whom may enjoy or even benifit from the expressions of the words and the soul as one allows their real feelings to emerge on to the page in the form of prose and poetry ...such beauty and healing can come with such a freedom.....we should never forget that!

 Neil thanks for pulling this old thread out I for one love it very much!!I am sure others do to.. I am about to add another poem. I am trying to finish it tonight!

Karen




Let's not forget about all that romantic mush that you have virtually painted on a canvas here..I can feel it, see it, breathe it, and live it..aagghh[:0]

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« Reply #318 on: 17/09/2006 09:09:59 »
yeah, I noticed sneaky entry there...lil queenie mod!  LOL

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« Reply #319 on: 17/09/2006 16:52:35 »
HEE HEE HEE HEE HEE....Sorry Lo You know the truth, you picked a silly romantic to get tangled up with.... Just can't help it.. It just oozes out what can I say?... Be good now friend....LOL

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« Reply #320 on: 17/09/2006 23:07:42 »
innocent seduction

imagining the crescent moon of his lips upon mine,
in-forms nightly wakefulness.
as light dances across his blue eyes,
he remains a vision solely for me.
he names me partner;
without him i would be nameless.
his gleaming, radiant smile enchanting,
he sparks something of joy within.
the way he moves re-turns earthly grace,
creating that deep ensouled peace.
night deep hair falls across his eyes to shade them from knowing,
embracing him but scant fulfillment of my desires.

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« Reply #321 on: 17/09/2006 23:30:12 »
WOW LO !!..YES...profound and clever....I luff it Mam !!

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« Reply #322 on: 17/09/2006 23:38:44 »
Yep, funny, I remembered I wrote this and was filling a bit...uh, never mind...LOL  and was skiddaddled out of the room...hehe  Yes, it was Denny...

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« Reply #323 on: 17/09/2006 23:48:51 »
Loretta thanks for sharing such a beautifully sweet Romantic poem.. It is very lovely as you are!

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« Reply #324 on: 17/09/2006 23:52:29 »
Ok loretta I have posted to this three times to tell you I love your romantic sweet poem it is very touching and pretty! This is the third try here goes, copy it first! Whoops delete two leave one, forgot to turn the page!DUH!

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« Reply #325 on: 18/09/2006 03:48:46 »
Thanks Karen!  You are lovely as well!  If only...hmmm, just those two words is giving me some ideas to write upon...maybe?  LOL

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« Reply #326 on: 18/09/2006 04:03:26 »
Loretta you are so funny, Write, Write,  Write!!!

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« Reply #327 on: 16/09/2006 12:38:33 »
quote:
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Cricket Cricket why can't I just kick it.



Could it be because it it not football (soccer) - with cricket, you are supposed to thrown the ball, and hit it with a bat (a bit like baseball - but different).[}:)][:D]



George
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« Reply #328 on: 16/09/2006 12:56:27 »
Karen, your poem for George is beautiful and oh so true. You have a magical way with words and emotions.

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« Reply #329 on: 16/09/2006 13:20:12 »
Thank-you Gaia, George is a great fellow very kind friend!

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« Reply #330 on: 16/09/2006 13:26:04 »
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Originally posted by Karen W.

Thank-you Gaia, George is a great fellow very kind friend!

Karen



Oh dear, I'm going to go all shy, and blush, any minute now [8)][:I][:I][:X]



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« Reply #331 on: 16/09/2006 13:27:26 »
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quote:
Originally posted by Karen W.

Thank-you Gaia, George is a great fellow very kind friend!

Karen



Oh dear, I'm going to go all shy, and blush, any minute now [8)][:I][:I][:X]



George




I could tell... but I won't [;)][:)]

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« Reply #332 on: 16/09/2006 13:35:49 »
He is such a softy! So sweet, You made me feel comfortable accepting the mod job... I was really worried but not so much now... more things to learn coming up, but am sure I will! Thanks bunches for all the other stuff too!I wouldn't have made you know!! Pretty scarey thought!
If you haven't yet go back and read all the others, George is great on his own in here! he's due to give us a nice piece of work to read.... eh George? Your others were great!!

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« Reply #333 on: 17/09/2006 00:24:42 »
Internet Connection you're so slow
I wish you were as fast as a two bit HO ! [:D]


Now that's quality poemage and you all know it !!


On a serious note...I've been reading this thread from the beginning and .I really love everybody poetry here.There are some real gems here !!.............Hadrians is excellent, deep and meaningful !...Karen's is filled with so much passion I feel she is gonna burst...Lo's is profound and very clever ,a pleasure to read....and Cranials...(Ian yes? ).......he don't post much here but I wish he would....I love the way he words his verses....or what ever they're called.

You guys should publish a book or something......

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« Reply #334 on: 17/09/2006 04:45:44 »
Blushing...clever and profound...duh, I dunno about thut one...hehe  Neil big enormous pressure squeezing you(interpretation for hug in Francais) Maybe we should strut our "stuff" as a forum in a whole?  LOL  You are pretty deep, intelligent, and comical as well!  ;-)

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« Reply #335 on: 17/09/2006 06:08:03 »
Yes he is and sure likes to think otherwise of himself! He's a softy too just Like you LO!!!But I am not yelling this time!

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« Reply #336 on: 17/09/2006 09:09:22 »
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Originally posted by Karen W.

Look who should publish a book! you should finish and follow through with yours if you can!!

Thanks for the very lovely compliments and I wish you would post yours in here also, as we have all seen your skill.. you and Hadrian are great!!Ian loretta  also.. There are so many others who have added to this thread and it is really wise to read them all. There is a ton of talent buried within these 6 pages! I am proud of every entry.. I stopped writing for over twenty years, and then found the forum and began to enjoy the freedom of expression, something we don't always have.. Sometimes for whatever reason part of ourselves become styfled and we allow those parts to hide away inside... The shame lies in the beauty that can come from the heart but is held locked in, away from those whom may enjoy or even benifit from the expressions of the words and the soul as one allows their real feelings to emerge on to the page in the form of prose and poetry ...such beauty and healing can come with such a freedom.....we should never forget that!

 Neil thanks for pulling this old thread out I for one love it very much!!I am sure others do to.. I am about to add another poem. I am trying to finish it tonight!

Karen




Let's not forget about all that romantic mush that you have virtually painted on a canvas here..I can feel it, see it, breathe it, and live it..aagghh[:0]

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« Reply #337 on: 17/09/2006 09:09:59 »
yeah, I noticed sneaky entry there...lil queenie mod!  LOL

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« Reply #338 on: 17/09/2006 16:52:35 »
HEE HEE HEE HEE HEE....Sorry Lo You know the truth, you picked a silly romantic to get tangled up with.... Just can't help it.. It just oozes out what can I say?... Be good now friend....LOL

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« Reply #339 on: 17/09/2006 23:07:42 »
innocent seduction

imagining the crescent moon of his lips upon mine,
in-forms nightly wakefulness.
as light dances across his blue eyes,
he remains a vision solely for me.
he names me partner;
without him i would be nameless.
his gleaming, radiant smile enchanting,
he sparks something of joy within.
the way he moves re-turns earthly grace,
creating that deep ensouled peace.
night deep hair falls across his eyes to shade them from knowing,
embracing him but scant fulfillment of my desires.

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« Reply #340 on: 17/09/2006 23:30:12 »
WOW LO !!..YES...profound and clever....I luff it Mam !!

Men are the same as women, just inside out !
Men are the same as women, just inside out !

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« Reply #341 on: 17/09/2006 23:38:44 »
Yep, funny, I remembered I wrote this and was filling a bit...uh, never mind...LOL  and was skiddaddled out of the room...hehe  Yes, it was Denny...

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« Reply #342 on: 17/09/2006 23:48:51 »
Loretta thanks for sharing such a beautifully sweet Romantic poem.. It is very lovely as you are!

Karen
« Last Edit: 19/10/2006 16:52:03 by Karen W. »

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« Reply #343 on: 17/09/2006 23:52:29 »
Ok loretta I have posted to this three times to tell you I love your romantic sweet poem it is very touching and pretty! This is the third try here goes, copy it first! Whoops delete two leave one, forgot to turn the page!DUH!

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« Last Edit: 12/10/2006 09:46:19 by Karen W. »

"Life is not measured by the number of Breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away."

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« Reply #344 on: 18/09/2006 03:48:46 »
Thanks Karen!  You are lovely as well!  If only...hmmm, just those two words is giving me some ideas to write upon...maybe?  LOL

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« Reply #345 on: 18/09/2006 04:03:26 »
Loretta you are so funny, Write, Write,  Write!!!

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« Reply #346 on: 18/09/2006 22:28:44 »



Mermaid Wrestler

I still hear the tick
of the clock high above
the only bare walls of white

light happy children
run and play
among the rubble of
spent dreams

scattered to four corner
winds blow
this way and that
tossing crisp dry
leaves that yes won't

look sadly back
across divides that slow
separate me
and join all in out or as
tilt the table
 
turns pretty heads or
tails of in time
spent in power of ages
as if one ever

you wait in line so
drawn so straight
or gay abandon you
press the a flesh
in sweaty hands

christian and her son  
draped in her arms
viewing a vatican
floor unexpecting
mermaid wrestler

collect their thoughts
on food stamps
the foot that has to rock
and role

another cigarette
another drink
another day another life
I still hear the tick



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« Reply #347 on: 19/09/2006 00:53:00 »
quote:
Originally posted by Karen W.

Loretta you are so funny, Write, Write,  Write!!!

Karen



I will...but too busy right now to write....geez...[:(]

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« Reply #348 on: 19/09/2006 03:25:50 »
Hadrian, That one had avery different flow, nice...I liked the movement and the thoughts..the very reality of what I veiwed when I read it!

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« Reply #349 on: 19/09/2006 16:06:17 »
My Truth;
 The only Truth I know is I am not this Body, I am not this Mind.

 When the thought arises " I am this body, I am this mind." confusion, pain, suffering, pleasure, all flourish. This body and this mind are what you inhabit. This is Your Body and Your Mind. These events of this world do not occur to you; they occur to the bodies and minds we possess; which are parts of the material world. A soul is the witness that inhabits this body and uses this mind to interpret this "real" material world. This body and this mind say "I suffer. I hurt. I hate. I fear. I am not free. I need. I am this. I am that." This body and this mind are right. It does hurt. It does fear. It does hate. But, You do not because you are not it. You will not hurt when you realize this. Nor can you inflict the same
when you realize this. When you see that you cannot be hurt, you cannot be killed, you will not fear Death. When you see that hate Always leads to more hate, you will never hate again. When you meet fear and hate with open arms and a smile, they are destined to die. They require more of themselves to thrive. Meet fear with fear and it will thrive.

The mind and body must be in harmony with the soul to be of any use for true progress. Studying books, intellectual discussions, etc... are all necessary tools that can refine the mind into a more useful tool. But without the first cultivation of the Real Knowledge, that of which is who You are, these studies of lower knowledge can hardly be useful in the hands of minds and bodies controlling themselves. For True progress to envelop this world, the knowledge of the body and mind must be utilized as a tool by that which You are. That which We are.

 We will end all the sufferings and pains of this world when we realize collectively that we are One. When there are no bodies and minds left to their own device, peace and harmony will flourish. As individuals some may know prosperous times, entire civilizations may indeed know prosperous times, but the times will endlessly continue in the cycle of birth, growth, decay, and death. As One we will all know prosperous eternity.

 When we realize we are not this body and this mind, we can free ourselves from this cycle of birth, growth, decay, and death. If even one person in this world  says "I am this mind. I am this body. I hate. I hurt. I fear Death, I will Die": if even one person believes this, and believes he is an individual, then wars, pain, suffering, birth, growth, decay, and death will prevail.

Believe No man who says you must fear this or you must fear that. He cannot lead you to the freedom you want and he claims to offer. You cannot buy freedom. You cannot sell it, steal it, borrow it, earn it, or win it. You Are It. When even the notion arises that "I cannot do this, I cannot do that, I am not free", it is the mind and the body operating itself. You can do anything. The mind and body have buried the soul, the eternal source of ALL, with guilt, fear, hate, suffering, pleasure and pain. The Soul and Freedom can only be realized when all of the notions arising from "I am this body, I am this mind" cease. When you answer your own question of "Who am I?", All will be revealed.

 Be dilligent. It is not easy to answer this question. You have years and decades of thought, pain and pleasure all working in unison to hide you from your Self. You have only to ask the question "Who am I?". Do not let the mind answer itself. It does not know. Do not look for a book to answer this question. It cannot know. Anyone who says "Follow me, I'll show you the way" has not yet himself found the answer. Simply ask the question "Who am I?" and then do only one thing: Keep quiet. Do not let the mind search the past for answers. Nor let the mind search the future. Do not let the mind speak to itself.The answer is not of words. So do not think the answer will come to you as such. But, you will know it when it comes. It may happen instantly, or it may take the rest of this life, or it may take eternity. But it does not matter because Time does not exist. Any time is the same time. And as such Now is the only time. What ever you want to do, do it Now. For Now you are Free.