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« Reply #50 on: 22/04/2007 00:25:39 »
Lol Neil, I hope you were joking. [;)]


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« Reply #51 on: 22/04/2007 00:33:47 »
IT is an excellent story.. The kids listened today outside on the green mat where they saw the evaporation taking place.. They loved it.. They want to put it in a large book and make pictures for the story..I loved it to it is a brilliant piece to teach children about the wonders of nature and not bore them.. YAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!! They are going to illustrate their own big book and I am going to make an attemt to do some pictures for also but in a more reasonable size book,decent size for a child... then we can read it all the time and especially when we do this area of science!! I likey it too Neily It was wonderful!

Hi Karen Mam..

This is awesome......is there any way at all you'll be allowed to send me copies or pictures of the work the kids do for that story ?


I will email you.. no names or faces of course.. LOL It is a privacy thing.. Wait for your email..LOl

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« Reply #52 on: 22/04/2007 00:36:32 »
:( im not a handful im actaully very helpful just so you know :p
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« Reply #53 on: 22/04/2007 00:38:19 »
IT is an excellent story.. The kids listened today outside on the green mat where they saw the evaporation taking place.. They loved it.. They want to put it in a large book and make pictures for the story..I loved it to it is a brilliant piece to teach children about the wonders of nature and not bore them.. YAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!! They are going to illustrate their own big book and I am going to make an attemt to do some pictures for also but in a more reasonable size book,decent size for a child... then we can read it all the time and especially when we do this area of science!! I likey it too Neily It was wonderful!

Hi Karen Mam..

This is awesome......is there any way at all you'll be allowed to send me copies or pictures of the work the kids do for that story ?


I will email you.. no names or faces of course.. LOL It is a privacy thing.. Wait for your email..LOl



Of course I understand !!.....and agree with the policy !!..THANK EWE !!
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« Reply #54 on: 22/04/2007 00:38:50 »
:( im not a handful im actaully very helpful just so you know :p

Ben is the best !!...
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« Reply #55 on: 22/04/2007 00:44:56 »
Hey Ben! [;)]
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« Reply #56 on: 22/04/2007 00:48:30 »
:( im not a handful im actaully very helpful just so you know :p

So Mr. Helpful Explain Broadband to this old women! LOL I get my 7.26 MB internet tuesday thanks to Seany! LOL Motivated me a bit! LOL It was a simple phone call away! LOL

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« Reply #57 on: 22/04/2007 00:53:45 »
LOL. Quite expensive, I must say! [:o]
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« Reply #58 on: 22/04/2007 00:59:55 »
LOL. Quite expensive, I must say! [:o]

Yes it is but I am paying $39.00 a month for dial up right now!!! So if I get rid of that the expense will only be 30 some more a month..so it should be ok..

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« Reply #59 on: 22/04/2007 01:05:30 »
Hmm.. Why is dialup so expensive? I thought you said there is $29.99 broadband too?
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« Reply #60 on: 22/04/2007 01:11:43 »
That is not AOL! LOL

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« Reply #61 on: 22/04/2007 01:13:18 »
Oh.. So AOL = Rip off. Huh?
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« Reply #62 on: 22/04/2007 01:37:05 »
Yes much!!

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« Reply #63 on: 22/04/2007 04:33:19 »
MY aol costs 39.99 a month dial up say 40.00 monthly ..It stinks lots of connection problems and getting booted off in the middle of stuff..etc, although it has been alot better since the Aol tech, guided me through some repairs..

Sudden Link:
The highspeed low package 256K up and down feed they want 24.95 a month

The med package is 512K, up and down feed, which is 4 MB they want  49.95 a month

The third is their premium package and it has 7.26 MB for 64.95

I ordered the professional hookup , it comes with some kind of specialed box that goes on the back of my computer in the phone jack I believe, and she said it will be quite fast and in two months that package will be upgraded to a 9 MB system. I know nothing else bout broadband or otherwise, she said they will be here on tuesday this week to install the thing and I will be in service and running by the time they leave according to her! LOL We will see!!!

Hey george what do you think about this suddenlink.com


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« Reply #64 on: 22/04/2007 10:47:00 »
Heehee. Well 7mb will be pretty darn fast! [;)] As will 9mb too. And I doubt Americans over there lie to you, like some English scammers over here. [:P]
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« Reply #65 on: 22/04/2007 13:31:00 »
Don't doubt everyone does no matter where you are there are scammers! LOL

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« Reply #66 on: 22/04/2007 14:08:35 »
Any other short stories ?
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« Reply #67 on: 22/04/2007 16:58:00 »
Once upon a time a girl fell in love with a boy, and their lives were ever changed. She was the happiest she had ever been. There was always a song
in her heart and Love was indeed in the air.

Time passed and the world continued on and so love continued to grow. The skies were bluer then blue and sun shined brighter then bright always, when she remembered the love.

 One day whilst she sat upon her cloud the thunder rolled and lightning flashed high in the sky. There were storms all around and her cloud began to turn grey and soon she felt herself slipping from the cloud which had held her so safely there bonded in love.

The storm passed and the clouds cleared and all that was left in the sky were the wonderful fluffy white clouds, sunshine and a beautiful double rainbow.

With the sunshine came a warm feeling which spread through out the world, blanketing all of those that were touched by the love that had filled the skys with wonder...

  Each time he seen a rainbow he would remember the joy and the beauty they created with that love, and like the magic of that love, every night there after, when darkness filled the sky, the boy looked up high, and knew that those stars that twinkled there in the sky, were magic sprinkles left by the trail of the love that would shine forever in his heart.
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« Reply #68 on: 22/04/2007 17:14:14 »
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww !!..very nice mam !!
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« Reply #69 on: 22/04/2007 17:22:06 »
Thanks Kind Sir!!

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« Reply #70 on: 23/04/2007 13:10:31 »
Very nice.

I would post..but i'm running out of time!

Maybe later..
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« Reply #71 on: 23/04/2007 16:46:57 »
I would like to hear your story!

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« Reply #72 on: 23/04/2007 16:48:59 »
Short story, or do mean the book I was writing?
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« Reply #73 on: 23/04/2007 16:51:36 »
 I think this is for short stories, but you are welcome to tell us about your book perhaps a condensed version..as if it is something you intend to publish you may want to not put it here where this is a public forum..

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« Reply #74 on: 24/04/2007 16:23:09 »
No one would want ot copy it, it sucks remember?
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« Reply #75 on: 24/04/2007 17:40:08 »
Who Says it sucks.. Send it to me I will read it and tell you what I think.. email it if its not to long!!

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« Reply #76 on: 25/04/2007 13:14:32 »
.............................................I dunno....
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« Reply #77 on: 25/04/2007 14:51:21 »
.............................................I dunno....

You could always revise it and publish it first then show me..LOL

I bet it is a great story!

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« Reply #78 on: 25/04/2007 16:42:15 »
It's only halfway done...
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« Reply #79 on: 25/04/2007 16:45:48 »
Well thats a start! A masterpiece takes time and patience does it not?

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« Reply #80 on: 25/04/2007 16:47:09 »
I guess so.

So much time...perhaps wasted...perhaps used..
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« Reply #81 on: 25/04/2007 17:00:45 »
Then stop wasting time and get thy butt busy Young man!!!LOL

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« Reply #82 on: 25/04/2007 19:54:50 »
heh.
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« Reply #83 on: 26/04/2007 17:06:19 »
LOL You can do it!

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« Reply #84 on: 23/09/2007 07:26:17 »
heh.

Heh Nothing! I have been waiting and only getting bits and pieces of your story, I would sure like to here the whole thing so far in one shot! Come on Ben.. Send me what you have and lets get you going on it! You can get them published for free I believe.. There are sites that do it with copyrights and everything.  Come on Ben Lets do it. You write I read you write more and then you finally finish and publish it! Is it science fiction? I am assuming we have been getting little snippets.

I want to read it!!!!

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« Reply #85 on: 23/09/2007 07:27:23 »
You can email it or post it in a private blog so you choose who sees and who does not!

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