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Just Chat! / Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« on: 11/12/2006 21:49:47 »
Hi Friends...
Always impressed by the poems here.
here's one I just made.
How do you measure such a thing that is felt ?
It fills you so tight that it tightens your belt
Despair and a loss may occupy your state
But you know it’s a time that you just have to wait
There’s a bucket and my life feels like it’s in it
Days becomes weeks and you measure each minute
Suffering a sorrow , you’ve been shot by an arrow
Is there joy from someone that I may borrow ?
This plea that I have is answered each time
The bend of my life, becomes a straight line
And where there was low, there soon becomes high
Your friendship the Sun, that brightens my sky
And what started as sad , is now inside joy
This lonely midshipman now sings ‘ ship ahoy’
I thought I was sailing this sea all alone
You took me from lost and showed me my home
Always impressed by the poems here.
here's one I just made.
How do you measure such a thing that is felt ?
It fills you so tight that it tightens your belt
Despair and a loss may occupy your state
But you know it’s a time that you just have to wait
There’s a bucket and my life feels like it’s in it
Days becomes weeks and you measure each minute
Suffering a sorrow , you’ve been shot by an arrow
Is there joy from someone that I may borrow ?
This plea that I have is answered each time
The bend of my life, becomes a straight line
And where there was low, there soon becomes high
Your friendship the Sun, that brightens my sky
And what started as sad , is now inside joy
This lonely midshipman now sings ‘ ship ahoy’
I thought I was sailing this sea all alone
You took me from lost and showed me my home