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Re: Universal Utopia: the series WIP
« Reply #220 on: 31/08/2025 06:36:30 »
Chapter 10 - Hunted Hunter
Scene 1: The Whisper
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The school hallway buzzed with the usual post-lunch chatter, lockers slamming and sneakers squeaking against the tile. Harry was halfway to his next class when Jake caught up to him, breathless and wide-eyed.

"Harry," Jake said, lowering his voice, "I need to tell you something. It's about your dad."

Harry stopped, his pulse skipping. "What happened?"

Jake glanced around, then leaned in. "I overheard my dad on the phone last night. He was talking to your father."

Harry's brow furrowed. "Your dad?"

Jake nodded. "He's a cop. Doesn't talk much about work, but this time... I was close enough to hear."

Harry's stomach tightened. "What did he say?"

Jake hesitated, then whispered, "They found a body in the forest. Or... what was left of one."

Harry's breath caught. "Left of one?"

Jake nodded grimly. "A hunter found it. Said it looked like a wolf attack. A whole pack. The remains were scattered... bones, torn flesh, scraps of clothing. But here's the thing... the hunter didn't report it right away. He buried most of it."

Harry blinked. "Buried it?"

"Yeah," Jake said. "He said it felt wrong to leave it out there. So, he took some pictures, grabbed a bloody piece of the uniform, took out a tooth and buried the rest of what he could collect. My dad said the guy was shaken up. Said it looked like the wolves had been feeding for days."

Harry's mind raced. The cadaver. The planted tooth. The wolves.
Harry forced a casual tone. "Did your dad say anything else?"

Jake shook his head. "Just that he called your father right after. Said he needed to talk, although he wasn't sure if your dad would be interested."

Harry nodded slowly, the pieces clicking into place. The plan was working.

He forced a tight smile. "Thanks for telling me, Jake."

Jake shrugged. "Figured you'd want to know. Your dad's not just some farmer, is he?"

Harry gave a half-smirk. "Depends on who's asking."
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Re: Universal Utopia: the series WIP
« Reply #221 on: 31/08/2025 06:46:58 »
Scene 2: The Little Web
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The farmhouse kitchen was quiet, the late afternoon sun casting long shadows across the wooden floor. Harry stood by the counter, arms crossed, watching Stephen rinse out a coffee mug like it was the most normal day in the world.

"Dad," Harry said, voice low but firm. "Jake told me something today. His dad called you to talk about a body in the forest."

Stephen nodded slowly, no surprise in his eyes. "It's true."

Harry's stomach tightened. "But... Why did he call you?"

Stephen said. "Because I asked him to."

Harry blinked. "Wait... you asked him?"

Stephen leaned against the counter, arms folded. "A while back. After you saved Jake's life, his father came here. Thanked me. Said he owed us. I told him if anything unusual ever came through the local station... anything strange, off the books, or hard to explain... I wanted to know."

Harry nodded slowly, the weight of it settling in. "So, the plan worked."

Stephen's voice was calm but edged. "It worked. But now we wait to see who else starts asking questions."

Harry glanced toward the window, the forest beyond it dark and quiet. "And if someone does?"

Stephen's eyes didn't waver. "Then we make sure they don't find anything worth chasing. And you? You've built your own information web without even realizing it."

Harry blinked. "What do you mean?"

"You've got Jake feeding you intel from the police station. You've got Asha watching your back at school. Rowan's got ears everywhere. You're learning how to listen, how to connect dots. That's how it starts."

Harry looked down, unsure whether to feel proud or worried. "I didn't mean to."

Stephen's voice softened. "That's the best kind. The kind that grows naturally. Just remember... information is power. But it's also a responsibility."
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Re: Universal Utopia: the series WIP
« Reply #222 on: 31/08/2025 06:50:48 »
Scene 3: The Routine
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The barn was quiet, the late afternoon light slanting through the rafters in golden beams. The centrifuge sat on the workbench, already humming softly, its presence now as familiar as the scent of antiseptic and metal.

Stephen set down a fresh vial and turned to Harry, who was already rolling up his sleeve.

"Time again," Stephen said gently.

Harry nodded, settling onto the stool. "Twice a week. Like clockwork."

Stephen prepped the needle with practiced ease. "We're on track. Thirty doses in fifteen weeks. Enough to keep Kael alive until the implant runs dry."

Harry winced slightly as the needle slid in, but didn't flinch. "Why not more often? Wouldn't that speed things up?"

Stephen shook his head. "Your body needs time to recover. Veins need to regenerate properly. If we push too hard, we risk damaging your system."

Harry glanced at the centrifuge as the vial filled. "So, it's not just about the blood. It's about keeping me stable."

"Exactly," Stephen said. "You're not a machine. You're the only source of Autoclastin we have. If we burn you out, we lose everything."

Harry nodded slowly, watching the red swirl inside the vial. "So, we pace it. Two draws a week. Thirty doses. Thirty weeks of Kael's life."

Stephen capped the vial and slid it into the centrifuge. "And after that, Kael can be free."

Harry leaned back, the weight of the routine settling into his bones. "I hope he will."

Stephen didn't answer. He just watched the machine spin, the hum filling the barn like a heartbeat.
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« Reply #223 on: 31/08/2025 06:55:25 »
Chapter 11 - Changing Plan
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The old barn was barely warmed by the late afternoon sunlight slipping through the gaps in the weathered wood. Stephen stood near the workbench, his hands folded, eyes tracing the faint dust motes swirling in the quiet air. Harry approached, hesitant but steady.

It's been two weeks, Stephen said finally, voice low but steady. "And I need to talk to you about the plan."

Harry's heart tapped unevenly. "Is something wrong?"

Stephen sighed, a weight pressing down on his shoulders. "It's getting clearer every day that keeping Kael disappeared for a whole year... without slipping up... will be harder than I thought."

He paused, measuring his words carefully.
"The forged evidence, the staged death... they buy time. But the longer this goes on, the greater the risk of exposure. Project David... other eyes... they're watching, and they adapt."

Harry swallowed hard, the familiar tightness knotting in his chest.

"So, we're changing the plan." Stephen turned, eyes softening as they met his son's. "Not abandoning Kael. Just... rewriting the playbook."

Harry nodded, determination hardening inside him. "Whatever it takes. We're in this together."

Stephen placed a firm hand on Harry's shoulder. "Together."

The barn settled into silence again, but now the quiet carried a different weight... a promise of change, and the fight yet to come.
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« Reply #224 on: 31/08/2025 06:56:38 »
Scene 2 - The Warning
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Stephen's voice was calm, but the weight behind it pressed like iron.

"Kael's alive because the world believes he's dead. That illusion is his only shield. But it's fragile, Harry. One wrong move, one familiar face in the wrong place... and it shatters."

Harry frowned, his hands curling into fists at his sides. "What if he just... stays out there? In the forest. Away from everyone. No cities, no roads. Just... gone."

Stephen shook his head slowly. "For a while, it might work. A week. A month, maybe two. But the wilderness isn't a sanctuary... it's a slow bleed. No clean water, no steady food, no medicine. Infection, parasites, injuries that don't heal right... they'll wear him down sooner or later."

Harry's chest tightened. "But at least he'd be safe from them."

"Safe?" Stephen's eyes locked on his, sharp as glass. "You think the forest is empty? Rangers patrol those woods. Hunters wander deeper than they should. Hikers chasing adventure. All it takes is one curious civilian with a camera, and Kael's ghost becomes a headline."

Harry swallowed hard, the image flashing in his mind... Kael crouched in the shadows, only to freeze at the click of a camera lens. The plan, the sacrifice, everything... gone in an instant.

Stephen's voice softened, but the steel never left it. "Hiding buys time, Harry. But time isn't freedom. It's just a longer leash."

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« Reply #225 on: 31/08/2025 07:02:18 »
Scene 3 - The Bond
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Stephen leaned against the workbench, arms folded, his gaze steady on Harry. "There's something else you need to understand. Kael's situation isn't just about hiding. It's about trust."

Harry tilted his head. "Trust?"

"Right now," Stephen said, 'Kael's only reason to play dead is survival. He needs Autoclastin, and we're the only source. That's leverage. But when the implant runs dry... when he doesn't need us anymore... what then?"

Harry frowned. "You think he'd turn on us?"

Stephen shook his head slowly. "Not out of malice. Out of instinct. Once the leash is gone, his priorities shift. He'll want to cut every tie that could drag him back into danger. And if someone offers him safety in exchange for information..." Stephen's voice hardened. "Our secret becomes his bargaining chip."

Harry's stomach knotted. "So, what's your plan?"

Stephen stepped closer, his tone calm but edged with steel. "I'm going to make sure Kael has more than survival to fight for. I want him connected to you. Not just by name, not just by circumstance. By choice."

Harry blinked. "Connected... how?"

Stephen's eyes didn't waver. "You're going to be his pupil."

Harry stared, stunned. "His... what?"

"His student," Stephen said firmly. "You'll train under him. Learn from him. Let him teach you what I can't. When a man invests in someone... when he shapes them, protects them... he doesn't walk away. Even when the leash is gone, he'll still want to guard what he helped build."

Harry swallowed hard, the weight of it settling in. "So, you want him to care about me."

"I want him to see you as more than a secret," Stephen said quietly. "I want him to see you as his legacy."

The barn fell silent, the hum of the centrifuge the only sound. Harry's pulse thudded in his ears. He wasn't sure if this plan scared him more... or thrilled him.
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« Reply #226 on: 31/08/2025 07:07:31 »
Scene 4 - The Hook
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Harry stared at his father, disbelief flickering across his face. "You really think Kael will agree to that? To train me? He barely knows me."

Stephen's expression didn't change. "At first, he won't have a choice. His life depends on us. On the supply."

Harry frowned. "That sounds... like forcing him."

"It's not about force," Stephen said evenly. "It's about time. Time for you to show him who you are. Time for him to see more than a name on a file."

Harry crossed his arms, still uneasy. "And if he doesn't care? If he just takes what he needs and disappears the second he's free?"

Stephen stepped closer, his voice low but firm. "That's where you come in. You're not just my son, Harry. You're the reason he's alive. When we tell him the truth... that it was your insistence that made me take this risk... he'll know you didn't have to save him. You chose to. That matters."

Harry blinked, the weight of those words settling in. "You think that'll make him... what? Like me?"

Stephen's mouth curved into the faintest smile. "Not like you. Care about you. Enough to protect you. Enough to stand with you when the leash is gone."

Harry swallowed hard, his pulse quickening. "And if it doesn't work?"

Stephen's eyes didn't waver. "Then we make it work. Because this isn't just about Kael's survival anymore. It's about yours."
After a long pause, "You know, Harry... when Jonas first came to us, I didn't care much about Kael. He was just another soldier. Another risk."

Harry tilted his head. "But you changed your mind?"

Stephen nodded slowly. "I started digging deeper. Looking into his missions, his choices, the people he spared. And the more I learned... the more I saw someone who wasn't just surviving. He was trying to do the right thing. Even when it cost him everything."

Harry was quiet, letting the words settle.

Stephen turned from the window, his gaze steady. "That's when I realized something. If I could come to care about Kael... maybe Kael could come to care about you. Not because he's told to. But because he sees you. Learns who you are."

Harry frowned. "You think that'll protect me?"

"I think it's our best chance," Stephen said. "People protect what they value. If Kael sees you as more than a source of Autoclastin... if he sees you as someone worth guarding... then even when the leash is gone, he'll stay loyal."

Harry nodded slowly, the weight of the idea settling in. "So, we're not just saving him. We're building something."

Stephen gave a faint smile. "Exactly. Trust isn't given. It's built. And it starts with knowing each other."

The barn fell silent, the hum of the centrifuge filling the space like a distant drumbeat. Harry stared at the floor, his mind spinning with questions he wasn't sure he wanted answers to.
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« Reply #227 on: 31/08/2025 07:13:15 »
Scene 5 - The Destination
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Harry hesitated, the question pressing out before he could stop it. "So, does that mean we're inviting Kael here? To the farmhouse?"

Stephen's answer was immediate. "No. That would be too risky... for him and for us. If anyone from Project David starts sniffing around, this place becomes a trap."

Harry frowned. "Then where? Where's he supposed to train me?"

Stephen's gaze held his, calm but firm. "Guyana. During your summer break."

Harry blinked. "Guyana? As in... Aunt Shania's place?"

Stephen nodded once. "It's remote enough to keep him off the radar, but not so isolated that he'll starve or get sick. And it gives us cover... you visiting family is the perfect excuse."

Harry's mind spun. "Okay... but how do we even get him there? He can't exactly book a flight."

"I've already managed it," Stephen said. "I reached out to Sam. Asked if Kael could stay with them until the leash runs out. Sam agreed. He's arranging the accommodation as we speak."

Harry exhaled slowly, trying to picture it... Kael in Guyana, training him under the thick canopy of rainforest, far from the eyes of Project David. It sounded like something out of a spy novel? only this time, he was in it.

Stephen's voice cut through his thoughts, steady and final. "This isn't just a trip, Harry. It's the start of something bigger. If Kael's going to protect you when the leash is gone, it begins there. That's also where he will get the next batch of Autoclastin. He wouldn't want to miss it."

Harry nodded, the weight of the plan settling on his shoulders like armour. Summer break had never sounded so dangerous.
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« Reply #228 on: 31/08/2025 07:18:26 »
Scene 6 - The Messenger
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Harry leaned against the workbench, his brow furrowed. "So, how do we even tell Kael about this new plan? We can't exactly text him."

Stephen's mouth curved into a faint, humourless smile. "We don't. Jonas does. He's been the messenger all along."

Harry blinked. "Jonas? You mean? he's still in contact with Kael?"

Stephen nodded. "Always has been. That's how Kael's been getting updates, and how I've been getting mine."

Harry frowned, the pieces clicking together. "But... how do you know that? How do you know where Jonas even is?"

Stephen's eyes hardened. "Because I tracked him. From the evidence he brought me... the satchel, the files, the recorder. Every object carries a trail if you know where to look."

Harry's stomach tightened. "So, you found him."

"I did," Stephen said quietly. "And that's when I realized something important."

Harry tilted his head. "What?"

"That this plan isn't airtight," Stephen said, his voice low and deliberate. "If I can find Jonas, someone else can too. And if they do, Kael's ghost story ends."

Harry stared at him, the truth settling like a stone in his chest. "Is that why you changed the plan?"

Stephen gave a single, sharp nod. "Exactly. We need to adapt to new situations and take uncertainties into account. The world doesn't stay still, Harry. Neither can we."

Harry swallowed hard, the weight of it pressing down. "So, what now?"

Stephen's gaze didn't waver. "Now, we make sure Kael has more than survival to keep him loyal. We make sure he has something worth protecting."
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« Reply #229 on: 01/09/2025 13:23:30 »
Chapter 12: Black Tag
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Summer break finally came. Stephen and Harry flied to Guyana as planned.

The rented car's tires hummed steadily on the uneven road as Stephen steered through the outskirts of Georgetown, the city fading behind them while the dense Guyanese jungle crept closer on all sides. Harry sat beside him, the tension in the air as thick as the humid heat pressing against the closed windows.

"We should be close to Jonestown soon," Stephen said, eyes fixed on the winding road ahead. "Not far now."

Harry nodded, his fingers tapping nervously on his knee. "I still can't believe we're actually here."

Suddenly, headlights flashed across the narrow two-lane road ahead, accompanied by the screech of brakes and a sickening metallic crunch. Stephen slammed on the brakes, the car skidding to a stop just short of the wreckage... a battered bus lay jammed against an overturned truck, shattered glass glinting in the fading light.

The rented car pulled up to the side of the road, the tangled wreckage of the bus and truck crash barely a few yards away. Passengers from the bus were hustled to safety, some staggering, others carried by grim-faced rescuers. The air was thick with smoke, screams, and the distant wail of sirens struggling to reach the remote stretch of road.

Harry's eyes widened as people spilled out from the bus, some limping, others bleeding from cuts and bruises. The air was thick with cries, confusion, and the sharp scent of diesel and dust.

Stephen climbed out of the car, Harry close behind, both drawn into the chaotic scene despite the heat and tension. Their eyes were caught by the distressed woman clutching a crying baby

The woman's frantic screams pierced through the chaos. Her voice cracking with desperation as she staggered toward a man moving swiftly among the injured. He wore the faded green jacket of a paramedic, his hands busy distributing coloured triage tags.

"Please! Save my husband, give him a chance!" she cried, gripping the man by the arm.

The paramedic's face was solemn, his eyes flicking briefly toward a man lying motionless inside the wreck of the bus. He got a black triage tag... the mark of the hopeless.

"I'm sorry," the paramedic said quietly, voice tired, his gaze meeting the woman's tear-filled eyes. "He's been triaged black. We're past the point where life-saving is possible."

"No! You can't just let him die!" the woman sobbed, shaking him. "You must do something!"

The paramedic swallowed hard but didn't waver. He moved on quickly to assist others, his figure a solemn pillar amid the disorder. But the women didn't give up and keep following him.

Stephen glanced at Harry, who sat frozen, his youthful face tightened with shock and confusion. "Sometimes," Stephen said softly, "the hardest part of saving lives is knowing when you can't. The triage system is cruel but necessary... to save as many as possible."

Harry swallowed, the sight burning into his memory... the desperate prayer of a wife met with cold facts, the line between hope and reality drawn in black and red tags.

Stephen stepped forward, his sharp gaze meeting the paramedic's. "Why black? What happened?"

The paramedic glanced at the victim... a man lying pale, chest rising faintly. "Cardiac arrest. He went into ventricular fibrillation. We need a defibrillator to restart his heart, but there's none available out here... no resources within reach."

Stephen's face tightened with understanding, the harsh reality of limited medical capability settling over him like a shadow. "So, no shock, no chance."

"Exactly," the paramedic answered grimly. "Without the machine, nothing we do can bring him back. We have to focus on those we can save."

The woman's sobs caught in her throat. She clung tighter to the baby as Stephen placed a steady hand on Harry's shoulder.

"Sometimes saving lives isn't about miracles," Stephen said quietly. "It's about hard choices and knowing your limits."

Harry looked away, the brutal truth weighing heavy in his young chest as the paramedic moved on to the next injured.

Stephen stepped gently between the woman and the paramedic, raising a hand to halt her frantic approach. "Please, ma'am. Don't disturb him while he's working." His voice was calm but firm, carrying the weight of command.

Her tears welled anew, her cries desperate. Stephen softened slightly but stayed resolute. "I promise we'll do everything we can to help your husband, but I can't guarantee the outcome. We must move quickly... there's no time to waste."

The woman's shoulders sagged, reluctant acceptance in her eyes. She nodded, swallowing her fear but clinging fiercely to hope.

"Dad, what exactly is that thing he said? The one needed to save her husband... the defib-what?"

Stephen turned from packing away the medical gear and smiled softly. "A defibrillator, Harry. It's a machine that sends an electric shock to the heart."

Harry's eyes widened. "Why? What does it do?"

Stephen crouched down beside him, speaking with patient care. "Sometimes, when a person's heart stops or beats irregularly, it needs a strong jolt to get back on track. The shock helps restore the heart's natural rhythm. Without it, the heart can't pump blood properly."

Harry tapped his chest lightly, the weight of that knowledge sinking in. "So, it's like jump-starting a car, but for our heart?"

Stephen nodded. "Exactly. You could say it's a way to restart someone's heart safely when it falters."

Harry looked thoughtful for a moment, then grinned with a flicker of determination. "Maybe I can help with that. You saw how my shocks work. If I can control it, I could be like a living defibrillator."

Stephen's eyes flicked up, a mixture of pride and caution in his gaze. "That's why I'm training you, Harry. To be ready for moments just like this. But it's a huge responsibility."

Harry squared his shoulders. "I'm ready. I want to help."

Stephen smiled wider, ruffling his son's hair. "Good. Because the world's going to need all the help it can get."
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« Reply #230 on: 01/09/2025 13:34:24 »
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Stephen turned toward Harry. "Help me get him out of the bus. We'll lay him down here, where we can work more freely."

With careful, steady hands, Stephen and Harry lifted the injured man from the wreckage. His face was pale, bruised, and he breathed shallowly.

As they laid him down on the open ground, the woman knelt beside her husband, clutching his hand tightly. Her voice broke with emotion. "He used his body to protect me and our baby when the bus crashed. He shielded us." She looked up pleadingly at Stephen. "He deserves a chance to live."

Stephen met her gaze, the fierce love shining through her tears unmistakable. "I know. We'll do everything possible."

The urgency of their task pressed on them all, but beneath it, a fragile thread of hope held fast.

Stephen dropped to his knees beside the man and quickly checked for a pulse and breathing. Finding neither, his expression tightened. "He's unresponsive. No breath. No heartbeat."

Without hesitation, Stephen began chest compressions, hands steady and pressing hard and fast into the man's chest. His face was calm but focused, every movement precise.

"Harry," Stephen said, not looking away from the patient. "I need you to help me."

Harry nodded, alert and ready.

Stephen took a deep breath, then instructed, "Place your hands on the man's chest. We're going to send an electric shock."

Harry hesitated for a moment. "How strong? And how long should I hold it?"

Stephen's gaze met his, steady and sure. "Start with a short pulse, about half strength. Not too long. We'll watch how he responds, then adjust."

Harry nodded, steadying himself. He channelled his bioelectric energy through his hands into the man's chest. A faint crackle sparked, the pulse short and sharp.

Stephen's eyes scanned the man's chest and face for any sign of reaction... a flutter, a gasp.

"No response yet," Stephen said quietly. "Prepare for another pulse if needed, but keep it controlled."

Harry's hands tingled with the residual energy, his heartbeat thundering in his ears. The weight of responsibility sharpened every sense.

Stephen kept his rhythm steady, chest compressions pressing deep and unrelenting into the man's chest.

After a few more compressions, he glanced at Harry. "Alright, one more shock. This time, increase the strength closer to full. Keep the pulse short."

Harry took a steadying breath, his hands crisp with bioelectric energy. He sent the stronger pulse through his hands into the patient's chest. A crackling energy surged, sharper and more intense.

"No response yet," Stephen murmured, resuming compressions.

They repeated the shock two more times, each one stronger and precise. Harry felt the strain in his arms, the weight of focus heavy.

On the third shock, a faint flutter stirred beneath their hands. The man's chest gave a shallow heave.

Stephen's eyes lit. "I've got a pulse! And... he's starting to breathe!"

Harry exhaled, relief washing over him as the man coughed weakly, colour tinting his face.

Stephen gave a nod of approval. "Good. Keep monitoring. We're not out of the woods yet."

Together, they stayed vigilant, ready to act again if needed, but the signs of life held strong.

Stephen's voice was calm but firm as he looked at the woman, still shaken but grateful. "I'm glad he's going to be okay."

She nodded, eyes bright with unshed tears. "Thank you... both of you. I don't know what would have happened if you hadn't come when you did."

Stephen hesitated, then added carefully, "But what happened here... how we saved him... needs to stay between us."

The woman frowned slightly, confusion flickering in her gaze. "Why? I just want everyone to know you helped us."

Harry spoke softly, "Sometimes things have to stay quiet to keep people safe."

She looked between them, searching their faces for a hint of explanation. Stephen's eyes held hers steadily.

"It's for his protection. And for yours." Stephen said quietly. "Promise me you won't tell anyone the details."

After a long moment, the woman nodded slowly, resolve settling in. "I promise."

Harry gave a small smile. "Thank you."

Stephen's expression softened just a little. "Good. That's the right choice. But next time, don't interfere with the paramedics again in emergency situations. They have procedures to maximize the chance of saving people."
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« Reply #231 on: 01/09/2025 13:42:47 »
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Stephen's tone grew instructional as he turned to Harry, "We need to keep working on the others... first aid, keep them calm, stop any bleeding. You ready?"

Harry nodded, determination settling over his features. Together, they moved through the crowd, Stephen showing Harry how to check pulses, clean wounds, and apply pressure.

Minutes passed, hours it seemed, until the distant wail of sirens filled the air. The ambulance arrived, staffed with medical professionals who swiftly took over. Stephen and Harry stepped back, letting the experts do their work.

As they made their way out of the chaos, Stephen's voice lowered to a more personal tone. "I should tell you something, Harry. When I promised the woman we'd save her husband, I didn't mean to... I said it just to keep her from interfering with the paramedics."

Harry looked up, surprise flickering in his eyes.

Stephen continued, "But then the paramedic told us what was needed. Your ability to generate electric shock gave us a real chance. I realized... maybe we could save him after all."
He nodded toward the direction of the ambulance. "And then his wife's story... the way she talked about his unselfishness... it strengthened my decision. We have saved a good man."

Harry felt a swell of pride, mixed with the heavy weight of responsibility.

Stephen gave him a steady look. "We did good today, son. We gave someone more time. And that's what counts."

Harry nodded, but his eyes lingered on the ambulance as it pulled away. "What if we hadn't made it in time?" he asked quietly. "What if the shock didn't work?"

Stephen placed a hand on his shoulder, firm and steady. "Then we would've still done everything we could. That's what matters, Harry. Not the outcome. The effort."

Harry frowned slightly. "But it would've felt like failure."

Stephen shook his head. "Failure only stings when you know you didn't give your all. But we did. You did. And today, we were lucky. But even if we hadn't been... you should never carry guilt for doing your best."

Harry looked up, the weight of those words settling in. "So, trying is enough?"

"Trying with everything you've got," Stephen said. "That's more than enough."

Harry nodded slowly, but the weight of the moment lingered. "It still feels cruel. That black tag... it's like giving up."

Stephen's gaze didn't waver. "It is cruel. Especially to the ones who get it. But the triage system wasn't built to be kind... it was built to be effective. One death is a tragedy. A million deaths? Just statistics. That's the cold truth of crisis management."

Harry frowned. "But shouldn't we try anyway? Even if the odds are bad?"

Stephen placed a hand on his shoulder. "We should. And we did. But we can't let emotion cloud judgment. In a disaster, saving one life at the cost of ten isn't mercy... it's miscalculation. The rule exists for a reason. It's not about fairness. It's about survival."

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« Reply #232 on: 01/09/2025 13:57:48 »
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0:00 An Unusual Enemy
5:18 Monsanto?s Secret Poison Problem
11:17 Vietnam and Agent Orange
14:08 Roundup
19:31 How Monsanto controls seeds
26:06 The Crop Mafia
31:10 The Monsanto Papers
41:18 How dangerous is Roundup really?

You might found some similarities with my story here, where a system relies on a pair of chemicals.
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Chapter 13 : People's Temple
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The humid air hung heavy as Stephen and Harry walked slowly through the courtyard of the people's temple, the vibrant colours and intricate carvings a stark contrast to the sombre history held within its walls.

Stephen stopped beneath the shade of an ancient tree, his gaze distant. "This temple," he began quietly, "was once a place of hope... a beacon for people hungry for peace and belonging."

Harry looked around, sensing the weight in his father's tone. "What happened here?"

Stephen's eyes darkened, his voice dropping to a solemn hush. "Years ago, thousands gathered here, united by a shared vision and the power of belief. But that belief... so fervent, so absolute... became a cage."

He gestured to the worn stone beneath their feet. "Led by a charismatic leader, they placed their faith in a promise of salvation, a world beyond pain and struggle. But blind conviction, unguarded by reason or doubt, can be as dangerous as any weapon."

Stephen's fingers traced the edge of a carved relief depicting faces frozen in despair. "This place witnessed one of the darkest moments... a mass suicide rooted not in despair, but in the refusal to question, to think critically. Thousands took their own lives, convinced it was the only path to freedom."

His voice cracked with the memory. "Critical thinking was drowned by fanaticism. Reason was sacrificed on the altar of blind faith."

Harry swallowed hard, the horror settling deep in his chest. "So many... trusted without question?"

"Exactly," Stephen said softly. "And history teaches us this: beliefs, no matter how hopeful, must always be tempered with scepticism and reflection. Otherwise, they can lead to destruction instead of salvation."

He looked into Harry's eyes, his expression serious but filled with quiet hope. "We come here not just to honour those lost, but to remember why we must choose a better way. To question, to think, and to guard our minds fiercely."

Stephen rested a hand on Harry's shoulder. "Let the tragedy here be a warning, Harry. History demands we learn from it, so the cycle never repeats."

The temple's silent air seemed to hum with the weight of those lessons, a fragile reminder of the power... and peril... of belief.

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The warm humidity wrapped around them as Harry and Stephen stepped into the open courtyard of the people's temple nestled deep within the Guyanese rainforest. The intricate carvings and colourful flags fluttering in the breeze seemed to hum with a quiet reverence.

Harry glanced around at the serene faces of the gathered worshippers, then turned to his father, a question that had been gnawing at him rising to the surface.

?Dad,? Harry asked hesitantly, ?do you believe in God??

Stephen?s eyes softened as he studied the temple?s sacred symbols, then back at Harry. ?It depends on what they say.?

Harry frowned slightly. ?I mean... do you believe that God exists? Really??

Stephen smiled faintly, his gaze thoughtful. ?I?m pretty sure that gods exist. At least in people?s minds.?

He took a slow breath, the sounds of chanting floating through the air around them. ?Even if they don?t, the power of belief is so strong that we will create one. Or more.?

Harry considered his father?s words, the weight of them settling deep within him as the temple?s peaceful aura collided with the complexity of his own tangled thoughts about faith, power, and purpose.

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« Reply #235 on: Today at 15:24:00 »
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The road stretched like a scar through the jungle, silent except for the hum of cicadas. Stephen eased the car off the asphalt and rolled it several meters into the undergrowth. The tires crunched softly on dry leaves before coming to a stop beneath a canopy of tangled branches.

Harry glanced around, uneasy.

"Why are we stopping here? Uncle Sam's supposed to pick us up, right?"

Stephen killed the engine and checked his watch. "He will. A few miles from the temple."

Harry frowned. "Then why not wait on the road?"

Stephen's eyes scanned the tree line, sharp and calculating. "Because if someone's tailing us, I'd rather find out now than when Sam shows up."

Harry leaned back, exhaling. "Great. So, we're just... sitting ducks?"

"Not exactly." Stephen stepped out, grabbed a folded sheet from the trunk, and shook it open. The fabric shimmered in a mottled green-and-brown pattern.

Harry raised an eyebrow. "Camouflage? Seriously?"

Stephen didn't answer. He draped the cover over the car, tucking the edges into the underbrush until the vehicle melted into the jungle floor. Then he crouched low, listening.

Minutes crawled by. The forest whispered with wind and distant bird calls. Harry shifted uncomfortably. "Half an hour of this? You're paranoid."

Stephen's voice was calm, almost cold. "Paranoia keeps you alive."

Before Harry could reply, the low growl of an engine broke the stillness. Headlights flickered through the trees. A dark shape rolled into view... a Bronco, mud-splattered and rugged, slowing as it approached their position.

Harry tensed. "That's him?"

Stephen's hand hovered near his sidearm. "We'll see."

The Bronco stopped. The driver leaned out, grinning beneath a sweat-streaked cap. "Need a lift, gentlemen?"

Harry exhaled in relief. "Uncle Sam."

Stephen gave a curt nod, then motioned to Harry. "Let's move."

They slipped from the shadows and climbed in. Sam gunned the engine, the Bronco surging forward, swallowing the road ahead. Behind them, the jungle closed in, hiding the secrets they left behind.

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The car rumbled along the narrow dirt road, the jungle pressing close on either side. After a few miles, Harry leaned forward, squinting through the windshield. A tall, broad-shouldered man stood by the roadside, a sniper rifle slung across his back. His stance was calm, but there was a sharpness in the way his eyes scanned the horizon.

Harry's pulse quickened. "Who's that?" he asked, his voice low but edged with curiosity.

Sam didn't take his eyes off the road. "That's Kael," he said evenly. "He's been watching us from a hill with his telescope... just in case someone decided to follow."

Harry blinked, glancing back at the man as they slowed to a stop. Kael's presence radiated quiet authority, the kind that didn't need words to make itself known. His jacket was worn, his boots caked with mud, and the rifle on his back looked like it had seen more battles than Harry could imagine.

Sam rolled the window down and gave a short nod. "All clear?"

Kael returned the nod without a word, then stepped forward. In one smooth motion, he swung the rifle off his shoulder and climbed into the back seat beside Harry. The weight of his presence filled the cab like a silent storm.

Harry shifted slightly, stealing a glance at the man who had been the centre of so many whispered conversations. Kael's eyes were sharp, but there was something else in them too... something Harry couldn't quite name.

Harry cleared his throat. "So, you're Kael."

Kael's gaze flicked toward him, cool and assessing. "And you're the kid who fried Jonas."

Harry stiffened. "He attacked me first."

A faint smirk tugged at the corner of Kael's mouth. "Good answer. Never apologize for surviving."

Harry frowned. "I wasn't apologizing."

Kael studied him for a long moment, then gave a slow nod. "Good. Keep it that way."

The silence stretched, heavy but not hostile. Harry's curiosity burned hotter than his nerves. "Why were you watching us from a hill?"

Kael's eyes drifted back to the road behind them. "Because the people hunting me don't quit. And if they follow you, they'll find me too. I was there to make sure none of us end up dead."

Sam's voice cut through the tension from the driver's seat. "Enough talk. Buckle up. We've got a long drive ahead."

The engine growled, and the car rolled forward again, carrying them deeper into the unknown... toward Sam's house, and whatever waited beyond.
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OFGS.

I see that at least one AI company has now been fined for using copyright material for training without acknowledgement. Whether legitimately or not, your chosen chatbot seems to have been trained on the worst kind of cheap bodice-rippers. Please don't let it spoil a good story with more bad writing.
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