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ah.. that makes better since.. i got you to boys injuries or owies backwards...Ben hope they feel better soon.Ryanyou should find out what the Doctor says about your pelvic bone... perhaps you over exended yourself running.. maybereally strained those joints real bad... be careful..sorry i did not post it in your thead... I am on my phone not the computer!
I'm not so good at poetry but I was forced to do it for a school assignment. I came up with this.Ben KlemanItIt flows like a ribbonIt crashes like a cymbalIt is caring and life-givingIt is unforgiving and treacherousIt is a compassionate motherIt is a cruel mistressIt is as powerful as ZeusIt is a restful requiemIt is an allocation of adventureIt is a place of peace, sometimes eternalIt is the seaI personally don't believe it to be very good, but it's the best i could come up with in one night.
Ben, that's a great poem! Start giving yourself a little more credit!
Quote from: Nobody's Confidant on 11/04/2008 13:28:51I'm not so good at poetry but I was forced to do it for a school assignment. I came up with this.Ben KlemanItIt flows like a ribbonIt crashes like a cymbalIt is caring and life-givingIt is unforgiving and treacherousIt is a compassionate motherIt is a cruel mistressIt is as powerful as ZeusIt is a restful requiemIt is an allocation of adventureIt is a place of peace, sometimes eternalIt is the seaI personally don't believe it to be very good, but it's the best i could come up with in one night.Ben .....I love that....It is well written and so eloquent and beautiful!! You are an incredibly talented young writer.. I don, think young should be used to describe your writing... it is beautiful and shows such depth of thought. It is lovely!You are wnderful!!!
Quote from: Carolyn on 11/04/2008 16:44:57Ben, that's a great poem! Start giving yourself a little more credit! Quote from: Karen W. on 11/04/2008 17:04:00Quote from: Nobody's Confidant on 11/04/2008 13:28:51I'm not so good at poetry but I was forced to do it for a school assignment. I came up with this.Ben KlemanItIt flows like a ribbonIt crashes like a cymbalIt is caring and life-givingIt is unforgiving and treacherousIt is a compassionate motherIt is a cruel mistressIt is as powerful as ZeusIt is a restful requiemIt is an allocation of adventureIt is a place of peace, sometimes eternalIt is the seaI personally don't believe it to be very good, but it's the best i could come up with in one night.Ben .....I love that....It is well written and so eloquent and beautiful!! You are an incredibly talented young writer.. I don, think young should be used to describe your writing... it is beautiful and shows such depth of thought. It is lovely!You are wnderful!!!I've given up on trying to be sad, it's impossible with you two around. Thanks.
Its better then mine haha
Nah its personal.