[Karen W.]

Craniel, You are amazing in the way you express your feelings! So much heart inside your words that one could touch and feel your love for one another!  I am so touched by the words you write and look so forward to reading them more often.... I hope you have enjoyed ours also.. It has been such a wonderfull thread, I am glad Neil revived it for us! It is a good way to express feelings that one has inside and needs to share! Thank you for adding such pleasure to my day as well as others who enjoy your works! Have to go, am off to work You Have A great day! I will check back throughout day to see how you all are doing without Moi!!!LOL see ya!Won't say goodbye as that word is becoming a nuisance to me,LOL So see ya!!LOL

Karen

[moonfire]

Ola coma esta cranial!  et es so bien to see you...hehe  Okay, let me interpret Hello, how are you Cranial!  It is so good to see you...I stopped in midsentence here...hehe

Missed your magical ways with words and it doeth justify my soul to see!  

Just jumping on a minute or two as I am blatantly bored...LOL  I never used those two words together before..kinda like it!

"Lo" Loretta

[Karen W.]

HI LO LOretta, Hows it going today... not good to be so blatantly bored! I love words so that is one I use also!! So funny! Beautiful Poem, nice to have cranial back!

Karen

[another_someone]

quote:Originally posted by Carolyn
Cricket Cricket why can't I just kick it.

Could it be because it it not football (soccer) - with cricket, you are supposed to thrown the ball, and hit it with a bat (a bit like baseball - but different).[}:)][]

George

[Gaia]

Karen, your poem for George is beautiful and oh so true. You have a magical way with words and emotions.

Gaia  xxx

[Karen W.]

Thank-you Gaia, George is a great fellow very kind friend!

Karen

[another_someone]

quote:Originally posted by Karen W.

Thank-you Gaia, George is a great fellow very kind friend!

Karen

Oh dear, I'm going to go all shy, and blush, any minute now [][:I][:I][:X]

George

[Gaia]

quote:Originally posted by another_someone

quote:Originally posted by Karen W.

Thank-you Gaia, George is a great fellow very kind friend!

Karen

Oh dear, I'm going to go all shy, and blush, any minute now [][:I][:I][:X]

George

I could tell... but I won't [][]

Gaia  xxx

[Karen W.]

He is such a softy! So sweet, You made me feel comfortable accepting the mod job... I was really worried but not so much now... more things to learn coming up, but am sure I will! Thanks bunches for all the other stuff too!I wouldn't have made you know!! Pretty scarey thought!
If you haven't yet go back and read all the others, George is great on his own in here! he's due to give us a nice piece of work to read.... eh George? Your others were great!!

Karen

[neilep]

Internet Connection you're so slow
I wish you were as fast as a two bit HO ! []


Now that's quality poemage and you all know it !!


On a serious note...I've been reading this thread from the beginning and .I really love everybody poetry here.There are some real gems here !!.............Hadrians is excellent, deep and meaningful !...Karen's is filled with so much passion I feel she is gonna burst...Lo's is profound and very clever ,a pleasure to read....and Cranials...(Ian yes? ).......he don't post much here but I wish he would....I love the way he words his verses....or what ever they're called.

You guys should publish a book or something......

Men are the same as women, just inside out !

[Karen W.]

Look who should publish a book! you should finish and follow through with yours if you can!!

Thanks for the very lovely compliments and I wish you would post yours in here also, as we have all seen your skill.. you and Hadrian are great!!Ian loretta  also.. There are so many others who have added to this thread and it is really wise to read them all. There is a ton of talent buried within these 6 pages! I am proud of every entry.. I stopped writing for over twenty years, and then found the forum and began to enjoy the freedom of expression, something we don't always have.. Sometimes for whatever reason part of ourselves become styfled and we allow those parts to hide away inside... The shame lies in the beauty that can come from the heart but is held locked in, away from those whom may enjoy or even benifit from the expressions of the words and the soul as one allows their real feelings to emerge on to the page in the form of prose and poetry ...such beauty and healing can come with such a freedom.....we should never forget that!

 Neil thanks for pulling this old thread out I for one love it very much!!I am sure others do to.. I am about to add another poem. I am trying to finish it tonight!

Karen

[moonfire]

Blushing...clever and profound...duh, I dunno about thut one...hehe  Neil big enormous pressure squeezing you(interpretation for hug in Francais) Maybe we should strut our "stuff" as a forum in a whole?  LOL  You are pretty deep, intelligent, and comical as well!  ;-)

"Lo" Loretta

[Karen W.]

Yes he is and sure likes to think otherwise of himself! He's a softy too just Like you LO!!!But I am not yelling this time!

Karen

[moonfire]

quote:Originally posted by Karen W.

Look who should publish a book! you should finish and follow through with yours if you can!!

Thanks for the very lovely compliments and I wish you would post yours in here also, as we have all seen your skill.. you and Hadrian are great!!Ian loretta  also.. There are so many others who have added to this thread and it is really wise to read them all. There is a ton of talent buried within these 6 pages! I am proud of every entry.. I stopped writing for over twenty years, and then found the forum and began to enjoy the freedom of expression, something we don't always have.. Sometimes for whatever reason part of ourselves become styfled and we allow those parts to hide away inside... The shame lies in the beauty that can come from the heart but is held locked in, away from those whom may enjoy or even benifit from the expressions of the words and the soul as one allows their real feelings to emerge on to the page in the form of prose and poetry ...such beauty and healing can come with such a freedom.....we should never forget that!

 Neil thanks for pulling this old thread out I for one love it very much!!I am sure others do to.. I am about to add another poem. I am trying to finish it tonight!

Karen

Let's not forget about all that romantic mush that you have virtually painted on a canvas here..I can feel it, see it, breathe it, and live it..aagghh[:0]

"Lo" Loretta

[moonfire]

yeah, I noticed sneaky entry there...lil queenie mod!  LOL

"Lo" Loretta

[Karen W.]

HEE HEE HEE HEE HEE....Sorry Lo You know the truth, you picked a silly romantic to get tangled up with.... Just can't help it.. It just oozes out what can I say?... Be good now friend....LOL

Karen

[moonfire]

innocent seduction

imagining the crescent moon of his lips upon mine,
in-forms nightly wakefulness.
as light dances across his blue eyes,
he remains a vision solely for me.
he names me partner;
without him i would be nameless.
his gleaming, radiant smile enchanting,
he sparks something of joy within.
the way he moves re-turns earthly grace,
creating that deep ensouled peace.
night deep hair falls across his eyes to shade them from knowing,
embracing him but scant fulfillment of my desires.

"Lo" Loretta

[neilep]

WOW LO !!..YES...profound and clever....I luff it Mam !!

Men are the same as women, just inside out !

[moonfire]

Yep, funny, I remembered I wrote this and was filling a bit...uh, never mind...LOL  and was skiddaddled out of the room...hehe  Yes, it was Denny...

"Lo" Loretta

[Karen W.]

Loretta thanks for sharing such a beautifully sweet Romantic poem.. It is very lovely as you are!

Karen