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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #40 on: 14/08/2023 13:09:13 »
Quote from: alancalverd on 14/08/2023 12:49:30
So it's OK to kill an attacker with a shot to the front, but not to wound him in the arse.
Mr Martin was jailed for manslaughter BECAUSE HE KILLED SOMEONE.
He wasn't jailed for wounding someone in the arse.

Do you understand the difference?

He lost his license to own/ use a shotgun because he used the shotgun to do something illegal.

This isn't meant to be complicated.
Are you having a bad day or something?
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #41 on: 14/08/2023 22:36:33 »
The law may recognise a difference, but a gun doesn't. The effect of a shotgun on a human is pretty much a matter of chance.

So it's OK to use a gun for self defence, as long as you don't actually kill anyone. How about waving a flag saying "please go away"? Or would that be considered discriminatory against illiterate attackers?

Whilst I deplore the persistent misuse of the Second Amendment, I think the underlying principle of much US law is sound: if you cross a clearly defined boundary without authority and with apparent intention to do harm, you forfeit all your rights. The absurd UK counterexample was the case of a factory owner who was prosecuted because a burglar fell through his defective roof and was seriously injured.

Quote from: Bored chemist on 14/08/2023 13:09:13
He lost his license to own/ use a shotgun because he used the shotgun to do something illegal.
So if he'd damaged the vehicle with a hammer, would he have been prevented from owning or using a hammer?
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #42 on: 15/08/2023 08:04:18 »
Quote from: alancalverd on 14/08/2023 22:36:33
So if he'd damaged the vehicle with a hammer, would he have been prevented from owning or using a hammer?
IMO, it depends on the main function of each tools, and how high the risk of harming someone unintentionally.
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #43 on: 15/08/2023 16:13:28 »
Quote from: alancalverd on 14/08/2023 22:36:33
So it's OK to use a gun for self defence, as long as you don't actually kill anyone.
Not necessarily.
Which part of
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Quote from: Bored chemist on 13/08/2023 10:18:15
as long as it's "reasonable".
are you struggling with?


Quote from: alancalverd on 14/08/2023 22:36:33
The effect of a shotgun on a human is pretty much a matter of chance.
Not if you know how to use it- that's pretty much the point.
Quote from: alancalverd on 14/08/2023 22:36:33
So if he'd damaged the vehicle with a hammer, would he have been prevented from owning or using a hammer?
After that action, he would not have a license to own a hammer.
But, you don't need one so... no.
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #44 on: 15/08/2023 16:19:19 »
Quote from: alancalverd on 14/08/2023 22:36:33
The absurd UK counterexample was the case of a factory owner who was prosecuted because a burglar fell through his defective roof and was seriously injured.
Can you provide some details please?
It looks like this but... not quite
"Family of burglar who fell through skylight in school break-in fail in their bid to SUE council and now face ?260,000 legal bill "
https://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-3038306/Family-burglar-fell-skylight-fail-bid-sue-council.html

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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #45 on: 16/08/2023 12:50:49 »
Quote from: Bored chemist on 15/08/2023 16:19:19
Quote from: alancalverd on 14/08/2023 22:36:33
The absurd UK counterexample was the case of a factory owner who was prosecuted because a burglar fell through his defective roof and was seriously injured.
Can you provide some details please?
It looks like this but... not quite
"Family of burglar who fell through skylight in school break-in fail in their bid to SUE council and now face ?260,000 legal bill "
https://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-3038306/Family-burglar-fell-skylight-fail-bid-sue-council.html


It seems that hallucination is not an exclusively AI thing.
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #46 on: 27/08/2023 23:07:30 »
Quote from: hamdani yusuf on 08/08/2023 23:47:44
Quote from: Zer0 on 06/08/2023 22:36:25
What if those Kidz are eaten up by a pride of hungry Lions?
Maths don't work in the Jungles!

umm...what if those Ninja powered Adults eat a raw uncooked exotic animal n succumb to a Deadly Virus?

How bout right in the middle of the story book, Suddenly the next page appears fully covered with bold letters sayin...
B
O
O
M
!!!
& the rest of the pages are Blank?
(asteroid struck n planet gone)

ps - Kidz nowadayz are Overexposed to Fairytales & Underexposed to Reality!
Remember the goals of the story.

" Unlike those examples, the genre of my story is science fiction, and the goal is to introduce and socialize /popularize critical thinking, science literacy, and basic ethics to children so they could be equipped with mental tools to face the world in front of them. "

Carnivores, Viruses & Asteroids are Real!

No amount of kung foo judo karatez can dodge a Bullet!

In real life, superheroes Die!

ps - If you Can, Please try to, Keep it Real.
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #47 on: 28/08/2023 07:20:30 »
Quote from: Zer0 on 27/08/2023 23:07:30
" Unlike those examples, the genre of my story is science fiction, and the goal is to introduce and socialize /popularize critical thinking, science literacy, and basic ethics to children so they could be equipped with mental tools to face the world in front of them. "

Carnivores, Viruses & Asteroids are Real!

No amount of kung foo judo karatez can dodge a Bullet!

In real life, superheroes Die!

ps - If you Can, Please try to, Keep it Real.
Science fiction genre let's our imagination free within known natural laws, even before the things depicted there are realized. Video call wasn't a real thing when a science fiction movie depicted it for the first time. Genetically modified supersoldiers aren't a thing yet, afaik, but it's not entirely impossible.
Martial arts may help our heroes to win fights against their opponents. It may also help against some beasts.
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #48 on: 28/08/2023 12:29:46 »
Quote from: hamdani yusuf on 28/08/2023 07:20:30
Martial arts may help our heroes to win fights against their opponents.
Never underestimate the enemy's capacity for reading the same books.
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #49 on: 29/08/2023 10:14:09 »
Quote from: alancalverd on 28/08/2023 12:29:46
Quote from: hamdani yusuf on 28/08/2023 07:20:30
Martial arts may help our heroes to win fights against their opponents.
Never underestimate the enemy's capacity for reading the same books.
The results still depend on practice and talent. Nutrition and health are also contributing factors.

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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #50 on: 29/08/2023 10:19:26 »
Never assume your enemy doesn't feed and drill his soldiers!
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #51 on: 29/08/2023 10:45:37 »
Quote from: alancalverd on 29/08/2023 10:19:26
Never assume your enemy doesn't feed and drill his soldiers!
That's exactly why the hero must train harder and smarter. Learning from experienced fighters can help identify which techniques work, and which don't. Also, which techniques is more appropriate for which situation, or more effective against other techniques.
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #52 on: 30/08/2023 23:31:02 »
Or resort to military intelligence. Study your enemy, then either surprise him with a weapon or tactic that isn't in the book, or negotiate.
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #53 on: 01/09/2023 09:04:12 »
Quote from: alancalverd on 30/08/2023 23:31:02
Or resort to military intelligence. Study your enemy, then either surprise him with a weapon or tactic that isn't in the book, or negotiate.
Those will also be in the story.
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #54 on: 27/09/2024 02:58:41 »
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #55 on: 27/09/2024 02:59:35 »
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #56 on: 27/09/2024 19:32:43 »
Quote from: hamdani yusuf on 27/09/2024 02:58:41
How do you know you're not completely wasting your time trying to become an author? Is it worth all the time and effort you're putting in?

The answer is "not completely", but pretty close. Fewer than 5% of proffered manuscripts get beyond a first reading. You could of course  self-publish, so you'd be wasting less time but more money.
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #57 on: 28/09/2024 12:42:48 »
Quote from: alancalverd on 27/09/2024 19:32:43
Quote from: hamdani yusuf on 27/09/2024 02:58:41
How do you know you're not completely wasting your time trying to become an author? Is it worth all the time and effort you're putting in?

The answer is "not completely", but pretty close. Fewer than 5% of proffered manuscripts get beyond a first reading. You could of course  self-publish, so you'd be wasting less time but more money.

Using AI can reduce wasted time. Putting the writing online for free can maximize impact on people in the world. An example, https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Martian_(Weir_novel)
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #58 on: 09/10/2024 12:31:41 »
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Re: What's your advice on writing a series of story?
« Reply #59 on: 09/10/2024 13:13:18 »
Indeed. But how do you span the gap between being a "published" author (i.e. one whose work is print-on-demand) and a successful author (whose work people seek out because they have heard about it or are intrigued by the cover of the book).

Uploading a file is one thing, marketing your intellectual property is another. And that's where agents, editors and publishers get involved.
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