[Karen W.]

Vast improvement on your last entry Sir! Bravo!!At least Daniel won't spill his coffee!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww !!

Karen Mam.....that's so sweet !!

Ok...me have another go :




Roses are Green, Violets  they glisten
I must remember to visit...my optician !!


Roses are brown, Violets are in my mind
Methinks me must be colour blind  !!

Quality !!

[Hadrian]

Have you seen the witness?
 
Have you seen the judgment?
Is it in the paper?
Will you be in torment?
Exposing your dirty caper
Have you seen the doctor?
Is he into healing?
You'd want to be a rocker
If can't get off the ceiling
Have you seen the prophet?
Has she told the fable?
Empty out your pocket
Put the cash on the table

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
You’re going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

Have you seen the barman?
Is he wearing thin?
You never be a star-man
If you keep on drinking gin
Have you seen the keeper?
Has he shut the gate?
Don’t disturb the sleeper
As he seals your fate
Have you seen the giver?
Has she left her mark?
Washed up on the river
The dogs don’t even bark

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
You’re going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

Have you seen the actor?
Man can you believe?
Trust is not a factor
He paid well to deceive
Have you seen the lighting?
Streak across the sky
It’s no longer freighting
Do you ever wonder why?
Have you seen the teacher?
Are the lesions all taught?
Did I hear you mention?
That the future just been bought

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
You’re going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

Have you seen the reaper?
Smile upon his face?
No point in being a weeper
You stuck in this place
Have you seen the digger?
With his shiny spade?
So what do you figure?
Your debt will be unpaid?
Have you seen the angel?
Playing cards all night
He working out the angle
I hope its worth being right

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
You’re going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

Have you seen the devil?
He giving out the soup
Its time to hit the metal
Its time to fly the cope
Have you seen the maker?
Or do you dear to look
There be no mistake sir
Your name is in his book
Have you seen the woman?
Is she giving birth?
Laid out in the gutter
She buried in the dirt

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
You’re going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

Have you seen the leader?
Has he got his bribe?
Just another bleeder
Going along for the ride
Have you seen the leopard?
Blood on his paw
you will think you’re separate
Until the ice can thaw
Have you seen the runner?
Bet he never gets away
Hadrian got your number
So you have to go another way

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
You’re going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

Have you seen the fighter?
Did I see a gun?
Baby hold me tighter
I’m a dead man on the run
Have you seen the holder?
Are the aces in his hand?
What that on my shoulder?
Can't you see I’m counting sand?
Have you seen the savours?
There coming for our soles
They come in deferent flavours
Just give up digging holes

Have you seen the witness?
Is he coming round?
Better not be pretending
That you can't be found
Have you seen the witness?
You’re going to do the time
Have you seen the witness?
The witness to your crime

 

[Karen W.]

Hadrian.. That is good as if you could put it to music! Maybe you should a guitar maybe.....very nice..indeed!

[neilep]

Yep,

well cool poetry Hadrian....that was a tour de force !!

man ...you're in the zone !!

Luff yours too Karen Mam !


Ok..here goes my effort..




I lay her down, this female scarecrow in the winter
My fetish brought me a scarecrow splinter !!


Well...me is getting better yes ?

*le sigh*

[Carolyn]

you should write a book a limericks! []

[Karen W.]

OOOOH I LOVE THAT ONE!!! Nice very nice...!

[neilep]

There once was a forum from britain
Whose members right here they were smitten
They posted all day
And  they posted all night
Then they read what others had written !!


Ta daaaaaa !!

night night !!!!

[Karen W.]

That is very good and me likes it alot! Your on a roll Sir!LOL

[cranial_implant]

Hi Friends...

Always impressed by the poems here.

here's one I just made.




How do you measure such a thing that is felt ?
It fills you so tight that it tightens your belt
Despair and  a loss may occupy your state
But you know it’s a time that you just have to wait

There’s a bucket and my life feels like it’s in it
Days becomes weeks and you measure each minute
Suffering a sorrow , you’ve been shot by an arrow
Is there joy from someone that I may borrow ?

This plea that I have is answered each time
The bend of my life, becomes a straight line
And where there was low, there soon becomes high
Your friendship the Sun, that brightens my sky

And what started as sad , is now inside joy
This lonely midshipman now sings ‘ ship ahoy’
I thought I was sailing this sea all alone
You took me from lost and showed me my home

[Mirage]

Hi Ian, good to see you online again matey  []
Great poem by the way.

Neil, loving yours as well, you make me smile and laugh so  [:X]

Karen and Hadian, love them, loves them all  []

[Karen W.]

Ian,
  This is a beautiful poem. It moves me so.....So many thoughts and deep feelings involved. Intense, clear thoughts! Words very strong and meaningful! I love this poem!I am glad you posted again as I have missed reading your words. You are articulate and your words hold such meaning.I can see there comes love from inside you to write words of such amazing depth and meaning with a skill of a precision Surgeon! Thank you for the  priveledge of veiwing what you choose to share here in the forum. I am humbled by the beauty and the thought involved in your writing! Thank-you!

[Karen W.]

JOY! JOY! JOY!

Sparkling lights twinkling with the rain, a beautiful season and yet such pain...
Joy abounds in hearts around, my joy is here if I look around!

Songs playing softly inside of the stores, bells ringing boldly out side of the doors!   Give of yourself and give from the start, and love will never be far from your heart!

Oh sing so sweet a song for me, as my heart is submerged in a song for thee!
Come words of love to give to you, from my heart to yours so you'll never be blue.

Seasons come and seasons may go, but my love will be here and continue to grow! Hear me my love and know from the start, in this season you are close to my heart!

I love you my love, my heart almost bursts, with beating so strong it almost hurts! Sing sweetly my love your voice I can hear, as I carry you with me to bring me good cheer!

So looking around me I have found my joy, in the sharing of love from a girl to a boy! So Joy! Joy! Joy I see! For I will always love You, and You will always love Me!

[Mirage]

Awwww that beautiful Karen... I want some I want some  []

[Karen W.]

Ah Daniel That is so sweet! Thanks.. You are another work in progress Friend.. I will work on it!

[Mirage]

Awwwww thanking you me dear  [:X]

[Karen W.]

Your welcome me friend!

[neilep]

Awwwwwwww !!..that's so sweet karen.......I can feel your heart in every sentence !!...truly you is a passionate girly !!

OK..me have another go at this writing thing..



Me saw ewe in the park wearing your frock
I unzipped my flies and showed you my............no !!...stop there !!..LOL

is that quality or wot ?  []

[Carolyn]

Yep, that's what I would call it.  Quality.  Uh huh.

Carolyn

[Karen W.]

You surely do rely on the "shock" factor Don't YOU! LOL What Kind of trousers are you wearing that have two flies, OH MY TWO "*****" WOW!!!!! Know all we need is a nice piccy!! LOL HUGS

[Karen W.]

WHERE ARE THE PICCY"S? YOU MUST NOT STOP NOW!! LOL LOL !