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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #60 on: 28/07/2006 07:16:30 »
Darkness surrounds me here at this time!
I try to pray, but the words I can't find.

My heart is beating so slowly, my breaths are so shallow!
I feel his life over me, just like a shadow!

I try to cry out and my voice no longer helps me, the silence is so loud that my own heartbeat is lost in the darkness that surrounds me!

 I'm Feeling lost and afraid in this dark place I know, So I must see with my mind for my heart won't let go!

I must not give in and allow it to take me,
I must hold on and not let it break me!

 I have to hang on and climb up again, but Please God, Please God, Hold tight to my friend!

                       ......Karen

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #61 on: 28/07/2006 13:21:10 »
How blue can I get, you could ask my heart. Just like a jugsaw puzzle
it's been torn all apart. A million words couldn't say just how I feel
. A million years from now, you know, I'll be loving you still.
The nights are lonely, the days are so sad and I just keep
thinkin' about the love that we had. And I'm missing you and
nobody knows it but me

"Lo" Loretta
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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #62 on: 28/07/2006 17:38:57 »
Bravo Karen!  I wish I could post more, but so many of them are about Denny...it makes me cry...so I will enjoy yours and others...beautiful!!!

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #63 on: 28/07/2006 18:57:25 »


Wonderful my friends both of you, you have excelled yourselves,

but oh so sad.


Love you lots

Helena xxx


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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #64 on: 28/07/2006 19:14:40 »
Thanks Helena!  The pain lessens each day and I will post some more soon..I promise for you romantic peeps...lol

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« Reply #65 on: 28/07/2006 21:06:42 »


Glad you're feeling better-

look forward to some 'more' poems.


Love you lots

Helena  xxx


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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #66 on: 31/07/2006 20:29:33 »
Here is something else for you to enjoy...

Eden in sight

a rhythm in unspoken words she remains
where the ordinary and the dreaming worlds meet in our hearts

bright chance whispers onwards, vestiges of a moment unlooked for she is

as there the skies opening amidst the clouds, she lightens the way as shadows gray retreat

reality begins to affect those visions once tentatively held

wondering should i have traveled to those ephemeral gates of desire
where glory does reside in utter mystery

i have sought paradise and in this keen feeling reside not alone.


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« Reply #67 on: 31/07/2006 20:40:06 »


Nice one Loretta.


Love you lots.

Helena xxx





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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #68 on: 01/08/2006 03:38:05 »
Beautiful Freind, I better get busy !

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #69 on: 01/08/2006 04:47:15 »
Thank you Helena!  I thought I would take you and Karen back of out of your world of reality and have you swing to the otherside of my warped daydreaming mind one day...I wish I still had the poetry when each of my kids were born...but I lost a lot of poetry, short stories I wrote, and much more...from a fire in 1998...I did not write again until 2003 as it was hard to be motivated to do so again...but here I am, writing all over again.  Thanks Karen!  You guys are the best...I may have to write something specific for you guys...hmmm...getting ideas

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #70 on: 01/08/2006 06:23:03 »
Loretta, Writing is such good therapy and it doesn't cost as much as a doctor, all though they have their place!!!!

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« Reply #71 on: 01/08/2006 06:47:32 »
Hey!  LOL  I do need a therapist..it is crazy out in this virtual jungle!  LOL  It does at times soothe my soul...

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« Reply #72 on: 01/08/2006 16:34:39 »
I can tell it does! It is good for me also!

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #73 on: 02/08/2006 04:32:13 »
Don't you just love it!  I wish I wrote more....but Denny wore me out with a bit of a challenge a while back...glad I won too, especially now!  May have to throw out a bit more..but later.  ;-)

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« Reply #74 on: 06/08/2006 18:56:56 »
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY !!!

All you people have written some exemplary stuff !!

YAYYYYYYY !!..I may have to post some serious stuff too !!!...just so that you know I can do ' serious ' too !!

Wonderful !!!

Men are the same as women, just inside out !
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« Reply #75 on: 06/08/2006 19:04:04 »
You can?  Please put us in shock!  LOL  Love ya babes!

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« Reply #76 on: 06/08/2006 19:16:38 »
Loved your old ones to! Even the funny ones!

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« Reply #77 on: 06/08/2006 21:52:27 »
Butterfly Kisses


Today I sent you butterfly kisses gently on the breeze, in hopes they would find you and set your spirit free!

I pressed my lips against my hands and held them out into the wind, each one lifted high above to light down on my own true love!

I felt their touch so lightly land there, upon your tender lips, I knew that moment was sealed in time, forever in that kiss!

Your heart, cring out to be with mine, as well My heart cries out to you! So with every Kiss I send your way, I'm telling you I love you!!

Sending butterfly kisses to surround you as you move through out your day! My heart is completely enraptured by the love that you display!

No words can really tell you, how my heart is all a flutter, that each time I think of you my heart just melts like Butter!

So I'll keep my kisses gently blowing to you upon the breeze, and each time you feel it touching your face you'll know that it is me!

So softly fly my butterfly kisses to my love this day, and bring his love right back to me, in the same, sweet tender way!


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« Reply #78 on: 06/08/2006 23:11:37 »

Karen - that is so beautiful.

Someone once left me a 'goodmorning butterfly mssg' on my laptop,
brought back happy memories.


Love you lots

Helena  xxx




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« Reply #79 on: 07/08/2006 00:14:54 »
This is my first little bit to Denny before we met again after the first time in the UK.

Beginning of Time for You and Me

It is a matter of time before we meet in NY.
You are in love with me you say, and all I can say is wow?
It was hard to believe but, I believe you now.
I can't understand it Denny, but you seem so genuine and true.
Many things I see that are in your heart.
So many mysteries that I am sure you are not ready to part.

Denny why have you chosen me, I haven't a clue?
A great distance between us with an ocean of blue.
I pray that you have not made a big mistake by giving me your heart so soon?
Tell me this is a dream that will come true before next June?

Honey, I am hoping that one day this will be.
A journey into our destiny just for you and me.
I know you have patience to wait for my heart.
And I think it is on it's way to help me start.

A new life perhaps, A new day, A moment in time for us that could be forever.
If it begins with us, then there will not be a never!


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