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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #280 on: 05/09/2006 15:38:00 »


Orca Role

I hold a hand
soft gentle light emit
optic skin lightly draped on bone,

Voice faint just within
the dream still laughing,
at eaten moments devoured
with sharp hunger grasped,

with might eyes filled with tears
drip deep into mine join questions
without form drifting alone
dare not give them name sound or will,

for darkness shall then seep
out of night and creep ever closer
into all thoughts as orca role
just below the quite surface

such ease beguiles their power,
of passage,
simply sit,
in mine,
I hold her hand.


What you do speaks so loudly that I cannot hear what you say.
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« Reply #281 on: 05/09/2006 15:43:18 »
Hadrian That is so lovely! I wish I had the talent you do... Illusive and beautiful.. Thanks for sharing.

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #282 on: 06/09/2006 05:13:09 »
It gave me the "wow effect factor"

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Re: SHARE YOUR WRITING!
« Reply #283 on: 06/09/2006 05:15:44 »
I've not shared my writing til now.  I just get so darn emotional.  Hope it touches you.[:D]

CRICKET

Cricket Cricket why can't I just kick it.
Cricket Cricket in my house
Why cant you be quiet as a mouse
Cricket Cricket I'm touched in the head
Oh my, I wish you'd drop dead
Cricket Cricket your chirping makes my skin crawl
Shut up already, I'm starting to bawl.

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« Reply #284 on: 06/09/2006 05:22:29 »
LOL  I love it Carolyn...bravo!  Very witty!  I remember moments like that...hehe

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« Reply #285 on: 06/09/2006 06:24:24 »
LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL!!!!!! Carolyn I love it!!! You are so funny! It is very deep! Quite honestly witty and I really do love it and You!!! SO CUTE!

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« Reply #286 on: 07/09/2006 04:20:59 »
Genuninely sweet and Kind, says what's on his mind!
Engaging, suave, and debonaire, sweet kind and always there!
Open,honest, quite sweet,he swooped right in and gave me back my feet!
Rescued me from a dark place, and helped put the sun back on my face!
Giving of himself his friendship True, being protective of all I do!
Ever caring, Loyal as a friend can be, This is what he,has given to me!


Karen
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« Reply #287 on: 07/09/2006 04:30:12 »
Bravo Ms Queenie Mod!!!  Love it...I know he will too!

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« Reply #288 on: 07/09/2006 05:25:48 »
I hope so!!

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« Reply #289 on: 07/09/2006 05:51:17 »
You are the best!  He has too!  I could see you virtually zapping each other with your sceptors..hehe

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« Reply #290 on: 07/09/2006 13:42:48 »
Karen - describes George to a T.

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« Reply #291 on: 07/09/2006 16:30:57 »
I think so Carolyn! have a good day!

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« Reply #292 on: 08/09/2006 04:17:32 »
Carolyn Mam .....Love the ' cricket ' poem....LOL.....excellent...luff it !!! "chirp chirp....chirp chirp....chirp chirp......."


Karen Mam....That's such a sweet tribute to George.......what a lovely lady you are and a fine fellow he is too !...I was going to say that I'm reaching for the tissues here but then I thought you lot will just debase the comment to the lowest denomination.......................and you'd be right !!.. [;)]




(note to self: You really must try and step up the game and increase the sophistication of your gutter humour !! )

Men are the same as women, just inside out !
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« Reply #293 on: 08/09/2006 07:07:06 »
Well Kind Sir, Merci Beaucoup, you pay me a very sweet compliment and I really expected it to be twisted up abit, AH... but, just when me thinks me know something about someone they flip the table on me and mix me up!! You are probably right about what we would do with the tissue comment, but you might reach for it anyways as I believe there is a thread in chat that is in need  a good wiping! LOL. OUI?

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« Reply #294 on: 09/09/2006 18:21:06 »
Resist not,
joy peace and fulfilment
 

If there was something I could say
that would take away even a tread of your pain
I would unstitch it million times for million years.

Resist not,
joy peace and fulfilment

 
If I could hold you in my hart today
and protect you from frozen harsh rain
I would soak up a grey ocean of brittle tears

Resist not,
joy peace and fulfilment

 
If time I could somehow undo
that would cease in one moment the unendable
I would stay in that instant of instants for eternity

Resist not,
joy peace and fulfilment

 
Now no more future or past ifs will do
I stand with you enduring the unendurable
Basking in the white light sprite of perpetuity

Resist not,
joy peace and fulfilment


What you do speaks so loudly that I cannot hear what you say.
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« Reply #295 on: 09/09/2006 18:36:51 »
Hadrian, your poems always have my attention as I love them.. Once again you shine like a beacon in the dark and give us once again a thing of beauty! Thank you so much for giving of yourself here!

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« Reply #296 on: 09/09/2006 19:06:14 »
 I love YOU


Hearts entangled by loves desire minds adrift within a fire! So many thoughts just floating round My heart is high but my feet can't touch down....
 
Am I dreaming of this love or is it real? Sometimes I'm not sure just what I should feel...I am floating so high and feeling so good, If you could be here, I know that you would!

I'm confused sometimes how strong I feel about our love, as I know it is real and sent from above! Thinking of you like a hobby you see, as I know that you too are thinking of me!

Possessed by it's appeal and drawn deep within, I have found my heart lies within you my sweet friend! You keep it safe and protected so..my prayers are this, "Please never let it go!"

I love you completely and songs sing it sweetly, our love for the world to see! Its a song that drifts on in the clouds we have drawn, so close to our hearts don't you see!

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!  I LOVE YOU!  I DO.....This is my song and I give it to you!


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« Reply #297 on: 10/09/2006 00:22:07 »
quote:
Originally posted by Karen W.

Genuninely sweet and Kind, says what's on his mind!
Engaging, suave, and debonaire, sweet kind and always there!
Open,honest, quite sweet,he swooped right in and gave me back my feet!
Rescued me from a dark place, and helped put the sun back on my face!
Giving of himself his friendship True, being protective of all I do!
Ever caring, Loyal as a friend can be, This is what he,has given to me!


Karen



Thank you, dear sweet Karen.  Not sure about the suave and debonair, but I shall try and live up to the rest.



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« Reply #298 on: 10/09/2006 00:40:43 »
Your Welcome George and you already have!

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« Reply #299 on: 15/09/2006 17:27:31 »
hello. As usual. No title




Acting out of kindness and you give to me yourself
An endless tapestry of love that gives me wealth
Rich in the soil that the buds of adoration grow
I am a wealthy man of love from head down to my toe

Touching your skin as I grasp at my mind
To see the figure of you in the blackness of the blind
The seed of light is sewn and growth is in the shoots
A musical crescendo and a melody of flutes

Your love is the food to wit all my senses feed
Soaring skyward , endless journey, heart begins to bleed
For such is how we feel so strong
That this love can not be wrong
And if I were to sing a song
It would welcome Nightingales to sing with me


The nights do pine and hurt rules the moment
The miles do fuel the unrequited torment
But hopes are worth to hold and keep
That one day hopes will turn to touch so deep.

Let skin one day touch skin to skin
Let love one day be filled within
Let love be shown and displayed so right
Let close be truth, in day and night




My head is not what it used to be.
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