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Karen W. · « **Reply #320 on:** 17/09/2006 23:52:29 »

Ok loretta I have posted to this three times to tell you I love your romantic sweet poem it is very touching and pretty! This is the third try here goes, copy it first! Whoops delete two leave one, forgot to turn the page!DUH!

Karen

moonfire · « **Reply #321 on:** 18/09/2006 03:48:46 »

Thanks Karen! You are lovely as well! If only...hmmm, just those two words is giving me some ideas to write upon...maybe? LOL

"Lo" Loretta

Karen W. · « **Reply #322 on:** 18/09/2006 04:03:26 »

Loretta you are so funny, Write, Write, Write!!!

Karen

another_someone · « **Reply #323 on:** 16/09/2006 12:38:33 »

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Originally posted by Carolyn
Cricket Cricket why can't I just kick it.

Could it be because it it not football (soccer) - with cricket, you are supposed to thrown the ball, and hit it with a bat (a bit like baseball - but different).[}:)][

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George

Gaia · « **Reply #324 on:** 16/09/2006 12:56:27 »

Karen, your poem for George is beautiful and oh so true. You have a magical way with words and emotions.

Gaia xxx

Karen W. · « **Reply #325 on:** 16/09/2006 13:20:12 »

Thank-you Gaia, George is a great fellow very kind friend!

Karen

another_someone · « **Reply #326 on:** 16/09/2006 13:26:04 »

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Originally posted by Karen W.

Thank-you Gaia, George is a great fellow very kind friend!

Karen

Oh dear, I'm going to go all shy, and blush, any minute now [

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George

Gaia · « **Reply #327 on:** 16/09/2006 13:27:26 »

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Originally posted by another_someone

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Originally posted by Karen W.

Thank-you Gaia, George is a great fellow very kind friend!

Karen

Oh dear, I'm going to go all shy, and blush, any minute now [][:I][:I][:X]

George

I could tell... but I won't [

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Gaia xxx

Karen W. · « **Reply #328 on:** 16/09/2006 13:35:49 »

He is such a softy! So sweet, You made me feel comfortable accepting the mod job... I was really worried but not so much now... more things to learn coming up, but am sure I will! Thanks bunches for all the other stuff too!I wouldn't have made you know!! Pretty scarey thought!
If you haven't yet go back and read all the others, George is great on his own in here! he's due to give us a nice piece of work to read.... eh George? Your others were great!!

Karen

neilep · « **Reply #329 on:** 17/09/2006 00:24:42 »

Internet Connection you're so slow
I wish you were as fast as a two bit HO ! [

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Now that's quality poemage and you all know it !!

On a serious note...I've been reading this thread from the beginning and .I really love everybody poetry here.There are some real gems here !!.............Hadrians is excellent, deep and meaningful !...Karen's is filled with so much passion I feel she is gonna burst...Lo's is profound and very clever ,a pleasure to read....and Cranials...(Ian yes? ).......he don't post much here but I wish he would....I love the way he words his verses....or what ever they're called.

You guys should publish a book or something......

Men are the same as women, just inside out !

moonfire · « **Reply #330 on:** 17/09/2006 04:45:44 »

Blushing...clever and profound...duh, I dunno about thut one...hehe Neil big enormous pressure squeezing you(interpretation for hug in Francais) Maybe we should strut our "stuff" as a forum in a whole? LOL You are pretty deep, intelligent, and comical as well! ;-)

"Lo" Loretta

Karen W. · « **Reply #331 on:** 17/09/2006 06:08:03 »

Yes he is and sure likes to think otherwise of himself! He's a softy too just Like you LO!!!But I am not yelling this time!

Karen

moonfire · « **Reply #332 on:** 17/09/2006 09:09:22 »

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Originally posted by Karen W.

Look who should publish a book! you should finish and follow through with yours if you can!!

Thanks for the very lovely compliments and I wish you would post yours in here also, as we have all seen your skill.. you and Hadrian are great!!Ian loretta also.. There are so many others who have added to this thread and it is really wise to read them all. There is a ton of talent buried within these 6 pages! I am proud of every entry.. I stopped writing for over twenty years, and then found the forum and began to enjoy the freedom of expression, something we don't always have.. Sometimes for whatever reason part of ourselves become styfled and we allow those parts to hide away inside... The shame lies in the beauty that can come from the heart but is held locked in, away from those whom may enjoy or even benifit from the expressions of the words and the soul as one allows their real feelings to emerge on to the page in the form of prose and poetry ...such beauty and healing can come with such a freedom.....we should never forget that!

Neil thanks for pulling this old thread out I for one love it very much!!I am sure others do to.. I am about to add another poem. I am trying to finish it tonight!

Karen

Let's not forget about all that romantic mush that you have virtually painted on a canvas here..I can feel it, see it, breathe it, and live it..aagghh[:0]

"Lo" Loretta

moonfire · « **Reply #333 on:** 17/09/2006 09:09:59 »

yeah, I noticed sneaky entry there...lil queenie mod! LOL

"Lo" Loretta

Karen W. · « **Reply #334 on:** 17/09/2006 16:52:35 »

HEE HEE HEE HEE HEE....Sorry Lo You know the truth, you picked a silly romantic to get tangled up with.... Just can't help it.. It just oozes out what can I say?... Be good now friend....LOL

Karen

moonfire · « **Reply #335 on:** 17/09/2006 23:07:42 »

innocent seduction

imagining the crescent moon of his lips upon mine,
in-forms nightly wakefulness.
as light dances across his blue eyes,
he remains a vision solely for me.
he names me partner;
without him i would be nameless.
his gleaming, radiant smile enchanting,
he sparks something of joy within.
the way he moves re-turns earthly grace,
creating that deep ensouled peace.
night deep hair falls across his eyes to shade them from knowing,
embracing him but scant fulfillment of my desires.

"Lo" Loretta

neilep · « **Reply #336 on:** 17/09/2006 23:30:12 »

WOW LO !!..YES...profound and clever....I luff it Mam !!

Men are the same as women, just inside out !

moonfire · « **Reply #337 on:** 17/09/2006 23:38:44 »

Yep, funny, I remembered I wrote this and was filling a bit...uh, never mind...LOL and was skiddaddled out of the room...hehe Yes, it was Denny...

"Lo" Loretta

Karen W. · « **Reply #338 on:** 17/09/2006 23:48:51 »

Loretta thanks for sharing such a beautifully sweet Romantic poem.. It is very lovely as you are!

Karen

Karen W. · « **Reply #339 on:** 17/09/2006 23:52:29 »

Ok loretta I have posted to this three times to tell you I love your romantic sweet poem it is very touching and pretty! This is the third try here goes, copy it first! Whoops delete two leave one, forgot to turn the page!DUH!

Karen